Can anybody answer this poem in the form of another poem?

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«Reply #30 on: November 29, 2008, 03:41:35 PM »
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Chandulovs ji,

Khuch baaton kay jawab dhonda nahi kertay, bohat say lemhay bila-jawaz hotay hien... aap ka sukhan onhi lehmon ki dien hay... issay shuker say, anayat samjeh k aur lago say hum doston mien bhe bantay rahien duaaien milien gieN.

aap ki tamam sharing bohat aachi hay... keep it up

Duaago..
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«Reply #31 on: November 29, 2008, 04:48:41 PM »
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TO MAI KYA KARTA?
dard de kar v has raha tha WO
to mai kya karta,hame bhula k v khush rah raha tha WO
TO MAI KYA KARTA?

ishq me use khuda banaya,dhoka kha kar v dekho roo na paya,
kami nahi thi zindgi me muskurahato ki hame,magar usne sirf RONE ko kaha
 TO MAI KYA KARTA?
 
 wo laal jora,wo shaadi ki baatein kv yaha,to kavi waha,hoti thi roz mulakaate
 k haatho ki uski mehndi me tha kissi aur ka naam,
 TO MAI KYA KARTA?
 
 NAA YAAR,NAA PYAR,NAA SACHA KHUDA HI MILA,
 ZINDGI K IS PYAR NE HAME AISA DHOKHA DIYA,
 MARNA TO THA HI HAME,MAGAR US ZAALIM NE JEENE KO BOLA,
  to mai kya karta?
 
 
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«Reply #32 on: November 29, 2008, 04:51:00 PM »
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Aarzoo Thi Humen Itnaa Zahe Qismat Mil Jaaye
Saari Duniya Mein Kisise To Mohabbat Mil Jaaye
Jiteji Paayaa Naa Kuch Humne Zamaane Waalon
Ab Janaaze Ko To Rukhsat Ki Ijaazat Mil Jaaye

Poochh Rahe Hain Poochhne Waale
Lekin Hum Batlaayen Kyaa
Daag Yeh Dil Ne Paaye Hain Kaise
Un Ko Hum Samjhaayen Kyaa

Kitne Daagh Hain Is Daaman Mein
Kitne Daagh Hain Maathe Par
Jo Hum Ko Apnaa Sa Lagte The
Sach Hai Hume Apnaaye Kyaa

Jo Apnon Ki Basti Thi Ab Nagari Hai Begaano Ki
Kon Yahaan Hai Sunne Waala
Dil Ki Baat Sunaayen Kyaa

Patthar Ab Kyaa Phhek Rahe Ho Hum, to Pehle Se Hi Zakhmi Hai
Dil Par Kitne Zakhm Lage Hain Chhodo Tumhe Ginwaayen Kyaa.
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«Reply #33 on: November 29, 2008, 04:57:42 PM »
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Chandulovs ji, bohat khooob... good sharing... keep it up..  Clapping Smiley

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«Reply #34 on: December 07, 2008, 02:01:25 PM »
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Nice One Chanduvilas Ji,
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«Reply #35 on: December 07, 2008, 08:23:38 PM »
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Quote from: chandulovs on November 29, 2008, 04:51:00 PM
Aarzoo Thi Humen Itnaa Zahe Qismat Mil Jaaye
Saari Duniya Mein Kisise To Mohabbat Mil Jaaye
Jiteji Paayaa Naa Kuch Humne Zamaane Waalon
Ab Janaaze Ko To Rukhsat Ki Ijaazat Mil Jaaye

Poochh Rahe Hain Poochhne Waale
Lekin Hum Batlaayen Kyaa
Daag Yeh Dil Ne Paaye Hain Kaise
Un Ko Hum Samjhaayen Kyaa

Kitne Daagh Hain Is Daaman Mein
Kitne Daagh Hain Maathe Par
Jo Hum Ko Apnaa Sa Lagte The
Sach Hai Hume Apnaaye Kyaa

Jo Apnon Ki Basti Thi Ab Nagari Hai Begaano Ki
Kon Yahaan Hai Sunne Waala
Dil Ki Baat Sunaayen Kyaa

Patthar Ab Kyaa Phhek Rahe Ho Hum, to Pehle Se Hi Zakhmi Hai
Dil Par Kitne Zakhm Lage Hain Chhodo Tumhe Ginwaayen Kyaa.



iss k jawb mien meri aik Nazam..

Fasla
________

Faslay ko samjho tum
Fasla haqiqat hay
baqi sub faani hay.......
 
Yaqeen kay nager mien bhi
vasvasay he peltay hien
derd ki khlijon ko
waqat paat deita hay
bohat si salibon ko
saber kaat deita hay
Titlion kay honton pey
mosmon kay nagmay bhi
querbaton aur manzilon
aur qeqahon kay peechay bhi
aik he kahani hay
aankh he ka pani hay....
 
Aanay aur jaany kay
faslay mien rehtay ho
tum apni aankh say
bay-sabub he behtay ho
Faslay ko samjho tum
Fasla haqiqat hay
baqi sub faani hay...


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«Reply #36 on: December 08, 2008, 07:31:37 AM »
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Quote from: sjid hadayat on December 07, 2008, 08:23:38 PM
iss k jawb mien meri aik Nazam..

Fasla
________

Faslay ko samjho tum
Fasla haqiqat hay
baqi sub faani hay.......
 
Yaqeen kay nager mien bhi
vasvasay he peltay hien
derd ki khlijon ko
waqat paat deita hay
bohat si salibon ko
saber kaat deita hay
Titlion kay honton pey
mosmon kay nagmay bhi
querbaton aur manzilon
aur qeqahon kay peechay bhi
aik he kahani hay
aankh he ka pani hay....
 
Aanay aur jaany kay
faslay mien rehtay ho
tum apni aankh say
bay-sabub he behtay ho
Faslay ko samjho tum
Fasla haqiqat hay
baqi sub faani hay...


Sajid Hadayat

 

Bohat KHoob Bhaijaan,.
Hum To Kucvh Jawaab De Nahi Sakte,.
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«Reply #37 on: December 08, 2008, 10:42:26 PM »
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Quote from: Jaanasheen on December 08, 2008, 07:31:37 AM
Bohat KHoob Bhaijaan,.
Hum To Kucvh Jawaab De Nahi Sakte,.


Shukria jaanasheen ji,

Khuch Chandulovs ji, bhe comments deitay hamaray jawab per tu aacha lagata..

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«Reply #38 on: December 11, 2008, 03:59:48 PM »
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Are mere habeeb thjhe hua kya hai
Akhir tere is dard ki dawa kya hai
Tuhjko usse thi wafa ki umeed
Jo nahi jante ki wafa kya hai
 
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«Reply #39 on: December 11, 2008, 04:57:57 PM »
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Quote from: john_abraham on December 11, 2008, 03:59:48 PM
Are mere habeeb thjhe hua kya hai
Akhir tere is dard ki dawa kya hai
Tuhjko usse thi wafa ki umeed
Jo nahi jante ki wafa kya hai
 

Nice one John Ji
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«Reply #40 on: December 14, 2008, 03:56:56 PM »
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Diye Hain Jo Zakham Mohabbat Ne Tumhe,.
Un Se Main Bhi Wakheef Hoon Pehle Se,.

Tum Dard Ko Ab Jaan Ne Lage Ho "Shally",.
Mera To Dard Se Taalukh Hai Pehle Se,.

Aa Tehra Hoon Main Dard Ke Us Mukhaam Pe,.
Jahaan Hazaaron Log Shamil The Pehle Se,.

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«Reply #41 on: December 18, 2008, 08:58:32 AM »
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Dard ki dukan lagi nazar aati hain
Har naye gam ke peeche chupi khushi nazar aati hain
Aur woh kitni aasani se bayaan karte hain apna hal-e-dil
Hum to aah bhi bharte hain to aakh bhar aati hain

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«Reply #42 on: December 18, 2008, 09:43:46 AM »
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Dard agar yun bikta to kya baat thi
Gum mein bhi yun khusi nazar aati thi
Haal-e-dil jab hum bayan yun karte hain
To jaane kyun log yun aahan bharte hain

Jab kabhi soochte hain yeh haal-e-dil
To woh jaati  kyun nahi mujhe mil
Aankh bhi meri is kadar bhar jaati hain
To jaane kyun log yun aahan bharte hain
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«Reply #43 on: December 19, 2008, 01:28:53 PM »
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Nice One sajid Bhai And Rajesh Bhai,.
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«Reply #44 on: December 19, 2008, 05:01:23 PM »
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Quote from: sjid hadayat on December 07, 2008, 08:23:38 PM
iss k jawb mien meri aik Nazam..

Fasla
________

Faslay ko samjho tum
Fasla haqiqat hay
baqi sub faani hay.......
 
Yaqeen kay nager mien bhi
vasvasay he peltay hien
derd ki khlijon ko
waqat paat deita hay
bohat si salibon ko
saber kaat deita hay
Titlion kay honton pey
mosmon kay nagmay bhi
querbaton aur manzilon
aur qeqahon kay peechay bhi
aik he kahani hay
aankh he ka pani hay....
 
Aanay aur jaany kay
faslay mien rehtay ho
tum apni aankh say
bay-sabub he behtay ho
Faslay ko samjho tum
Fasla haqiqat hay
baqi sub faani hay...


Sajid Hadayat

 

bahoot khoob Sajid Hadayat ji, bahoot acha likha hai apne.

Good work SG and Rajesh ji
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