Garib gher ki beti..... anmol arora

by anmolarora on September 07, 2012, 11:03:45 AM
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mai hu ek garib ghar ki beti,

aao mere hatho me mehndi rachao,meri mang bharo muzhe dulhan banao,

aur agar ye sab kuch bhi nh kr sakte,

to ek upkar kr do,
mera gala ghot do,

mere hath kat dalo............!

to shayd mehndi se acha rang chadega,

samaaj mein mera name hoga,

log kahege ek abla kismat ki balih chad gai,

marne k bad meri ejjat badh gai,varna maa-baaap ko bech kr shadi krati,

phir v sasural walo ki niyat na bharti ,rat din maar pith kr vo stateh,

dahej na lane k taaneh sunatein,

aur marne ka muzh ko plan banatein,phir mehnghe bhav ki kerosin latein,

kehtein hum phir se ghar basayege,

jyda dahej wali dulhan layege,

aur ek abla daheej ki balih chad jaygi,

es liye kehti hu..........................

es se pehle mere dil m koi eacha jagein, koi umang utein ya hathoin mein mehndi ka khawab dekhu,
mera gala ghot kar mere hath kath dalo.....
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«Reply #1 on: September 07, 2012, 11:08:08 AM »
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«Reply #2 on: September 07, 2012, 12:39:46 PM »
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Quote from: anmolarora on September 07, 2012, 11:03:45 AM
mai hu ek garib ghar ki beti,

aao mere hatho me mehndi rachao,meri mang bharo muzhe dulhan banao,

aur agar ye sab kuch bhi nh kr sakte,

to ek upkar kr do,
mera gala ghot do,

mere hath kat dalo............!

to shayd mehndi se acha rang chadega,

samaaj mein mera name hoga,

log kahege ek abla kismat ki balih chad gai,

marne k bad meri ejjat badh gai,varna maa-baaap ko bech kr shadi krati,

phir v sasural walo ki niyat na bharti ,rat din maar pith kr vo stateh,

dahej na lane k taaneh sunatein,

aur marne ka muzh ko plan banatein,phir mehnghe bhav ki kerosin latein,

kehtein hum phir se ghar basayege,

jyda dahej wali dulhan layege,

aur ek abla daheej ki balih chad jaygi,

es liye kehti hu..........................

es se pehle mere dil m koi eacha jagein, koi umang utein ya hathoin mein mehndi ka khawab dekhu,

yaha tak ki lekhni... bahut bahut khoob...  Applause Applause

mera gala ghot kar mere hath kath dalo.....

ye line jami nahi jara socho gala ghot do to wo mar jayegi fir haath kyo kate?? tongue3  plz dont mind.. mai nahi kehna chahta tha par ye achha nahi laga to keh diya...  Thumbs UP


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«Reply #3 on: September 07, 2012, 03:07:55 PM »
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Quote from: sksaini4 on September 07, 2012, 11:08:08 AM
heart touching
sukhriya aap ka
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«Reply #4 on: September 07, 2012, 03:10:30 PM »
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Quote from: Mohammad Touhid on September 07, 2012, 12:39:46 PM
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sukhriya aap ka mohammad ji aap ki rai bhi thk hai per last line me jo likha hai us ka matlab hai ki ager aap kuch nahi ker sakte to mayra gala to ghont sakte ho ......vase her kisi ki soch alag hoti hai aap ki ray hame pasnd aai sukhriya aap ka
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«Reply #5 on: September 07, 2012, 03:40:45 PM »
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heart touching lines anmol jee
aapne sahi kaha..ek shayar ka sochne ka andaaz thoda hatkar hota hai.
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«Reply #6 on: September 07, 2012, 04:04:34 PM »
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heart touching lines anmol jee
aapne sahi kaha..ek shayar ka sochne ka andaaz thoda hatkar hota hai.

sukhriya aap ka mkv ji aap ne sahi kaha hai
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«Reply #7 on: September 08, 2012, 08:50:19 AM »
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Very very nice jo aap ne ik garib larki ki kahani byan ker di aaj ke jamane me aati sunder sabdo me ... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

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«Reply #8 on: September 08, 2012, 02:08:34 PM »
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bahut badhiya, hriday ko chhoo lya, dhero dad
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«Reply #9 on: September 08, 2012, 02:45:09 PM »
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Quote from: nisha bhatia on September 08, 2012, 08:50:19 AM
Very very nice jo aap ne ik garib larki ki kahani byan ker di aaj ke jamane me aati sunder sabdo me ... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

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aaj ke jamane me aysa hi kuch ho raha hai is ley ye ik sachai hai aaj ke jamane ki aap ko pasand aai us ke ley sukhriya
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Quote from: nandbahu on September 08, 2012, 02:08:34 PM
bahut badhiya, hriday ko chhoo lya, dhero dad
aap ki parsansa ke ley hum aap ke tahe dil se aabhari hai nandbahu ji
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