Ghazal क्या कहूँ ? (Adab)

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«Reply #15 on: June 24, 2013, 01:21:36 PM »
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Waaah....Janab waaaaah....bahut khoob....Raqeeb
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«Reply #16 on: June 24, 2013, 01:57:05 PM »
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bahut hi achchi ghazal kahi hai aapne. sabhi ashaar khoob hai. hazaron dili daad qubool kare.
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«Reply #17 on: June 24, 2013, 02:40:28 PM »
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Quote from: drpandey on June 23, 2013, 09:05:01 PM
खुशफ़हम दिल का बहाना क्या कहूँ?
रोज मैं अपना फ़साना क्या कहूँ?

रफ़्ता-रफ़्ता गफलतों में ग़ुम हुआ,
इश्क़ में जैसे दिवाना  क्या कहूँ?

हुस्न की तौफ़ीक़ ठहरी बेनियाज़ी,
बदगुमाँ सारा ज़माना क्या कहूँ?

चन्द जुमले  कुछ इबारत और क्या,
कर गये मुझको बेगाना क्या कहूँ?

उल्झी ज़ुल्फें वक़्त की सुलझें ना जब,
रंज़े -दिल मुझको सुनाना क्या कहूँ?

वस्ल का मक़सूद जब दिन ही ना हो,
जी में जब आये बुलाना क्या कहूँ?

हिज्र के बिस्तर में जब सिलवट नहीं,
लेके  करवट भूल जाना क्या कहूँ?

दिल के कारोबार में घाटा ही है,
ये तिज़ारत ज़ालिमाना क्या कहूँ?

इक मुसलसल सी रवानी में 'अदब',
बहते-बहते डूब जाना क्या कहूँ?

-डा० एच० पी० पाण्डेय 'अदब'
Quote from: drpandey on June 23, 2013, 09:05:01 PM
खुशफ़हम दिल का बहाना क्या कहूँ?
रोज मैं अपना फ़साना क्या कहूँ?

रफ़्ता-रफ़्ता गफलतों में ग़ुम हुआ,
इश्क़ में जैसे दिवाना  क्या कहूँ?

हुस्न की तौफ़ीक़ ठहरी बेनियाज़ी,
बदगुमाँ सारा ज़माना क्या कहूँ?

चन्द जुमले  कुछ इबारत और क्या,
कर गये मुझको बेगाना क्या कहूँ?

उल्झी ज़ुल्फें वक़्त की सुलझें ना जब,
रंज़े -दिल मुझको सुनाना क्या कहूँ?

वस्ल का मक़सूद जब दिन ही ना हो,
जी में जब आये बुलाना क्या कहूँ?

हिज्र के बिस्तर में जब सिलवट नहीं,
लेके  करवट भूल जाना क्या कहूँ?

दिल के कारोबार में घाटा ही है,
ये तिज़ारत ज़ालिमाना क्या कहूँ?

इक मुसलसल सी रवानी में 'अदब',
बहते-बहते डूब जाना क्या कहूँ?

-डा० एच० पी० पाण्डेय 'अदब'






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«Reply #18 on: June 24, 2013, 03:11:10 PM »
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«Reply #19 on: June 24, 2013, 05:52:49 PM »
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Waaah....Janab waaaaah....bahut khoob....Raqeeb

Shukriya bhai Satish Shukla ji...!!
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«Reply #20 on: June 24, 2013, 05:54:01 PM »
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«Reply #21 on: June 24, 2013, 05:55:08 PM »
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bahut hi achchi ghazal kahi hai aapne. sabhi ashaar khoob hai. hazaron dili daad qubool kare.

Shukriya aqsh ji...!!
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«Reply #22 on: June 25, 2013, 02:52:27 PM »
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«Reply #23 on: June 25, 2013, 02:55:57 PM »
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खुशफ़हम दिल का बहाना क्या कहूँ?
रोज मैं अपना फ़साना क्या कहूँ?

रफ़्ता-रफ़्ता गफलतों में ग़ुम हुआ,
इश्क़ में जैसे दिवाना  क्या कहूँ?

हुस्न की तौफ़ीक़ ठहरी बेनियाज़ी,
बदगुमाँ सारा ज़माना क्या कहूँ?

चन्द जुमले  कुछ इबारत और क्या,
कर गये मुझको बेगाना क्या कहूँ?

उल्झी ज़ुल्फें वक़्त की सुलझें ना जब,
रंज़े -दिल मुझको सुनाना क्या कहूँ?

वस्ल का मक़सूद जब दिन ही ना हो,
जी में जब आये बुलाना क्या कहूँ?

हिज्र के बिस्तर में जब सिलवट नहीं,
लेके  करवट भूल जाना क्या कहूँ?

दिल के कारोबार में घाटा ही है,
ये तिज़ारत ज़ालिमाना क्या कहूँ?

इक मुसलसल सी रवानी में 'अदब',
बहते-बहते डूब जाना क्या कहूँ?

-डा० एच० पी० पाण्डेय 'अदब'


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«Reply #25 on: June 26, 2013, 02:37:11 AM »
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Pandey jee aadaab....!


Waaah waah waah janab kya kahne behad khubsurat aur umdaa kalaam kahi hai janab....

sabhi ashaar qabil e daad hai ... gazab ke ahsaas o khayaal piroye hai aapne har ashaar behad umdaa raha....   Usual Smile


is khoob aur umda kalàam par humari hazaaroN dili daad  o mubbarakbad kabul kijiye ....


likhte rahiye. bazm ko roshan karte rahiye....
shaad o aabaad rahiye....
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«Reply #26 on: June 26, 2013, 02:45:37 AM »
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Quote from: ParwaaZ on June 26, 2013, 02:37:11 AM
Pandey jee aadaab....!


Waaah waah waah janab kya kahne behad khubsurat aur umdaa kalaam kahi hai janab....

sabhi ashaar qabil e daad hai ... gazab ke ahsaas o khayaal piroye hai aapne har ashaar behad umdaa raha....   Usual Smile


is khoob aur umda kalàam par humari hazaaroN dili daad  o mubbarakbad kabul kijiye ....


likhte rahiye. bazm ko roshan karte rahiye....
shaad o aabaad rahiye....
Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile      [\color] [\b]

ParwaaZ bhai Aadab...!!

Ghazal pasand farmaney aur hausla afzai ka dili shukrgujaar hoon...!!

Khuda Haafiz...!!
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«Reply #27 on: June 26, 2013, 01:34:33 PM »
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waah waah waah waah Pandey ji... kyaa kehne ... bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne....!!!
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waah waah waah waah Pandey ji... kyaa kehne ... bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne....!!!

Aapka bahot bahot shukriya Hriday ji...!!
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«Reply #29 on: June 27, 2013, 02:28:27 AM »
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Waah Waah Waah......

Bahut Bahut Khoooooob Dr Pandey ji....Lajawaab Peshkash..

Bahut Accha Laga Aapko Yahaan Post Karte Dekh Kar..Yuhi Apni Maujoodgi Se Yoindia Ki Ronak Aue Badhaate Rahiye..


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