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Teri yaadon ka karwaan bhulaya nahi bhulta
chot aur dard chupaya nahi chupta..
tune kyon ki mujhse iss kadar bewafaai..??
mera yeh udaas chera chupaaya nahi chupta..
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«Reply #1 on: June 12, 2005, 06:19:56 PM » |
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Wonderful ...
Dil se lagi nahin, humney isse dil se lagaya hai !
Mohabbat kee nahi, Mohabbat ko paya hai !!
Ab hume kahan tha yeh shubah !
Tune hume apna kar hume jhoota dilasa dilaya hai !!
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«Reply #2 on: June 12, 2005, 06:24:57 PM » |
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bahut avccha riccky ji............................................... ..............
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«Reply #3 on: June 12, 2005, 06:38:15 PM » |
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Wah Wah Ricky and Amrita...aap dono nee bahut aacha likha hai!!
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«Reply #4 on: June 13, 2005, 04:35:06 AM » |
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shukriya ! shukriya..
Hum toh sirf ek adne se insaan hai,
Koshish hai ke kalam se asmaa choo lein !!
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«Reply #5 on: June 13, 2005, 06:30:14 AM » |
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Iss be-dard zamane ne hume
ek baar hasaaya aur sau baar rulaya hai
dil ke dilase de kar gharwaalon ne
iss jism mein rooh ko paaya hai...
bahut bhaut shukriya doston!!
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«Reply #6 on: June 13, 2005, 01:17:05 PM » |
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Teri yaadon ka karwaan bhulaya nahi bhulta
chot aur dard chupaya nahi chupta..
tune kyon ki mujhse iss kadar bewafaai..??
mera yeh udaas chera chupaaya nahi chupta.. wah nice work amrita  |
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«Reply #7 on: June 13, 2005, 02:17:39 PM » |
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Teri yaadon ka karwaan bhulaya nahi bhulta
chot aur dard chupaya nahi chupta..
tune kyon ki mujhse iss kadar bewafaai..??
mera yeh udaas chera chupaaya nahi chupta.. wah nice work amrita thank you!! |
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«Reply #8 on: June 14, 2005, 02:19:46 AM » |
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Diljala hoon bahut main saari duniya jaalaadoon
Uski raahaon ki saari roshni bhi bujha doon
Mujhko chahe zamana aur use yeh dil chahe
Mujhko thukra ke kaise chain se woh rah paayi
Mujhko tanhayee dase, mujhpe duniya yeh hanse
Pyaar ki hai ruswai
Yaad sau baar kiya tha par woh na aayi
Thoda saa pyaar kiya tha ab bhi hai baaqi
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«Reply #9 on: June 14, 2005, 07:58:31 AM » |
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Diljala hoon bahut main saari duniya jaalaadoon
Uski raahaon ki saari roshni bhi bujha doon
Mujhko chahe zamana aur use yeh dil chahe
Mujhko thukra ke kaise chain se woh rah paayi
Mujhko tanhayee dase, mujhpe duniya yeh hanse
Pyaar ki hai ruswai
Yaad sau baar kiya tha par woh na aayi
Thoda saa pyaar kiya tha ab bhi hai baaqi meri zindagi mein roshni laoge tum iss umeed mein baithe hum gumsum apna adhura pyaar pura karne kab aaoge tum iss umeed mein baithe hain hamdam... |
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«Reply #10 on: June 14, 2005, 09:10:28 AM » |
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Kashish hai uss koshish mein jo humney kee mohabbat pane mein !
Yeh wahi Kashish hai jo kare humey majboor pyar nibhane mein !!
Humey yakin tha k tum doge saath humara is raah per,
Lekin tum toh bade hee khudgarz nikle vada-e-ishq nibhane mein !!
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«Reply #11 on: June 14, 2005, 09:18:59 AM » |
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kya baat hai....muddato baad darshan aap ke hue hai...wo bhi ek jazbaato se bhari entry...bahut khoob Ricky!!!
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«Reply #12 on: June 14, 2005, 09:23:43 AM » |
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nice ricky ji.....................
apna haal bata kar chaley gaye...
sare zakham dikha kar chaley gaye.
mera haal-e-dil na poocha.......
soh tohmat laga ke chale gaye.
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«Reply #13 on: June 14, 2005, 09:56:26 AM » |
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kya baat hai....muddato baad darshan aap ke hue hai...wo bhi ek jazbaato se bhari entry...bahut khoob Ricky!!! Just a big smile ... |
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«Reply #14 on: June 14, 2005, 09:59:12 AM » |
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Hmm..
Haq hume gar mila hota jo kuch keh payein !
toh woh jaan pate kya guzra yahan iss simt bhi ..
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