DUR JAANE-JAAN HO GAYE

by jannatjahan on March 13, 2009, 12:27:33 PM
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WO MUJHSE DUR KUCH IS KADAR HUE
KI KHUD SE BHI JUDA HO GAYE
TUTA DIL BESAK HAMARA
MAGAR WO KHUD SE BHI KHAFA HO GAYE
UNHE SAQ THA SATH HAMARA RAAS AAYEGA NA UNHE
MAGAR KYA BAAT HUEE WO AUR BHI JYADA GAMJADA HO GAYE
YUN BHI NA THI ZINDAGI ME HAMARI RANGINIYAAN
KHUSMIJAJ UNKI ADAYEIN AAJ KYUN GUMSUDA HO GAYE
HUME NAHI CHHAHAT KI MAANGE BHEEKH UNKI ULFAT KI
KAREEB TO NA AA SAKE WO HAMARE
AAJ MAGAR DUR JAANE JAAN HO GAYE.
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«Reply #1 on: March 14, 2009, 01:52:31 PM »
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Achha kalaam hai aapka...jannatjahanji... Applause

Kuchh majbooriyen ayse thi k jaana pada dur tumse
Kaise soch liya tumne saath tumhara raas nahi aaya
Mile jo pyaar tera to pa lu janaat e jhaaN main
Teri hi pnahoon mein ab, krunga zindgi ko basar main
N ho mayus tu ki virah k baadal ab chhatne lage
Sach hai tujh se dur hum khud se hi juda ho gaye ...
WO MUJHSE DUR KUCH IS KADAR HUE
KI KHUD SE BHI JUDA HO GAYE
TUTA DIL BESAK HAMARA
MAGAR WO KHUD SE BHI KHAFA HO GAYE
UNHE SAQ THA SATH HAMARA RAAS AAYEGA NA UNHE
MAGAR KYA BAAT HUEE WO AUR BHI JYADA GAMJADA HO GAYE
YUN BHI NA THI ZINDAGI ME HAMARI RANGINIYAAN
KHUSMIJAJ UNKI ADAYEIN AAJ KYUN GUMSUDA HO GAYE
HUME NAHI CHHAHAT KI MAANGE BHEEKH UNKI ULFAT KI
KAREEB TO NA AA SAKE WO HAMARE
AAJ MAGAR DUR JAANE JAAN HO GAYE.
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«Reply #2 on: March 14, 2009, 02:28:38 PM »
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WO MUJHSE DUR KUCH IS KADAR HUE
KI KHUD SE BHI JUDA HO GAYE
TUTA DIL BESAK HAMARA
MAGAR WO KHUD SE BHI KHAFA HO GAYE
UNHE SAQ THA SATH HAMARA RAAS AAYEGA NA UNHE
MAGAR KYA BAAT HUEE WO AUR BHI JYADA GAMJADA HO GAYE
YUN BHI NA THI ZINDAGI ME HAMARI RANGINIYAAN
KHUSMIJAJ UNKI ADAYEIN AAJ KYUN GUMSUDA HO GAYE
HUME NAHI CHHAHAT KI MAANGE BHEEKH UNKI ULFAT KI
KAREEB TO NA AA SAKE WO HAMARE
AAJ MAGAR DUR JAANE JAAN HO GAYE.



wah wah kya baat hai JANNAT, bahut khoob


YU JINDAGI KI BHEED MEH WOH GOOM HO GAYE
PAAS AATEY AATEY WOH HUMSEY DOOR HO GAYE


JAMANEY KI RANGINIYAA KAAM KAR GAYI APNA
WAFA SEY NA JANEY KU WOH MAJBOOR HO GAYE
PAAS AATEY AATEY WOH HUMSEY DOOR HO GAYA


CHAND TOH NIKLA HAI AAJ BHI GULISTAAN MEH
FAASLEY NA JANEY AAJ YEH KAHA SEY HO GAYE
PAAS AATEY AATEY WOH HUMSEY DOOR HO GAYE


YU JINDAGI KI BHEED MEH WOH GOOM HO GAYE
PAAS AATEY AATEY WOH HUMSEY DOOR HO GAYE





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«Reply #3 on: April 10, 2009, 11:57:57 AM »
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Waah Kya Khoob Likha Hai, Jannat Jahan Ji,.
Anaam Ji,.
Jasbir Bhai,.

Nice One,.
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«Reply #4 on: April 11, 2009, 06:40:12 PM »
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Waah Kya Khoob Likha Hai, Jannat Jahan Ji,.
Anaam Ji,.
Jasbir Bhai,.

Nice One,.

Thanks Jahanasheen

Jasbir Singh
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«Reply #5 on: April 12, 2009, 02:28:16 PM »
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Thanks Jasbir ji, Anaam ji, Aur Azeem ji, mujhe aisa laga tha ki meri ye kosis nakamyaab rahi, aap logo ne saraha yahi bahut hai..... Thanks a lot.
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«Reply #6 on: April 28, 2009, 04:24:07 PM »
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Jannath ji adaab !

Naam se shayari ko jude rakha hai janab ne bahoth ache padke hale dil sunane ko ji karta hai magar qalam hai ke saath nahi deti ....khush rahen app !!

JQ
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«Reply #7 on: April 29, 2009, 09:37:19 AM »
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Jannath ji adaab !

Naam se shayari ko jude rakha hai janab ne bahoth ache padke hale dil sunane ko ji karta hai magar qalam hai ke saath nahi deti ....khush rahen app !!

JQ
Shukriyaa Qadir ji...aapne padha pasand kiya yahi bahut hai....jo bhi hai dil me use bayan kar dijiye...kosis karein...phir hum to sath hain hi.....
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«Reply #8 on: April 29, 2009, 09:45:41 AM »
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Very good Jannat Ji
Kamal ka likha hai

Very Nice addition by Jasbir Ji, Thanks

SARVESH RASTOGI
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«Reply #9 on: April 29, 2009, 10:01:05 AM »
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Very good Jannat Ji
Kamal ka likha hai

Very Nice addition by Jasbir Ji, Thanks

SARVESH RASTOGI
Bahut bahut shukriya Rastogi ji.....
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