<>*Chal diya*<>

by *KasaK*....Dil Ki on September 15, 2010, 07:39:30 AM
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<>*Chal diya*<>

Jate hue mud mud k dekhte rahe hum
Wo fer k muh ko bas chal diya

Use jata dekh kar rok bhi na sake hum
Wo zakhm kuch aisa dekar chal diya

Ghut kar reh gai awaaz hamare gale me hi
Wo  humpar ilzam laga kar chal diya

Usse jine ki khwaish bhi na kar sake hum
Jo hume jeete jee maut dekar chal diya......!!!!!
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«Reply #1 on: September 15, 2010, 10:08:35 AM »
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kasak di kya dard bayan kiya he aap ne....
kisiki yaad dila di....
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Wo yu muhh ferr kar chal diya,
jese usne kabhi hame apna samja or chaha bhi kabhi na ho.....


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«Reply #2 on: September 15, 2010, 10:12:16 AM »
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Bahut khoob Anamika Ji

Isi liye to kisi shayar ne kaha hai

Pardeshiyon se na ankhiyaan milana
Pardeshiyon ko hai ik din jaana
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«Reply #3 on: September 15, 2010, 11:35:00 AM »
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Bahaut khoob Anamika di.! Applause
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«Reply #4 on: September 15, 2010, 12:50:11 PM »
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masoom si mohabbat ki masoom si awaaz... bahut khoob likha hai aapne... sweet sweet...!!!
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

sabke raaste hain alag , sabki manzil hai alag,
jaate huye musafir ko kaun rok paaya hai bhala,

par ye na bhoolo ki duniya bahut jyada badi nahi,
jise milna hoga wo zindagi me mil jaayega kahin,

tum bhi yahin ho, wo bhi yahin is duniya me hai,
chalte chalte usse mulaqaat ho jaayegi fir kahin,

par kya pata tab ye haalaat na rahe aur na ye waqt,
wo kisi aur ki chahat ho aur tum bhi ho aur kahin,

ho sake to rok lo use ab bhi waqt hai tumhaare paas,
ek baar jaane ke bad wo tumhaara na reh jaaye kahin...
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«Reply #5 on: September 18, 2010, 11:34:29 AM »
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Just wonderful response Kapil

Ik aaye ik jaaye musafir
Yeh duniya ek saraaye hai
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«Reply #6 on: September 18, 2010, 08:47:04 PM »
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thank you so much Rajesh ji...!!!

Just wonderful response Kapil

Ik aaye ik jaaye musafir
Yeh duniya ek saraaye hai

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