Dil Jala Kai Ke Hai Roshni______________Baadal

by baadal102 on November 09, 2007, 06:25:17 AM
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DIL JALA KAI KE HAI ROSHNI JIS KE RAHON MAI,
UNHI RAHO MAI DHOKA KHAYA HAI BAAR-BAAR,
HAR RISTEY KO THUKRAYA JIS PYAR KE LIYE,
USE PYAR MAI DHOKA KHAYA HAI BAAR-BAAR,
MAA KI LAURI BAAP KA DULAR BHULA JIS KE LIYE,
USE SE DHOKA KHAYA HAI BAAR-BAAR,
( KAR KAI AITBAAR HUSN PE,
KHAYA HAI DHOKA BAAR-BAAR.)

BAADAL
sorry for mistakes.
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«Reply #1 on: November 09, 2007, 03:25:36 PM »
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Good one Badal!!!

Apka Yoindia mai sawagat hai!!
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Maira
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«Reply #2 on: December 11, 2007, 01:34:33 AM »
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Really nice one...appki shayari se inspiration kuch alfazon main bayaan karne ki gustakhi maaf ho...

Kartey nahi roshni pyaar ki raahon main dil ko jalakar
Banatey nahi rishtey naye pyaar ke,,Maa baap ko bhulakar
Uff!kar diya aap ne bhi husn pe aitbaar...
Husn toh khud ek dhoka hai
bas guzar jaata hai ek mausam jawani main aakar!!!
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«Reply #3 on: December 11, 2007, 02:32:12 AM »
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Really nice one...appki shayari se inspiration kuch alfazon main bayaan karne ki gustakhi maaf ho...

Kartey nahi roshni pyaar ki raahon main dil ko jalakar
Banatey nahi rishtey naye pyaar ke,,Maa baap ko bhulakar
Uff!kar diya aap ne bhi husn pe aitbaar...
Husn toh khud ek dhoka hai
bas guzar jaata hai ek mausam jawani main aakar!!!


Wah Maira... bahut khoob.
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Roja
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«Reply #4 on: December 11, 2007, 02:33:21 AM »
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DIL JALA KAI KE HAI ROSHNI JIS KE RAHON MAI,
UNHI RAHO MAI DHOKA KHAYA HAI BAAR-BAAR,
HAR RISTEY KO THUKRAYA JIS PYAR KE LIYE,
USE PYAR MAI DHOKA KHAYA HAI BAAR-BAAR,
MAA KI LAURI BAAP KA DULAR BHULA JIS KE LIYE,
USE SE DHOKA KHAYA HAI BAAR-BAAR,
( KAR KAI AITBAAR HUSN PE,
KHAYA HAI DHOKA BAAR-BAAR.)

BAADAL
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sorry for mistakes.


No sorry... very well expressed lines Baadal ji Daad hazir hai.
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baadal102
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«Reply #5 on: December 16, 2007, 04:16:05 PM »
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koi dil mai utar jaata hai kaise,
nazron mai sama jaata hai kaise,
ye aaj tak nahi samaj paya mai,
koi use dil ko cheer jaata hai kaise.
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baadal102
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«Reply #6 on: April 07, 2008, 11:02:51 AM »
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pooja ji aap ka reply kaha hai



Baadal
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