Bik gayi hamari zindagi----Ritesh modi

by Ritesh Modi on December 11, 2012, 08:17:19 AM
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Kabhi aansu toh kabhi hasi bechi, mohabbat mein ham garibo ne her khushi bechi,
Uski pal bhar ki muskurahat kharidne ke liye, ham ne apni umr tamaam bechi,
Jab unka maan bharne laga ham se, toh apne armaan.o ki laash bhi bechi,
Bik gayi hamari zindagi aur hamari mout bhi, dekho unhone hamari mohabbat bechi….
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«Reply #1 on: December 11, 2012, 08:29:45 AM »
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superb..
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«Reply #2 on: December 11, 2012, 08:33:54 AM »
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Quote from: aqsh on December 11, 2012, 08:29:45 AM
superb..
shukriya janaab....
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«Reply #3 on: December 11, 2012, 11:43:30 AM »
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Nice thoughts....keep on writing...all the best....Raqeeb
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«Reply #4 on: December 11, 2012, 11:52:41 AM »
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Quote from: Satish Shukla on December 11, 2012, 11:43:30 AM

Nice thoughts....keep on writing...all the best....Raqeeb
housla afzai ke liye shukriya...koshish kerta rahunga....Usual Smile
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«Reply #5 on: December 11, 2012, 11:58:52 AM »
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Quote from: Ritesh Modi on December 11, 2012, 08:17:19 AM
Kabhi aansu toh kabhi hasi bechi, mohabbat mein ham garibo ne her khushi bechi,
Uski pal bhar ki muskurahat kharidne ke liye, ham ne apni umr tamaam bechi,
Jab unka maan bharne laga ham se, toh apne armaan.o ki laash bhi bechi,
Bik gayi hamari zindagi aur hamari mout bhi, dekho unhone hamari mohabbat bechi….



good Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #6 on: December 11, 2012, 12:10:45 PM »
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Quote from: adil bechain on December 11, 2012, 11:58:52 AM

good Applause Applause Applause
thank you
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«Reply #7 on: December 11, 2012, 01:07:03 PM »
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good one. Applause Applause
khayaaloN ko kam se kam lafjoN me sametne ki koshish kare.
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«Reply #8 on: December 11, 2012, 01:53:50 PM »
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Wah Wah Wah Wah Wah Wah Zabardast Craetion Ritesh Bhai..
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«Reply #9 on: December 11, 2012, 06:12:12 PM »
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Quote from: mkv on December 11, 2012, 01:07:03 PM
good one. Applause Applause
khayaaloN ko kam se kam lafjoN me sametne ki koshish kare.
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«Reply #10 on: December 11, 2012, 06:13:04 PM »
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Quote from: mkv on December 11, 2012, 01:07:03 PM
good one. Applause Applause
khayaaloN ko kam se kam lafjoN me sametne ki koshish kare.
ji bikul koshish karunga, aap ke sujhaav ke liye dil se shukriya....Usual Smile
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«Reply #11 on: December 11, 2012, 06:13:50 PM »
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Quote from: Kaushal Sharma on December 11, 2012, 01:53:50 PM
Wah Wah Wah Wah Wah Wah Zabardast Craetion Ritesh Bhai..
thank you kaushal bhai...
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«Reply #12 on: December 12, 2012, 12:56:16 AM »
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very nice
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«Reply #13 on: December 12, 2012, 01:54:59 AM »
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v.nice Thumbs UP
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Quote from: nandbahu on December 12, 2012, 12:56:16 AM
very nice
thank you...
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