Eak Mahobbath Ki Daastaan !!

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«Reply #15 on: January 29, 2009, 12:46:14 PM »
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Quote from: bekarar on January 29, 2009, 12:00:26 PM
qadeer sahab aapki ghazal...balki Nazm kahun to behtar hoga..padh-kar ek sher yaad aaya..arz hai..
in shabdon ko padhna mere yaaron sambhal ke,
mahfil me rakh diya hai kaleja nikaal ke,
bahoot hi sunder likha....aapne..

Wah Mere Bhai, Kya Khoob Line Share Ki Hai,.

Sach Mein Bohat Pyaari Hai,.
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«Reply #16 on: January 29, 2009, 01:13:23 PM »
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Bewafaa Mujhe Kehkar Sare Aam Zalil Na Karo Tum,.
Kis Kadar Maine Wafaa Nibhaai Ye Khudaa Jaanta Hai,.

Kehte Ho Mujhse, Tumne Mera Dil Jalaaya Hai "Azeem,.
Magar Tumhari Khushi Ki Khateer,.
Kitne Dilon Mein Aag Lagaai Ye Khudaa Jaanta Hai,.

Kehte Ho Maine Tumhe Chorda, Tumhaare Dil Ko Torda,.
Us Ek Pal Ki Zindagi Maine Kaise Bitaai Ye Khudaa Jaanta Hai,.

Kehte Ho Ki Maine Tumhaare Khwaabon Ko Qatal Kiya,.
Kis Tarah Maine Khwaabon Ki Mayyat Uthaai Ye Khudaa Jaanta Hai,.

Main Bewafa Nahi Sanam, Bas Majboor Tha Haalaat Se,.
Kis Tarah Maine Rabse Apni Bebasi Sunaai, Ye Bas Mera Khudaa Jaanta Hai,.

Main Bewafaa Nahi,.
Bas Majboor Tha, Teri Hi Khushi Ke Liye,.
Tujhse Door Hua, Teri Zindagi Ke Liye,.

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«Reply #17 on: January 31, 2009, 03:35:23 AM »
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Quote from: Jaanasheen on January 29, 2009, 01:13:23 PM
Bewafaa Mujhe Kehkar Sare Aam Zalil Na Karo Tum,.
Kis Kadar Maine Wafaa Nibhaai Ye Khudaa Jaanta Hai,.

Kehte Ho Mujhse, Tumne Mera Dil Jalaaya Hai "Azeem,.
Magar Tumhari Khushi Ki Khateer,.
Kitne Dilon Mein Aag Lagaai Ye Khudaa Jaanta Hai,.

Kehte Ho Maine Tumhe Chorda, Tumhaare Dil Ko Torda,.
Us Ek Pal Ki Zindagi Maine Kaise Bitaai Ye Khudaa Jaanta Hai,.

Kehte Ho Ki Maine Tumhaare Khwaabon Ko Qatal Kiya,.
Kis Tarah Maine Khwaabon Ki Mayyat Uthaai Ye Khudaa Jaanta Hai,.

Main Bewafa Nahi Sanam, Bas Majboor Tha Haalaat Se,.
Kis Tarah Maine Rabse Apni Bebasi Sunaai, Ye Bas Mera Khudaa Jaanta Hai,.

Main Bewafaa Nahi,.
Bas Majboor Tha, Teri Hi Khushi Ke Liye,.
Tujhse Door Hua, Teri Zindagi Ke Liye,.

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Subhan Allah , SUbhan Allah , Azeem kya likha hai mere bhai !!

Allah tumhe Khush rakhe Azeem bahoth qoob nazam nazar ki hai tumne !!

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«Reply #18 on: February 01, 2009, 09:01:48 PM »
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Shukriya Bade Bhaiya, Hausla Afzaai Ke Liye,.
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«Reply #19 on: February 02, 2009, 10:04:46 AM »
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Quote from: Shihab on February 02, 2009, 09:21:39 AM
Bohat Hi Umda Qadeer Bhai Kya Andaan.e.Bayaan Hai...

Iss Se Badkar Ab Aur Kya Saza.e.Mohabbat Hogi.
Jaa Aey Bewafaa Maine Tujhe Maaf Kar Diya Hai

Waah Majid Bhai Kya Ashaar Kahe Hain,.
Nice Lines,.

Tujhe Bewafaai Ka Ilzaam Main Kaise Doon,.
Jab Meri Hi Kismat Me Wafa Ka Naam Na Tha,.

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«Reply #20 on: February 03, 2009, 08:43:10 AM »
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Quote from: Shihab on February 03, 2009, 08:37:55 AM
Wah Wah Bhai Kya Khoob Farmaaya Hai Bohat Khoob..

Aankhein Kholo To Kuch Toote Hue Khwaab Mujhe Nazar Aate Hai
Kya Karu Tere Sehar Ke Chehre Mujhe Bewafa Se Nazar Aate Hai

Great Lines Yaar,.
Bohat Achche,.

Door Se Mujhe Wo Wafaaon Ka Shehar Nazar Aata Tha "Azeem,.
Aaj Pachtaa Raha Hoon, Main Is Shehar Mein Ghar Banaakar,.

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«Reply #21 on: February 03, 2009, 08:52:31 AM »
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Quote from: Jaanasheen on February 03, 2009, 08:43:10 AM
Great Lines Yaar,.
Bohat Achche,.

Door Se Mujhe Wo Wafaaon Ka Shehar Nazar Aata Tha "Azeem,.
Aaj Pachtaa Raha Hoon, Main Is Shehar Mein Ghar Banaakar,.

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Sbuhan Allah Subhan Allah , kya gaheri baath kahe hai azeem dil se daad qubool karenjanab !! Allah tumhe khush rakhe yaar kya kalam likha hai !!

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«Reply #22 on: February 03, 2009, 08:53:46 AM »
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Quote from: Shihab on February 03, 2009, 08:37:55 AM
Wah Wah Bhai Kya Khoob Farmaaya Hai Bohat Khoob..

Aankhein Kholo To Kuch Toote Hue Khwaab Mujhe Nazar Aate Hai
Kya Karu Tere Sehar Ke Chehre Mujhe Us Bewafa Ki Yaad Dilate Hai

Wah Wah Shihab sahab apki shayari ka to jawab hi nahi !! bahoth hi umda baten kahe jaate ho app apne ashar me !! allah apke kalamon ko miyar izzath bakshe sahab !!

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«Reply #23 on: February 03, 2009, 09:17:45 AM »
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Kuch istarah se dilko behlaya tha,
Hume daag diye apna daman bachaya tha,
Hum tadap rahe the bewafaai me,
Usne or tadpaya tha,
Ab Yakin na aye Khudaai pe,
Wo hashar hamara banaya tha,
Kisiki yadon me humne bhi
Mohabbat ka Ashiyaa sajaya tha!
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«Reply #24 on: February 03, 2009, 09:19:40 AM »
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Bahoot khub abdul ji,Azeem ji, shihab ji Clapping Smiley  Clapping Smiley  Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #25 on: February 03, 2009, 09:22:18 AM »
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Aashiyana banana mera kam tha
Koi bijli giraye to main kya karu

Mere khamosh rehne se parda nashee
Tujhpe ilzaam aaye to main kya karu

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«Reply #26 on: February 03, 2009, 09:48:42 AM »
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Quote from: Shihab on February 03, 2009, 09:08:52 AM
Wah Bhai Wah Aap Ke Aage Hum Kya
Bohat Khoob Likha Hai KLee It Up..

Bohat Bohat Shukariya...

Sitam.e.Gardishan Aur Seh Loon Zara
Aa Tere Sehar Mein Aur Reh Loon Zara.

Shukriya Bhai, And Nice One,.

Rehna Sakega Ek Pal Bhi, Tu Is Shehar Mein "Majid",.
Ye Wohi Shehar Hai, Jahaan Tere Khwaabon Ko Kuchla Gaya,.

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«Reply #27 on: February 03, 2009, 09:51:42 AM »
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Shukriya,.
Abdul Qadeer Bhaiya, And Thank U Salma Ji,.
And Nice One, Salma Begum,,.
Nice One Sajid Bhai, May Allah Bless You Too,.
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«Reply #28 on: February 04, 2009, 07:36:28 AM »
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Jo labzo se bayaan na kiya to kya?
Meri khamoshi bhi kayi sawal karte hai,
Parwa nahi mujhe tere ilzamo ki,
Tere zakhm bhi ab kayi kamal karte hai!
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