Dard aur badta gya......!!

by chitra on March 29, 2006, 06:31:35 AM
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Dekhke dil unhe bar bar chahta gya
jaan ke raha bekhabar hume tadpaata gya

haar gyi koshishe unme chaht jagane ki
wo har koshish ko hansee mein udata raha

kai sher likhe usne bhi isqh mein meri trah
karke naam kisi aur ke mujhe rulata gya

sochti hoon kar loon door khud ko unse
ke ankhe band kee to wo paas aata gya

hasrat_e_didaar mein nam ho gyi ankhe
har khyaal uska mujhe bejaar karta gya

us JANU ko aitbaar ho jaye meri wafa pe
dil khamaushi mein bhi unse pyar jataata gya

karke minnte bhi wo aaj mera na huaa
rone ka mann aaj bhri mahfil mein mera huaa

kisne kahaa likhne se kam hota hai gum
likha aaj miane to dard aur badta gya
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«Reply #1 on: March 29, 2006, 11:57:34 AM »
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CHITRA JI......BAHUT KHOOB....nihayat hi khubsoorat kalam likha hai aapne....wah!


GAR MUJH PAR ETABAAR KIYA HOTA,
TO AAPKO JANE KYA DIYA HOTA......
GHAMO KI GAHARI ME AGAR CHOD AATE HUM,
TO BHARI MAHAFIL ME HUMEN NA RULAYA HOTA....
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«Reply #2 on: March 29, 2006, 12:14:52 PM »
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Shukria Vicky jee

karte aap pe aitbaar gar aap pahle mil gye hote
ab to dil hi unka ha gya warna hum apka kar gye hota
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«Reply #3 on: March 29, 2006, 12:24:50 PM »
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Dekhke dil unhe bar bar chahta gya
jaan ke raha bekhabar hume tadpaata gya

haar gyi koshishe unme chaht jagane ki
wo har koshish ko hansee mein udata raha

kai sher likhe usne bhi isqh mein meri trah
karke naam kisi aur ke mujhe rulata gya

sochti hoon kar loon door khud ko unse
ke ankhe band kee to wo paas aata gya

hasrat_e_didaar mein nam ho gyi ankhe
har khyaal uska mujhe bejaar karta gya

us JANU ko aitbaar ho jaye meri wafa pe
dil khamaushi mein bhi unse pyar jataata gya

karke minnte bhi wo aaj mera na huaa
rone ka mann aaj bhri mahfil mein mera huaa

kisne kahaa likhne se kam hota hai gum
likha aaj miane to dard aur badta gya


Chitra

Shayad kuch bahut gehri baat kar gayi tum yahan !

Rajbir
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«Reply #4 on: March 29, 2006, 12:35:28 PM »
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Rajbir jee....

Aaj bahoot dino baad fir dil maaus ho gya
kisi ki berukhi se ek baar fir ro gya
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«Reply #5 on: March 29, 2006, 01:01:08 PM »
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Shukria Vicky jee

karte aap pe aitbaar gar aap pahle mil gye hote
ab to dil hi unka ha gya warna hum apka kar gye hota


bahut khoob chitra ji.....

HAR DARD KO E-JAAN, MAIN SINE ME CHIPA LOON,
KAANTE TERI RAAHON ME, PALKON PE SAJA LOON....
EATBAAR THA PAHALY, AB BHI KARTA HOON,
JEE CHAHE TUJHE ROZ HI KHWABON ME BULA LOON.....
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«Reply #6 on: March 29, 2006, 03:28:43 PM »
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Dekhke dil unhe bar bar chahta gya
jaan ke raha bekhabar hume tadpaata gya

haar gyi koshishe unme chaht jagane ki
wo har koshish ko hansee mein udata raha

kai sher likhe usne bhi isqh mein meri trah
karke naam kisi aur ke mujhe rulata gya

sochti hoon kar loon door khud ko unse
ke ankhe band kee to wo paas aata gya

hasrat_e_didaar mein nam ho gyi ankhe
har khyaal uska mujhe bejaar karta gya

us JANU ko aitbaar ho jaye meri wafa pe
dil khamaushi mein bhi unse pyar jataata gya

karke minnte bhi wo aaj mera na huaa
rone ka mann aaj bhri mahfil mein mera huaa

kisne kahaa likhne se kam hota hai gum
likha aaj miane to dard aur badta gya


wChitra ji, kaya kamal ka likha hai, ek ek shabd dard mai dooba hua hai. aor kay alikhu... bas chand lines deemag mai aai hai, chahugi ki app kam se kam inhe teen baar jaroor parre:

Bewafaao ki hai adat, isse milta hai skoon unko
Tu dena chahe (skoon unko) to kar izhaar, warna ho ja ab pichy

Koi koshish, teri chahat aor yah wafa,
Na ayegi koi bhi kaam, mujko is baat ka hai pata

Likha jo bhi, wo sab tha jhooth, apne app ko na tarpa
Kuch to tha shayari ka janoon, aor kuch tha ek chutpatta maja

Socha hai jo tune, bahoot thik hi socha hai
Na kar ankhein band ab, magar, khol kar is duniya ki tu ho ja

Hasrat-e-Ishaq ko, ek bewafa per na kar nisaar
Jo kare tujse wafa, ussi se sirf karna payaar

Yah payaar hai, koi minnat koi zor is per chalta nahi
Ro le ajj tu dil khol kar, per uske baad siskana nahi

Likhane se agar dard mit jata, kitabein likh deti Pooja
Yah to hai dil bahalane ki baty, magar such, Dard mai dil bahlta nahi!!!!
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«Reply #7 on: March 29, 2006, 03:31:18 PM »
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superbbbbb Chitra sis...itna dard....kamaal ka likha hai aapne...very touching
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«Reply #8 on: March 29, 2006, 03:34:27 PM »
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Chitra, Pooja, Vicky, Majid

Excellent work by all of you !

Aap sab bahut he achcha likhte hain..

Shabash !

Rajbir
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«Reply #9 on: March 29, 2006, 03:37:03 PM »
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nice 2 alllllllll

seeli hui chingariyo ko dabaye hue hai,
khud ko khuda se chhupaye hue hai,

bura kuchh dikhta nahi, sholo ki kya khata hai,
nazro ko nazro se churaye hue hai,

sukuu hi sukuu(silence) hai, ke ghum dikhta nahi aas paas,
hausla dekho, ke kabr par eemarat basaye hue hai,

jism ko jannat ki chahat tthi, so zameer neeche
zameen pe hai,
nigahe had jaha tak hai, hum dozakh ko duniya
banaye hue hai.....
(majid)



bahoot khoob Vicky Akela ji!!! Majid last four lines bahoot hi kaamal ki likhi hai, apki poem parr kar jo man mai ayya wo hi likh rahi hu:

bheege patto (leaves) main, khud ko chupaye hui hai
sard hawao se, kis tarah khud ko bachaye hui hai

her bar shola dabaya, kahin khud ke ander
lubo per phir bhi, muskaan banaye hui hai

andhera hi andhera charo taraf, kuch bhi najar nahi atta
phir bhi dekho honsla, kaise sari duniya se takraaye hui hai

kabhi kisi ek chahat mai, khud ko  bhigoya tha Pooja
Ajj tak uski kabar ko, dil mai chupaye hui hai!!!

bheege patto (leaves) main, khud ko chupaye hui hai
sard hawao se, kis tarah khud ko bachaye hui hai
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«Reply #10 on: March 29, 2006, 03:44:10 PM »
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Pooja

Fantastic !

Rajbir
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«Reply #11 on: March 29, 2006, 04:54:00 PM »
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Thanks Rajbir veer ji and Majid!!!
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«Reply #12 on: March 29, 2006, 05:31:55 PM »
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SHUKRIYA RAJBIR JI bahut hosla milta hai aapse...aur shukriya POOJA JI...
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«Reply #13 on: March 29, 2006, 05:37:16 PM »
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ZINDGI TERI KAMI KHALTI HAI,
UMRA SHAM-O-SHAHAR SE DHALTI HAI....

MANA KI TUM JALE MOHABBAT MAIN,
SHAMA BHI SATH SATH JALTI HAI......

MERI PALKON KE DARMIYAN BAITHO,
AARZOO KARWATEN BADALTI HAI....

MUJHKO SAUNPI HAI KHUDA NE JANNAT,
PAR TERI HI KAMI KHALTI HAI....

ZINDGI AAPKE BINA HAMDAM,
MAUT SE KAM NAHI NIKALTI HAI.......
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«Reply #14 on: March 30, 2006, 07:03:38 AM »
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shukria VICKI JI, POOJA JI,MAJID JI, RAJBIR JI ,NIKKI JI..........!!!!
apne sath deke dard kam kar diya......thanks a lot..
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