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Humnay Dil Tora Dharkanoun Kay Khauf Say
Apni Basti He Mita Di Barishoun Kay Khauf Say
Kon Kehta Hai Hamein Mohabbat Ras Agaye?
Hum Tu Youn He Hans Daitay Hain Ansoun Kay Khauf Say
Dil Ne Tere Pyar Par Majbor Mujhe Kar Diya
Is Jahan Ki Har Khushi Se Duur Mujhe Kar Diya
Jis Qadar Chaha Tha Dil Ne Paas Tere Aane Ka
Us Qadar Dunya Ne Tujh Ko Duur Mujh Se Kar Diya
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«Reply #1 on: January 22, 2005, 09:54:48 AM » |
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Wah.....Kamal hai.....
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«Reply #2 on: January 22, 2005, 10:00:37 AM » |
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zarranawaazi ka shukriya
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«Reply #3 on: January 22, 2005, 10:05:47 AM » |
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Unki zulfien Unke Chehere se hata sakta nahi,
Dil ki betaabi ko kisi surat mein chupa sakta nahi,
Kitni dilksh hai mohabbat ki jawan majboori..
samne Manzil hai aur kadam badha sakta nahi..
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«Reply #4 on: January 22, 2005, 10:14:01 AM » |
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Unki zulfien Unke Chehere se hata sakta nahi,
Dil ki betaabi ko kisi surat mein chupa sakta nahi,
Kitni dilksh hai mohabbat ki jawan majboori..
samne Manzil hai aur kadam badha sakta nahi.. good both of u ye hak hai tumhara, chehre se unke zulfien tum hatado chupaun mat dil ki betaabi ko unhe sab kuch batado saari majburian chod kar vo teri baahon mein bikar jayegi bas itna karam karo ki manjil ki taraf ek kadam aur badado |
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«Reply #5 on: January 22, 2005, 10:19:14 AM » |
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mera haque uske har ik cheez pe tha,
mujhe ye ehsaas na ho saka ke..
Bewafai ka bhi haque use maine de diya...
ab kadam bhi ladkhadate hain us manzil ke naam par,
us Raah ne mere kadmon ko aise zakhm de diye
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«Reply #6 on: January 22, 2005, 10:49:25 AM » |
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mera haque uske har ik cheez pe tha,
mujhe ye ehsaas na ho saka ke..
Bewafai ka bhi haque use maine de diya...
ab kadam bhi ladkhadate hain us manzil ke naam par,
us Raah ne mere kadmon ko aise zakhm de diye good answer alam |
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«Reply #7 on: January 22, 2005, 02:58:05 PM » |
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haath uske bhi huey honge yakinan zakhmi,
jisne kaante teri raahon me bichaaye honge.
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«Reply #8 on: January 22, 2005, 07:55:54 PM » |
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Humnay Dil Tora Dharkanoun Kay Khauf Say
Apni Basti He Mita Di Barishoun Kay Khauf Say
Kon Kehta Hai Hamein Mohabbat Ras Agaye?
Hum Tu Youn He Hans Daitay Hain Ansoun Kay Khauf Say
Dil Ne Tere Pyar Par Majbor Mujhe Kar Diya
Is Jahan Ki Har Khushi Se Duur Mujhe Kar Diya
Jis Qadar Chaha Tha Dil Ne Paas Tere Aane Ka
Us Qadar Dunya Ne Tujh Ko Duur Mujh Se Kar Diya
wahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh dil ko chu gayi apki yeh poem!!!!!!!!!! really tooooooooooo gud!!!!!!!!!!! :D |
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«Reply #9 on: January 22, 2005, 08:05:53 PM » |
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very very nice Sulmuh ji...
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«Reply #10 on: January 22, 2005, 08:10:47 PM » |
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sulmuh ji ...u said zarranawazi ka shukria....
agar zarra nawaja jayega... tabhi to.. jahan ki bulandio ko hasil kar payega
ek din asmaan ka noor ban jayega
warna khakh mein hi raha to hameshan zarra hi kehlayega
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«Reply #11 on: January 22, 2005, 08:16:43 PM » |
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phool se khusbu ati hai
tum wo kali nahi
jis pyaar se zindagi ati hai
tum wo pyaar nahi
dil tora hai tumne to mera
tum wo mera pyara sa yaar nahi
aj hoon mein gar yahan to tum yahan nahi
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«Reply #12 on: January 22, 2005, 08:19:05 PM » |
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phool se khusbu ati hai
tum wo kali nahi
jis pyaar se zindagi ati hai
tum wo pyaar nahi
dil tora hai tumne to mera
tum wo mera pyara sa yaar nahi
aj hoon mein gar yahan to tum yahan nahi wahhhhhhhhhh very touching!!!!!!! :D |
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«Reply #13 on: January 22, 2005, 08:19:12 PM » |
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mere pyaare ne muhje hai sataya
mere yaar ne muhje hai rulaya
mera naam lekar tune muhje tha sataya
mere pyaar se pyaar karke tune muhje hai ab gair banaya
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«Reply #14 on: January 22, 2005, 09:06:45 PM » |
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Humnay Dil Tora Dharkanoun Kay Khauf Say
Apni Basti He Mita Di Barishoun Kay Khauf Say
Kon Kehta Hai Hamein Mohabbat Ras Agaye?
Hum Tu Youn He Hans Daitay Hain Ansoun Kay Khauf Say
Dil Ne Tere Pyar Par Majbor Mujhe Kar Diya
Is Jahan Ki Har Khushi Se Duur Mujhe Kar Diya
Jis Qadar Chaha Tha Dil Ne Paas Tere Aane Ka
Us Qadar Dunya Ne Tujh Ko Duur Mujh Se Kar Diya
very touching words hain bohat acha likha hai aap nay SULMUH dil kush bhi hoa aur udas bhi bohat hoa hijar ka bab ho gaye tum bhi kitnay kam yeab ho gaye tum bhi mein na khata tha waqt zalim hai dehk lo khawab ho gaye tum bhi |
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