do hisson main baant diya hai

by mauj on November 04, 2013, 09:56:34 PM
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do hisson main baant diya hai ...
pyar k naam  pe ka.tal kiya hai...
umar bhar k liye...
tadapnne ko chhod diya hai...
majboori ban jati hain nazdeekian..
uljhi guththi bna diya hai diya hai...
tadpe dil k lafz nahi hain..
adhoori gazal ka naamdiya hai..
kuchh bhi poora  na kar paon..
esa dil ka hashar kiya hai ....
mauj nahi abb kabhi mauj main..
jinda kabar main gaad diya hai....
jinda kabar main gaad diya hai .... tearyeyed tearyeyed
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«Reply #1 on: November 04, 2013, 09:59:07 PM »
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just heart touching
no words ..
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«Reply #2 on: November 04, 2013, 10:16:54 PM »
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some times i try to express wat i feel Usual Smile
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«Reply #3 on: November 04, 2013, 10:21:32 PM »
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Quote from: mauj on November 04, 2013, 10:16:54 PM
some times i try to express wat i feel Usual Smile

shayarie naam hi hai jazbaat ko baya karne ka
koie bhi waqt hu lafzo may parro dene ka
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«Reply #4 on: November 04, 2013, 10:25:15 PM »
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Quote from: mauj on November 04, 2013, 09:56:34 PM
do hisson main baant diya hai ...
pyar k naam  pe ka.tal kiya hai...
umar bhar k liye...
tadapnne ko chhod diya hai...
majboori ban jati hain nazdeekian..
uljhi guththi bna diya hai diya hai...
tadpe dil k lafz nahi hain..
adhoori gazal ka naamdiya hai..
kuchh bhi poora  na kar paon..
esa dil ka hashar kiya hai ....
mauj nahi abb kabhi mauj main..
jinda kabar main gaad diya hai....
jinda kabar main gaad diya hai .... tearyeyed tearyeyed



your poem touched my heart. welcome to Yoindia
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«Reply #5 on: November 04, 2013, 10:46:01 PM »
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so nice lines
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«Reply #6 on: November 05, 2013, 08:53:30 AM »
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good
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«Reply #7 on: November 08, 2013, 08:40:00 PM »
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Quote from: FARE on November 04, 2013, 10:21:32 PM
shayarie naam hi hai jazbaat ko baya karne ka
koie bhi waqt hu lafzo may parro dene ka
yes u r right
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«Reply #8 on: November 08, 2013, 08:40:55 PM »
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Quote from: sksaini4 on November 05, 2013, 08:53:30 AM
good
thank u very much
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«Reply #9 on: November 08, 2013, 08:42:16 PM »
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Quote from: RAJAN KONDAL on November 04, 2013, 10:46:01 PM
so nice lines
thank u
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«Reply #10 on: November 08, 2013, 08:55:41 PM »
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nicee liness... beautifulll...
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