Dushmanon ki mahfil main tanha chhod aaya tha.

by manjum on January 18, 2011, 09:01:13 AM

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manjum

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Bhul gaya ham ko wo jo apna banke aaya tha.
Yad main usiki dil muddaaaton jalaya tha.

Dard ke sahare ham dur tak chale aaye,
usne sath par mera do kadam nibhaya tha.

Jispe tha bhrosa hame sath wo nibhayega,
Dushmanon ki mahfil main tanha chhod aaya tha.

Wo jiski jafaon ko ham maf karte rahe,
Meri wafa ko usne hi khaq main milaya tha.

Thak gaye ab to ham uski rah tak tak ke,
Jiske lie dil ki pahfil ko sajaya tha.

Marham banke jiske zakhmon ko mitate rahe,
Usi ne hi to mera dil jalaya tha.

manju "mann"


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nirala

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Re: Dushmanon ki mahfil main tanha chhod aaya tha.

«Reply #1 on: January 18, 2011, 09:07:11 AM »

wah wah Manju.
umda.
mast mast post--aur wo title wala line to bas jaanlewa hai re.
lekin ye kya fir se Dardwala post !!!


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manjum

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Re: Dushmanon ki mahfil main tanha chhod aaya tha.

«Reply #2 on: January 18, 2011, 09:09:55 AM »

bahut bahut shukriya nairalaji...

kya karen bahut koshish karte hain khushi ka kuch likhene ki par kya karen bahut mushkil hotahai....

par yad rakhenge ab koshish kamya bhi katrenge

shukriyaji


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nirala

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Re: Dushmanon ki mahfil main tanha chhod aaya tha.

«Reply #3 on: January 18, 2011, 09:13:48 AM »

bahut badhiya fir to.
"
khushi me kabhi doob ke dekho
srf dard ke nhi khushi ke ansuo me bhi apne mehboob ko dekho
"
thanx
"


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Re: Dushmanon ki mahfil main tanha chhod aaya tha.

«Reply #4 on: January 18, 2011, 10:00:15 AM »


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manjum

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Re: Dushmanon ki mahfil main tanha chhod aaya tha.

«Reply #5 on: January 18, 2011, 11:19:02 AM »

bahut bahut shukriya adilji...


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Matrix Guy

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Re: Dushmanon ki mahfil main tanha chhod aaya tha.

«Reply #6 on: January 18, 2011, 11:26:08 AM »

bahot khub manju ji.........

total mindblowing presentation.........congrats.....


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manjum

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Re: Dushmanon ki mahfil main tanha chhod aaya tha.

«Reply #7 on: January 18, 2011, 11:29:21 AM »

bahut bahut shukriya matrixji shukriya

duayen dete rahen...


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manzil-e-ishq

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Re: Dushmanon ki mahfil main tanha chhod aaya tha.

«Reply #8 on: January 18, 2011, 12:09:21 PM »

bht khoob manjum ji....
sply first 2 stanza....
very nice.....


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Rishi Agarwal

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Re: Dushmanon ki mahfil main tanha chhod aaya tha.

«Reply #9 on: January 18, 2011, 05:50:28 PM »

Nice Creation Manjum Ji


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manjum

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Re: Dushmanon ki mahfil main tanha chhod aaya tha.

«Reply #10 on: January 19, 2011, 03:35:43 AM »

bahut bahut shukriya manzilji..

yese daad dete rahen..


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manjum

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Re: Dushmanon ki mahfil main tanha chhod aaya tha.

«Reply #11 on: January 19, 2011, 03:37:31 AM »

bahut bahut shukriya... rishiji...


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Re: Dushmanon ki mahfil main tanha chhod aaya tha.

«Reply #12 on: January 19, 2011, 03:48:08 AM »

bahoot khoob manjum ji ......dard ko alfazon me bakhoobi bayan kiya aapne.....daad hazir hai


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manjum

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Re: Dushmanon ki mahfil main tanha chhod aaya tha.

«Reply #13 on: January 19, 2011, 03:52:53 AM »

bahut bahut shukriya bekararji...
duayen dete rahiye....


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