Dard-e-bewafai

by guddurampuri on January 06, 2011, 06:11:40 PM
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ye chand lines meri pichli shayari ke hoobahu hai, mene 4th line ko thoda alag salike se pesh karne ki justujoo ki hai...



Un Silsilo Ka Ye Sila De Jaate Hain Log!
Puchkaarte Hain Pahle,Fir Tilmila Jaate Hain Log!!
Acche Khase Akhlaq Ko Halaaq Karte Hain Log!!!
Hume Gulaam Bana ke,Apna Inquilab Karte Hain Log!!!!
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«Reply #1 on: January 06, 2011, 06:34:11 PM »
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Aadaab Janab!

Kafi achche ashaar kahe hai... Bade hi sidhe
aur saaf lafzoN meiN tanz kiye janab bahut khoob..

Likhate rahiye
Aate rahiye.......
Khush O aabaad Rahiye...
Khuda Hafez.... Usual Smile         


Quote from: guddurampuri on January 06, 2011, 06:11:40 PM
ye chand lines meri pichli shayari ke hoobahu hai, mene 4th line ko thoda alag salike se pesh karne ki justujoo ki hai...



Un Silsilo Ka Ye Sila De Jaate Hain Log!
Puchkaarte Hain Pahle,Fir Tilmila Jaate Hain Log!!
Acche Khase Akhlaq Ko Halaaq Karte Hain Log!!!
Hume Gulaam Bana ke,Apna Inquilab Karte Hain Log!!!!
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«Reply #2 on: January 07, 2011, 04:28:00 AM »
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Shukriya Janaab......Aise Hi Honsla Badhate rahiyye...Hum Koshish Karte Rahenge!!!

Allahafiz!!!
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«Reply #3 on: January 13, 2011, 07:04:57 AM »
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bahut khooob guddu ji

kya baat hai.
 hello2 hello2 hello2
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«Reply #4 on: January 13, 2011, 11:16:26 AM »
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khub gudduji khub
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«Reply #5 on: January 14, 2011, 04:42:30 AM »
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shukriya aap sabhi ka....
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«Reply #6 on: January 14, 2011, 04:58:13 AM »
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bahut umda Rampoori ji
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thanx
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