~~:duniyaaN ko uskaa naam bataaye baithe haiN:~~

by ek_tamanna on February 04, 2011, 10:49:18 AM
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my 1st poem............


Dil ki raaz dil meiN chhupaaye baithe haiN
deewaangi meiN khud ko rulaaye baithe haiN

jo ghumta rahta hai khayaloN ki duniyaN meN
mohabbat ki aas unhi se lagaaye baithe haiN

kar lete hain hum do pal dostoN se baat agar
vo sochte hain ki unhe bhulaaye baithe haiN

na samjhe koi, chahat ke juzbaat ko fir bhi
hum sar-e-bazaar dil ko lutaaye baithe haiN

yeh ishq koi souda nahi jo kar leiN kisi se
log kahte hai hum sabko aazmaaye baithe haiN

hai kisi ke wafaa pe hum ko itnaa yaQeeN ke,
duniyaaN ko uskaa naam bataaye baithe haiN
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nirala
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«Reply #1 on: February 04, 2011, 10:56:31 AM »
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aapke First poem ka mujhe besbri se intezaar tha.
aur Aaghaaz aisa shandaar hai to Aaage to aur bhi behtareen hoga.
khubsurat ehsaas aur zazbaat ki bayani Tamanna ji.
bahut khub
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thanx
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«Reply #2 on: February 04, 2011, 11:05:39 AM »
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Tamanna jee Aadaab!

Yo India meiN aapka suwagat hai... Usual Smile
Badi khubsurat kalaam kahi hai aapne... Usual Smile

Aapke khayaal aur ashaaroN ki gehrai kafi umdaa rahi..
          


Quote from: ek_tamanna on February 04, 2011, 10:49:18 AM
my 1st poem............


Dil ke raaz dil meiN chhupaaye baithe haiN
deewaangi meiN khud ko rulaaye baithe haiN

Achcha matla hai daad Usual Smile          

jo ghumta rahta hai khayaloN ki duniyaN meN
mohabbat ki aas unhi se lagaaye baithe haiN

Kia baat hai achcha khayaali sawaal hai.. daad          

kar lete hain hum do pal dostoN se baat agar
vo sochte hain ki unhe bhulaaye baithe haiN

Oye hoye kia kahen bahut khoob..
Daad Usual Smile          

na samjhe koi, chahat ke juzbaat ko fir bhi
hum sar-e-bazaar dil ko lutaaye baithe haiN

Bahut khoob achcha sher hai... Usual Smile          

yeh ishq koi souda nahi jo kar leiN kisi se
log kahte hai hum sabko aazmaaye baithe haiN

Waah waah waah jee kia khoob kahi behad khoob tanz kiya hai daad daad daad Usual Smile          

hai kisi ke wafaa pe hum ko itnaa yaQeeN ke,
duniyaaN ko uskaa naam bataaye baithe haiN

Waah jee waah bahut khoob daad daad daad Usual Smile          


Masha Allah aap behad khoob likhti hai Tamanna jee..

Likhati rahiye..
Aati rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...
Khuda Hafez.... Usual Smile          
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brokenbyluv
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«Reply #3 on: February 04, 2011, 12:44:43 PM »
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Apki pehli poem k liye dhero mubarakbaad..bahut khoob tamanna ji..
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«Reply #4 on: February 04, 2011, 12:45:05 PM »
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Quote from: ek_tamanna on February 04, 2011, 10:49:18 AM
my 1st poem............


Dil ki raaz dil meiN chhupaaye baithe haiN
deewaangi meiN khud ko rulaaye baithe haiN

jo ghumta rahta hai khayaloN ki duniyaN meN
mohabbat ki aas unhi se lagaaye baithe haiN

kar lete hain hum do pal dostoN se baat agar
vo sochte hain ki unhe bhulaaye baithe haiN

na samjhe koi, chahat ke juzbaat ko fir bhi
hum sar-e-bazaar dil ko lutaaye baithe haiN

yeh ishq koi souda nahi jo kar leiN kisi se
log kahte hai hum sabko aazmaaye baithe haiN

hai kisi ke wafaa pe hum ko itnaa yaQeeN ke,
duniyaaN ko uskaa naam bataaye baithe haiN

Bahut khoob ehsaas likhe hai aapne ... tamanna Ji ! chaahe beshaq pehli rachnaa ho ... bahut accha likha hai ... !

Very Nice Creation ... dil se daad !!!!!!!!
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Rishi Agarwal
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«Reply #5 on: February 04, 2011, 03:26:30 PM »
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Tamanna Ji Aapki Ye Poem Bahut Hi Pyari Hai Padhkar Humein Bahut Accha Laga... Aap Humesha Yu HI Likhte Rahna Aur Khush Rhana
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«Reply #6 on: February 05, 2011, 03:55:38 PM »
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Bahaut bahaut khoob jee..
Apki pehli post bahaut achi hai..
Bas yunhi likhte rahiye..
Khush rahiye..!

 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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ek_tamanna
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«Reply #7 on: February 11, 2011, 12:47:40 PM »
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aap sabka bahut bahut sukriya
meri poem ko pasand karne keliye ......
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«Reply #8 on: February 13, 2011, 09:05:10 PM »
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Quote from: ek_tamanna on February 04, 2011, 10:49:18 AM
my 1st poem............


Dil ki raaz dil meiN chhupaaye baithe haiN
deewaangi meiN khud ko rulaaye baithe haiN

jo ghumta rahta hai khayaloN ki duniyaN meN
mohabbat ki aas unhi se lagaaye baithe haiN

kar lete hain hum do pal dostoN se baat agar
vo sochte hain ki unhe bhulaaye baithe haiN

na samjhe koi, chahat ke juzbaat ko fir bhi
hum sar-e-bazaar dil ko lutaaye baithe haiN

yeh ishq koi souda nahi jo kar leiN kisi se
log kahte hai hum sabko aazmaaye baithe haiN

hai kisi ke wafaa pe hum ko itnaa yaQeeN ke,
duniyaaN ko uskaa naam bataaye baithe haiN


bahut bahut bahut khoob tamanna ji
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