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Beete zamane ki baaton ko
Kahin peeche dafan kar do
Meri ruh bhi uth na paye
Aisa koi kafan kar do
Aakhon mein ab uska chehra
In aakhon ko band kar do
Saanse uske naam se chalti
Is fiza mein zaher bhar do
Karo kuchh aisa main sab bhool jayun
Ya phir agle pal hi is dhool mein mil jayun.
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«Reply #1 on: January 15, 2008, 08:46:12 PM » |
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wah kaya baat hai.. bahoot dard hai apki shayri main.. good creation DHJ ji!!
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«Reply #2 on: January 15, 2008, 09:03:21 PM » |
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Thx Pooja.....per kabhi nahi socha tha ki haalat itna dard denge !
Regards.
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«Reply #3 on: January 15, 2008, 09:13:35 PM » |
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toota dil rooh torr jaata hai
bana banaya khayalo ka gharonda Rond jaata hai
dafan hi ho jaate armaan, befaai ke jhonke se
Umar-bhar ke liye, zakh-o-Nishan chor jaata hai
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«Reply #4 on: January 15, 2008, 09:38:56 PM » |
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Bahut Khoob !
Kaash meri umr bas itni ho jaye....
Abhi aasoon bhi na sookhen.....aur ye poori ho jaye.
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«Reply #5 on: January 15, 2008, 09:47:09 PM » |
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do line mai itna dard bayan kar gaye app to...
bahoot khoob DHJ ji!!!
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«Reply #6 on: January 15, 2008, 09:54:18 PM » |
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Aap logon ke aage apni kya bisaat.
Thx Pooja ji.
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«Reply #7 on: January 15, 2008, 09:56:38 PM » |
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dard hai dard yah kisi se bada chota nahi hota
likhte hai dard yaha, jise sehna her kisi ke bas ka nahi hota
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«Reply #8 on: January 15, 2008, 10:03:14 PM » |
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Har kisi ke bas ka nahi hota....manta hum main
Hai khuda bhi kitna kamzor....jaanta hun main
Hota usmein itna jigar toh yun na dekhta
Hamari jagah khud is jasbe ko jee ke dekhta.
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«Reply #9 on: January 15, 2008, 10:12:36 PM » |
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wah kaya baat hai...
hai jis main jajba sahne ka
wo hi to yah dukh paata hai
her kisi ke hisse main
kaha yah payar atta hai
khilte hai wo hi dil
jinko murjhana atta hai
kar le shikayat tu bhi khuda se
agar issi mai tujhko, sabar atta hai!!
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«Reply #10 on: January 15, 2008, 11:25:26 PM » |
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Nice Jeet ji and pooja di.. lovely lines both of u
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«Reply #11 on: January 15, 2008, 11:26:31 PM » |
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Aashiqon ki baradi ka jashn kuch aisa hota hai
Zamana un per hasta hai aur Khuda un per rota hai
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«Reply #12 on: January 15, 2008, 11:28:10 PM » |
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khuda kaise ro sakta hai
yah dard ussi ka diya hota hai
zamane ki jab thokar lagati hai
dard kitna tanha hota hai
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«Reply #13 on: January 16, 2008, 01:38:53 AM » |
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Sab kuch loot kar khali kar diya aaj "Roja" ko
Magar abhi bhi chain nahi hai is zalim zamane ko
Jo mere lahoo ke katron per bhi nazar jamaye hai
Apne ghar ki sunhari rangoli sajane ko
Kaat dala mere armano ko kisee kasayi ki mafiq
Khud hi dikhaye raah-e-kaja khud hi aaye hai bachane ko
(kaja = maut)
Lootne ke baad sab mera kehte ab bhi karz bakhi hai
Ab jaan hi bachi hai pass mere bakhi ka karz chukane ko
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«Reply #14 on: January 16, 2008, 05:35:14 AM » |
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Ab aur yun akele roya nahi jaata...
Kaash koi apne daaman mein samet le...
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