Dekhte hai hum....

by thycreator on June 10, 2007, 06:58:42 AM
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paani
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«Reply #15 on: June 13, 2007, 07:49:42 AM »
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Bhaut hi accha likha hai aapne creatorrrrrrrr
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thycreator
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«Reply #16 on: June 13, 2007, 08:38:22 AM »
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Thanks a lot paani ji........Usual Smile
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Rajbir
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«Reply #17 on: June 13, 2007, 09:09:40 AM »
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Arre bhai aaj kuch dekhne ko nahi mila :cry:
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thycreator
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«Reply #18 on: June 13, 2007, 06:44:20 PM »
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Rajbir ji....

Kyu dikhayen hum zakhm-e-dil, dunia hansti hai,
Meri iss bebasi par ye yuhi taane kasti hai,
Ki thi humne muhabbat, koi julm toh nahi kiya,
Kyu nakam hum mane hamari jo bhi hasti hai...
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«Reply #19 on: June 13, 2007, 07:14:18 PM »
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Amit (shayad ji na lagane ka zikr kiya tha tumne :D)

Waise to main likhna nahi jaanta, magar tumhari post ne majboor kiya chand panktiyan likhne ko

Mohabbat mein zakhm-e-dil aksar hota hai
Uski yaad mein din raat dil rota hai
Duniya to hai tamashbeen hasegi
Tumhari bebasi par zaroor taane kasegi
Chand saath beete lamho ki yaadein saath hai
Baaki ki zindagi beetane ke liye aap jaise doston ka saath hai..:D

This is not shayari or anything, just acknowledgment of what you just wrote.
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«Reply #20 on: June 13, 2007, 07:57:36 PM »
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ha ha ha................raj........good one.....

Kisko ummeed hai yahan dunia se wafa ki,
Humko toh mere apne ne hi loot liya hai,
Kya gum karen jo zamana nahi hamara hua,
Jisko toot kar chaha jab usne chod diya hai....sad5
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«Reply #21 on: June 13, 2007, 08:05:04 PM »
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Quote from: "Rajbir"
Amit (shayad ji na lagane ka zikr kiya tha tumne :D)

Waise to main likhna nahi jaanta, magar tumhari post ne majboor kiya chand panktiyan likhne ko

Mohabbat mein zakhm-e-dil aksar hota hai
Uski yaad mein din raat dil rota hai
Duniya to hai tamashbeen hasegi
Tumhari bebasi par zaroor taane kasegi
Chand saath beete lamho ki yaadein saath hai
Baaki ki zindagi beetane ke liye aap jaise doston ka saath hai..:D

This is not shayari or anything, just acknowledgment of what you just wrote.


toooooooooooooo gooooooooooood Veer ji!!

Hum hai sath aor umarbhar sath nibhayege
Itne ache Insaan (Veer ji ) ko kaise chord payege
Dil jo roya apka, sath hum bhi ro jayege
Duniya ka her waar, wapis mord jayege
Mohabaat ka jakham, mana khatam na kar payege
Yakinan iske dard mai, apka poora sath nibhayege
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«Reply #22 on: June 13, 2007, 08:12:00 PM »
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wah pooja..........goodie.........Usual Smile

Hum chahat se wafa nibahyen, wo dil tod wafa kare,
Jab maayane hi alag alag hai toh phir koi kya kare...Winking
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«Reply #23 on: June 13, 2007, 08:54:58 PM »
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Amit very true....apni to yehi kahani hai jo tum bayaan kar rahe ho :wink:

Pooja lo aaj tumhara gila shikwa bhi door kar deta hoon ki kabhi tumhe reply nahi kiya.
Kisi ko yaad karte hue yeh likh raha hoon. sad5

Chaha tha jise beinteha is jahaan mein
Chord kar chal di akeli na jaane kis rah pe

Jeena uske bin hai dushwar hua
Ae Khuda kyun mujhe usse pyar hua

khamoshi se chala ja raha hoon akela
Kaise main kho baitha apna saathi albela? :cry:
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«Reply #24 on: June 13, 2007, 09:14:46 PM »
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Ha ha ha Raj.............accha kiya pooja ki shikayat dur kar di.....

Uska dar chod kar, ab hum kahan jayen,
Muhabbat ki hai toh kaise na usko nibhayen.
Agar muh mod le toh hum bhi bewafa honge,
Ab toh khwaish hai yahin, jaan ab meri jaaye...
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«Reply #25 on: June 13, 2007, 09:24:46 PM »
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Darr lagta hai bhai Pooja se :wink:

Pyar kiya hai to uska aakhri anjaam bhi dekhna hoga
Kis din laut kar aati hai woh ab yeh dekhna hoga :D
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«Reply #26 on: June 13, 2007, 09:38:37 PM »
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wah wah...........

Muhabbat mein mila gaya humne ye janmo ka inaam,
Ek khata bhi na ki humne, sare aam hue badnaam,
Ishq mein iss kadar khoye ki ab bhi khud ko khoje hain,
Ek bewafa ke sajde kiye darshan humne charo dham...
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paani
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«Reply #27 on: June 14, 2007, 08:27:16 AM »
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nice addition rajbir & pooja ji
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thycreator
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«Reply #28 on: June 14, 2007, 04:27:52 PM »
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Thanks a lot Paani ji..........Usual Smile
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thycreator
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«Reply #29 on: June 14, 2007, 04:55:51 PM »
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Muhabbat ke sataye hue ab hum kahan jayen,
Kisse dikhlayen apna dil, kisse aarzu samjhayen,
Yahan har mod par sitamgar milte hai humko,
Kab talak hum iss masoon dil ko bachayen..
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