Chhupanaa bhi nahi aasaaN.... ParwaaZ

by ParwaaZ on October 12, 2012, 06:20:05 PM
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Ahel e bazm ko aadaab O salaam....!!!


Mili na manzil na saathi na rahguzar milaa, WahaaN hi ruk gaye hum jahaaN bhi shajar milaa, Diyaa usko humne sab kuch jise talab thi jiski, Aye Khudaa kyuN hume kuch dene wala na koi bashar milaa, Dil ki taNg galiyaaN aur bheed qayaamat kii, Kitna chaleNgi koii daastaaN phir mohobbat kii............. Usual Smile



Aik tazaa kalaam aap sab ki nazar... !






Chhupanaa bhi nahi aasaaN, Bataanaa bhi nahi aasaaN
Ye zakham e ishq hai pyare, Dikhaana bhi nahi aasaaN

Mohobat ko bayaN karna, zamane meiN KahaN mumkin
Ye likhnaa bhi nahi aasaaN, likhaana bhi nahi aasaaN

Ghadii bhar saath rahte haiN, charagoN ki taraH roshan
Bujhe woH jo diye dil keY, Bhulaana bhi nahi aasaaN

KaheN kaise bhalaa unse, kyu taNha taNha rahte haiN
Gazab dhaata ho jab koyiN, nibhaana bhi nahi aasaaN

Jo rishtoN kii nazaaqat hai, wo samjha hii nahi koyiN
Tute jab dil kisii kaa phir lagaana bhi nahi aasaaN

Jalaa kar dil tadap ne se, bhulaa kar chain lete haiN
Jo rootha ho koyiN khud se, Manaana bhi nahi aasaaN

Kate hai par pariNdoN keY, ude bhi toH bhalaa kaise
Ho keY Parwaaz ab hum ko, to jaana bhi nahi aasaaN

                   

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«Reply #1 on: October 12, 2012, 06:48:52 PM »
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Ahel e bazm ko aadaab O salaam....!!!


Mili na manzil na saathi na rahguzar milaa, WahaaN hi ruk gaye hum jahaaN bhi shajar milaa, Diyaa usko humne sab kuch jise talab thi jiski, Aye Khudaa kyuN hume kuch dene wala na koi bashar milaa, Dil ki taNg galiyaaN aur bheed qayaamat kii, Kitna chaleNgi koii daastaaN phir mohobbat kii............. Usual Smile



Aik tazaa kalaam aap sab ki nazar... !






Chhupanaa bhi nahi aasaaN, Bataanaa bhi nahi aasaaN
Ye zakham e ishq hai pyare, Dikhaana bhi nahi aasaaN

Mohobat ko bayaN karna, zamane meiN KahaN mumkin
Ye likhnaa bhi nahi aasaaN, likhaana bhi nahi aasaaN

Ghadii bhar saath rahte haiN, charagoN ki taraH roshan
Bujhe woH jo diye dil keY, Bhulaana bhi nahi aasaaN

KaheN kaise bhalaa unse, kyu taNha taNha rahte haiN
Gazab dhaata ho jab koyiN, nibhaana bhi nahi aasaaN

Jo rishtoN kii nazaaqat hai, wo samjha hii nahi koyiN
Tute jab dil kisii kaa phir lagaana bhi nahi aasaaN

Jalaa kar dil tadap ne se, bhulaa kar chain lete haiN
Jo rootha ho koyiN khud se, Manaana bhi nahi aasaaN

Kate hai par pariNdoN keY, ude bhi toH bhalaa kaise
Ho keY Parwaaz ab hum ko, to jaana bhi nahi aasaaN

                   


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«Reply #2 on: October 12, 2012, 08:05:20 PM »
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NICE ONE

Manoj Jee Aadaab!

bahut bahut shukriyaa janab.. Thanks for apriciate my work..
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«Reply #3 on: October 12, 2012, 10:34:40 PM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause  bahut khoob Parwaaz ji... maine to aapke is peshkash ko us gaane me tone me gaa bhi liyaa...


chhipaana bhi nahi aataa, jataanaa bhi nahi aataa
humein tumse mohabbat hai, bataanaa bhi nahi aataa

One of my favourite songs... aapke is peshkash ko padh ke wo gaanaa yaad aa gayaa aur aapke is khoobsurat se peshkash ko us gaane ke dhun me gaa liyaa... bahut khoob likha hai aaapne...!!!
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«Reply #4 on: October 13, 2012, 12:37:22 AM »
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Parwaaz bhaai main ye ghazal padh ke kitnaa khush huaa hoon bayaan naheen kar saktaa app bahut khush rahen dheron daad aur aur mubaarak baad agat mere bas men hotaa to har sher par rau detaa to bas ek hee denaa mere bas men hai filhaaal
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«Reply #5 on: October 13, 2012, 02:29:52 AM »
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brilliant parwaz sahbh...

khush rahiye, aabad rahiye

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«Reply #6 on: October 13, 2012, 02:57:57 AM »
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LAJAWAB PARWAZ SIR BAHUT HI UMDA BEHTRAREEN QALAAM..........HAZARON DAAD AUR MUBARAKBAAD QABOOL FARMAYEIN..... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #7 on: October 13, 2012, 03:13:37 AM »
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waaah parwaaz sahab bohut umda peshkash ek rau apke liye kabool kijiye
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«Reply #8 on: October 13, 2012, 03:21:31 AM »
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waaahh waaah bahut khub parwaazji...
 Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #9 on: October 13, 2012, 03:24:23 AM »
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Parwazz bhai aadaab
Bahut bahut bahut khoob likha aapne.
Dil daad qubool farmaayen.
aapki shakshiyat se thoda hatkar hai ye kalaam, par aapne khoob likha, padhkar dil khush ho gaya..
aise hi likhte rahiye.. Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #10 on: October 13, 2012, 04:51:13 AM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
Deta hoon  dheron mubarkavad aapko aur  dil se deta hoon
Socha aur sochta hi raha ki apki tareef karoon to kaisse karoon
Kiya kiya likhoon  kiya na likhoon  agra likhoon to kiase likhoon
Parwaaz ji Magar jab likhne laga to laga  likhna nahin aasaan
Kiyon ki har sher itna tareef-e-kabil hai ki tareef karna nahin aasaan
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«Reply #11 on: October 13, 2012, 05:58:32 AM »
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Ahel e bazm ko aadaab O salaam....!!!


Mili na manzil na saathi na rahguzar milaa, WahaaN hi ruk gaye hum jahaaN bhi shajar milaa, Diyaa usko humne sab kuch jise talab thi jiski, Aye Khudaa kyuN hume kuch dene wala na koi bashar milaa, Dil ki taNg galiyaaN aur bheed qayaamat kii, Kitna chaleNgi koii daastaaN phir mohobbat kii............. Usual Smile



Aik tazaa kalaam aap sab ki nazar... !






Chhupanaa bhi nahi aasaaN, Bataanaa bhi nahi aasaaN
Ye zakham e ishq hai pyare, Dikhaana bhi nahi aasaaN

Mohobat ko bayaN karna, zamane meiN KahaN mumkin
Ye likhnaa bhi nahi aasaaN, likhaana bhi nahi aasaaN

Ghadii bhar saath rahte haiN, charagoN ki taraH roshan
Bujhe woH jo diye dil keY, Bhulaana bhi nahi aasaaN

KaheN kaise bhalaa unse, kyu taNha taNha rahte haiN
Gazab dhaata ho jab koyiN, nibhaana bhi nahi aasaaN

Jo rishtoN kii nazaaqat hai, wo samjha hii nahi koyiN
Tute jab dil kisii kaa phir lagaana bhi nahi aasaaN

Jalaa kar dil tadap ne se, bhulaa kar chain lete haiN
Jo rootha ho koyiN khud se, Manaana bhi nahi aasaaN

Kate hai par pariNdoN keY, ude bhi toH bhalaa kaise
Ho keY Parwaaz ab hum ko, to jaana bhi nahi aasaaN

                  



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«Reply #12 on: October 13, 2012, 06:01:07 AM »
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Ahel e bazm ko aadaab O salaam....!!!


Kate hai par pariNdoN keY, ude bhi toH bhalaa kaise
Ho keY Parwaaz ab hum ko, to jaana bhi nahi aasaaN

                  



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«Reply #13 on: October 13, 2012, 10:17:06 AM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause  bahut khoob Parwaaz ji... maine to aapke is peshkash ko us gaane me tone me gaa bhi liyaa...


chhipaana bhi nahi aataa, jataanaa bhi nahi aataa
humein tumse mohabbat hai, bataanaa bhi nahi aataa

One of my favourite songs... aapke is peshkash ko padh ke wo gaanaa yaad aa gayaa aur aapke is khoobsurat se peshkash ko us gaane ke dhun me gaa liyaa... bahut khoob likha hai aaapne...!!!


Kapil Jee Aadaab!


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Aate rahiye... saath banaye rakhiye..
Shaad O aabaad rahiye..

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«Reply #14 on: October 13, 2012, 10:22:13 AM »
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Parwaaz bhaai main ye ghazal padh ke kitnaa khush huaa hoon bayaan naheen kar saktaa app bahut khush rahen dheron daad aur aur mubaarak baad agat mere bas men hotaa to har sher par rau detaa to bas ek hee denaa mere bas men hai filhaaal

Saini Sahaab Aadaab!


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