Ek waqt!

by salma786 on April 14, 2009, 02:33:05 PM
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Guzaarta tha har lamha meri agosh me,
Ek waqt tha jab tu mere kareeb tha,
Rehta tha meri zindegi ban kar,
Aisa lagta tha jaise tu hi mera naseeb tha!

Bhula kar duniya ke sare rishte,
Toot kar teri bahoon me bikharti gayi,
Jo sitam dhata gaya tu mujh pe reh reh kar,
Mai muskurake sare sitam sehti gayi!

Jo manzur na tha zindegi bitana mere sath,
Phir kyu mere wajood ko yun tod gaya,
Udaas nazrein bhi pighla na saki patthar dilko tere,
Yun ajnabion ke sehar me tu mujhe chod gaya!
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«Reply #1 on: April 14, 2009, 03:05:35 PM »
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Nice Topic & well expressed Salma!

Ek wakt tha jab sab ak sapna tha
Gairon mea dikha mujhe koi apna tha

Saaj dali , sargan ne cheda ak sangeet
Milne lagi khushi, sach hua sapna tha

Panghat ka paani bhi seetal lagne laga
Raaz nahi hakikat mea tu mujhme basta tha

 
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«Reply #2 on: April 14, 2009, 03:28:45 PM »
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Nice One Salma And Sophi,.
BOhat Achche,.

Waqt Bhale Guzar Jaaye, Yaadein Phir Bhi Tehar Jaate Hain,.
Rukte Hain Ghamon Ke Pal Sadiyon Ki Tarah,.
Aur Khushiyon Ki Sadiyaan Pal Mein Guzar Jaati Hain,.

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«Reply #3 on: April 14, 2009, 03:30:55 PM »
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Thanks Azeem. Aur kya baat hai.. 3 lino mea itni badi baat keh di.. bhoot Khoob!
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«Reply #4 on: April 14, 2009, 03:34:31 PM »
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Quote from: Sophi on April 14, 2009, 03:30:55 PM
Thanks Azeem. Aur kya baat hai.. 3 lino mea itni badi baat keh di.. bhoot Khoob!
Shukriya Sophi,.
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«Reply #5 on: April 14, 2009, 04:01:48 PM »
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Salma jee, Sophie jee and Jaansheen jee..
kya khoob sama baandha hai milkar....
keep it up.................
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«Reply #6 on: April 15, 2009, 09:54:53 AM »
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Thank U Pandit Ji,.
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«Reply #7 on: April 15, 2009, 10:21:16 AM »
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Quote from: Sophi on April 14, 2009, 03:05:35 PM
Nice Topic & well expressed Salma!

Ek wakt tha jab sab ak sapna tha
Gairon mea dikha mujhe koi apna tha

Saaj dali , sargan ne cheda ak sangeet
Milne lagi khushi, sach hua sapna tha

Panghat ka paani bhi seetal lagne laga
Raaz nahi hakikat mea tu mujhme basta tha

 

Thanks lot sophi dear Usual Smile
n very nice thoughts!!
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«Reply #8 on: April 15, 2009, 10:22:18 AM »
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Quote from: Jaanasheen on April 14, 2009, 03:28:45 PM
Nice One Salma And Sophi,.
BOhat Achche,.

Waqt Bhale Guzar Jaaye, Yaadein Phir Bhi Tehar Jaate Hain,.
Rukte Hain Ghamon Ke Pal Sadiyon Ki Tarah,.
Aur Khushiyon Ki Sadiyaan Pal Mein Guzar Jaati Hain,.

_________________-Jaanasheen-



Shukriya Azeem ji... very nice written Thumbs UP
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«Reply #9 on: April 15, 2009, 10:23:12 AM »
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Quote from: pandit on April 14, 2009, 04:01:48 PM
Salma jee, Sophie jee and Jaansheen jee..
kya khoob sama baandha hai milkar....
keep it up.................

Shuktriya Pandit ji!!
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«Reply #10 on: April 24, 2009, 09:10:26 AM »
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Waqt yahi thehar jata to kya manzar hota,
Tu aaj bhi mere kareeb hota to khuda ka mehar hota,
Na tute dil ke tukdo ko samet ti tere intezaar me,
Gar mohabbat me tujhe bhi Mujh sa aitbaar hota!
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«Reply #11 on: April 24, 2009, 09:20:22 AM »
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Good one Salma Ji N equally good response Sophi Ji
Aur Chote Bhai tera to jawaab nahi
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«Reply #12 on: April 27, 2009, 05:59:03 AM »
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Quote from: Rajesh Harish on April 24, 2009, 09:20:22 AM
Good one Salma Ji N equally good response Sophi Ji
Aur Chote Bhai tera to jawaab nahi

Shukriya!
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