Can anybody answer this poem in the form of another poem? -Panna 4:Shayeri for Dard -e- Bewafai

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«Reply #45 on: December 19, 2008, 05:21:25 PM »

Thanks Pooja Ji


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Re: Can anybody answer this poem in the form of another poem?

«Reply #46 on: December 19, 2008, 05:39:39 PM »

Quote from: Jaanasheen on December 19, 2008, 01:28:53 PM

Nice One sajid Bhai And Rajesh Bhai,.

Thanx Jaanasheen Bhai


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Re: Can anybody answer this poem in the form of another poem?

«Reply #47 on: December 25, 2008, 03:43:33 PM »

Quote from: Pooja on December 19, 2008, 05:01:23 PM

bahoot khoob Sajid Hadayat ji, bahoot acha likha hai apne.

Good work SG and Rajesh ji

Bohat bohat shukria Pooja ji...
Sajid Hadayat


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«Reply #48 on: January 03, 2009, 10:46:51 AM »

kya batayenge wo khata tumhari,khatawar jo khud hain
Mat ho bechain khamoshi se unki ab tu....
Wo chahak rehe hain jahan wo gulshan ab aur hai
Unhe nahi ab fikra tumhari,Chahe lelo ab zehar tum tearyeyed

Quote from: diya_barsat on May 07, 2007, 12:46:43 AM

This is poem someone sent me and I want to answer him with a poem can anyone help me out please?

Koi kuch bhi na kahey to pata kya hai
Is bechain khamoshi ki wajah kya hai
Unhain ja key koi kahy hum lay lenge zehar bhi
Woh sirf yeh to bata dein meri khata kya hai


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Re: Can anybody answer this poem in the form of another poem?

«Reply #49 on: January 03, 2009, 12:48:01 PM »

Nice One Again Anaam,.


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«Reply #50 on: February 13, 2009, 07:10:19 PM »

intresting


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«Reply #51 on: July 16, 2009, 03:07:42 AM »

ye khata hum se hui tumhara koi dosh nahin
tumhen dekha samne to raha mujhe hosh nahin

tum bhi jhijhak chhodo aa jao meri bahon me
vrna yunhi likhunga, baithunga khamosh nahin

[pasand aaya ho to mujhe bataen] - wave

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Re: Can anybody answer this poem in the form of another poem?

«Reply #52 on: February 21, 2010, 12:00:51 PM »

Quote from: diya_barsat on May 07, 2007, 12:46:43 AM

khata to bas itni thi tumhari,
ninde churali thi hamari,
taras rahe the bas ek jalak ke liye,
kab miljaye takdir hamari,
jee rahe the jinda laash bane,
kyoki hamare sine me to jaan thi tumhari.


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Re: Can anybody answer this poem in the form of another poem?

«Reply #53 on: March 31, 2010, 10:02:37 AM »

Quote from: punam on May 08, 2007, 06:12:33 AM

Hi diya-barsat ji...
iska ans to depend karta hai..aap ka unke sath jo rista hai uspe... aur aap kis type ka reply dena chahte ho... kai ans ho sakte hain iske to... but abhi ye dekho aap...aisa nahi k ye aap ko acha lage...but kosish ki hoon..kooch...thanx..

ye katha hamse huyi tumhara koi dosh nahi
kya kare dil ki baat juba pe jo aati nahi..
khud jal sakte ham tumhare khushi ke liye
tumhe yun tarapte hum dekh sakte nahi...

sorry agar kisi ko pasand nahi aayi to pls be jijhak bata dena...

meri pahli lines is site per, apki lines ne mazboor kiya kuch likhne ko..dekhiye shayad apki lines ka zawaab inmein ho....
pyaar karne walo se khata kabhi koi hoti nahi....
bat dil mein laakh chipa lo juba chup rahti nahi...
khud jal kar mujhe til til marne ka andaaz yeh tumhara....
sukha deta hai ashko ko, ankho se bhi barsaat ab hoti nahi....


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Re: Can anybody answer this poem in the form of another poem?

«Reply #54 on: March 31, 2010, 10:10:45 AM »

Wow very beautiful thread.aap sabhi ne bahut khoob likha.excellent


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«Reply #55 on: August 05, 2010, 05:33:13 AM »

Quote from: punam on May 08, 2007, 06:12:33 AM

Quote from: diya_barsat on May 07, 2007, 12:46:43 AM


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Re: Can anybody answer this poem in the form of another poem?

«Reply #56 on: November 01, 2010, 12:12:28 PM »

Tum jan kar bhi anjaan ho
Meri bchain khamoshi ki waijah pata hai tumeh
Unehain ja kar keh do kahi
tumhari khata hai maray pas aaye kabhi nahi


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Re: Can anybody answer this poem in the form of another poem?

«Reply #57 on: May 13, 2015, 03:38:29 AM »

Koi kuch bhi na kahey to pata kya hai
Is bechain khamoshi ki wajah kya hai
Unhain ja key koi kahy hum lay lenge zehar bhi
Woh sirf yeh to bata dein meri khata kya hai
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Aap wajah khata ki pu6 rahe hain
Hum wajah wafaa ki dhund rage the.
Bus itna aa fark tha wafa or khata main.
me tinka tha or tum parvaana dhund rahe the..


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Re: Can anybody answer this poem in the form of another poem?

«Reply #58 on: May 13, 2015, 05:29:37 AM »

Quote from: NETRAPAL on May 26, 2007, 08:26:55 AM

tootein hain lafz,ashQon ki abb baraat chali
tu kya jaane tujhse mujhe kya saughat mili
teri vada baddkhilafi ne mujhe mein khamoshi bhari
keh toh diya hai,lekin sun le "Zehar" peena asaan nahi

nahi mushkil hai ishak me peena jahar bhee aye musafir
abhi lagta hai ishak kee rah par kadam pade nahi hai aapke
jahar hee peete hai aashik, kurbani jab mangta hai ishak aye musafir

netra...

Hi Diya ,
unhi ki poem ke sbdo se answer dene ki koshish ki shaayad aapko pasand aaye ya na aaye,nhi jaanta पेश है :-

कुछ कुछ भी ना कहें,हमे सब कुछ पता है
इस बेचैन खमोशी की बजह भी हमे पता है
जहर की जगह अमृत मिला देगे भी तुम्हे
पर बता दे हमसे नाराजगी क्या है

आर के रस्तोगी


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Re: Can anybody answer this poem in the form of another poem?

«Reply #59 on: May 13, 2015, 06:57:40 AM »

Hi Diya-Barsat जबाब देने का तभी मजा है जब आप उसकी कविता के शब्दों में से शब्द निकल कर जबाब दे| शब्दों में से शब्द निकल लेना ही कविता व जबाब की खुबसूरती है|मैने उसके/उसकी कविता के शब्दों को इस्तेमाल किया है और उसे माकूल जबाब भी दे दिया|शायद आपको पसंद आये या न आये मै नही जनता |पेश है:-

कोई कुछ भी ना कहे,हमे सब कुछ पता है
इस बेचैन खामोशी की बजह भी हमे पता है
जहर की जगह अमृत भी पिला देगे तुम्हे
पर मुझे बता दे आप हमने खता की क्या है

आर के रस्तोगी


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