Dard Se Jud Gaya Rishta………Koyal:Shayeri for Dard -e- Bewafai

KOYAL46

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Dard Se Jud Gaya Rishta………

Dard se jud gaya he ab rishta mera
Mil gaya hai usse dil ka pata mera

Kyu Maanta hai aaj paraaya mujhe tu
Dil mai ab bhi mere rehta hai tu he tu

Teri he fikra me din-raat ek karti hoon
Ashqon ki sarita mein bahaya karti hoon

Khata na teri ya meri thee samajh o-sanam
Kismat ke likhe se apni mohbbat hai haaree

Dard se jud gaya he sakhee ab rishta mera
Mil gaya hai eiss dard ko dil ka pata mera


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kritika sharma

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Re: Dard Se Jud Gaya Rishta………Koyal

«Reply #1 on: November 29, 2010, 12:25:38 PM »

nice.....bahut acha likha hai aapne !
Dard se aesa rista mat jodna ki humari tarah aapko bhi iski aadat ho jaaye
phir ..kisi khushi ki aahat bhi aapko raas naa aaye!

Quote from: KOYAL46 on November 29, 2010, 12:12:27 PM


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brokenbyluv

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Re: Dard Se Jud Gaya Rishta………Koyal

«Reply #2 on: November 29, 2010, 01:28:38 PM »

Nice sweets..


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KOYAL46

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Re: Dard Se Jud Gaya Rishta………Koyal

«Reply #3 on: November 29, 2010, 01:50:27 PM »

Kidhar hai meri "Nice Sweets"......
Bhejo Dehli ki mast meethai....Ya Aagre ka kesar Petha....
Ab tou Deewali ki bhi sab sweets khatam hone ko aayee.....
Thanks a lot Geet-di.....

Quote from: brokenbyluv on November 29, 2010, 01:28:38 PM

Nice sweets..


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Re: Dard Se Jud Gaya Rishta………Koyal

«Reply #4 on: November 29, 2010, 02:04:26 PM »

4th row bhot achha or 100% sachha hai...
bst lines hai yar really..
bhot achhi hai peshkas..
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dard se jud gaya hai ab rista mera
aasu hi ban betha jaise ab farista mera!!
darr hai ke ab ye rista bhi na chhutt jaye
baad iske fir dil ka saath kon nibhaye!!
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AbhiTamrakar

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Re: Dard Se Jud Gaya Rishta………Koyal

«Reply #5 on: November 30, 2010, 06:40:07 AM »

goody hai par or thoda sa kam karne k jarurat hai lines par...

kuchh apne andaz me:

unka kehena hai maine nhai nibhai mohabbat yaron
apne to din nikle armaano ko pairon tale dabate huyee~

or yun mujhse dard ki baat karte he woh "Abhi"
mujhe dekh ke apne rukh ko bar bar chhupaate huyee~


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Rajesh Harish

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Re: Dard Se Jud Gaya Rishta………Koyal

«Reply #6 on: December 05, 2010, 01:01:34 AM »

Quote from: KOYAL46 on November 29, 2010, 12:12:27 PM

Bahut khoob Ji


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KOYAL46

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Re: Dard Se Jud Gaya Rishta………Koyal

«Reply #7 on: December 23, 2010, 01:57:02 PM »

Kritikaji....padhne aur saraahne k liye aapka saadhuwaad.... icon_flower

Quote from: kritika sharma on November 29, 2010, 12:25:38 PM

nice.....bahut acha likha hai aapne !
Dard se aesa rista mat jodna ki humari tarah aapko bhi iski aadat ho jaaye
phir ..kisi khushi ki aahat bhi aapko raas naa aaye!


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