gila be nahi raha

by chitralsony on March 03, 2009, 10:01:38 PM
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ab zindagi may koyi omeed hi nahi rahi
aur tum say milnay ka to guman be nahi raha
nadaan ho tum kay tumko hay khoshbakhti ka asra
humko to ab taqdeer say gila be nahi raha
wehshat si cha gayi hay ghr kay der o diwar pr
dil may mairay ab to qaraar hi nahi raha
kehtay ho haq kay hamay door jana chahiyay
jub apnay pass muhabbat ka asra hi nahi raha
asaan nahi tha tarak e taluq ka faisala
pr ab hamaray pass hosala be nahi raha
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«Reply #1 on: March 04, 2009, 12:13:35 AM »
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gud lines sony......
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«Reply #2 on: March 04, 2009, 03:23:33 AM »
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Quote from: pandit on March 04, 2009, 12:13:35 AM
gud lines sony......
thank u pandit ji
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«Reply #3 on: March 04, 2009, 03:55:26 AM »
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Very nice Taiba sis Thumbs UP
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«Reply #4 on: March 04, 2009, 09:05:43 AM »
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Kitna khush hain tujhe barbaad karke GHAYEL
Woh apne hunar pe hasta hain, tere dard pe bhala q roye

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«Reply #5 on: March 04, 2009, 09:09:15 AM »
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Good One, Chitra Ji,.
And Nice Lines Sajid Bhaiya.
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«Reply #6 on: March 04, 2009, 09:15:27 AM »
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Quote from: chitralsony on March 03, 2009, 10:01:38 PM
ab zindagi may koyi omeed hi nahi rahi
aur tum say milnay ka to guman be nahi raha
nadaan ho tum kay tumko hay khoshbakhti ka asra
humko to ab taqdeer say gila be nahi raha
wehshat si cha gayi hay ghr kay der o diwar pr
dil may mairay ab to qaraar hi nahi raha
kehtay ho haq kay hamay door jana chahiyay
jub apnay pass muhabbat ka asra hi nahi raha
asaan nahi tha tarak e taluq ka faisala
pr ab hamaray pass hosala be nahi raha


wah chitra, wah, bahut badiya, wah

jasbir singh
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«Reply #7 on: March 04, 2009, 06:59:08 PM »
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Quote from: salma786 on March 04, 2009, 03:55:26 AM
Very nice Taiba sis Thumbs UP
thank u behna
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«Reply #8 on: March 04, 2009, 07:02:46 PM »
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Quote from: jasbirsingh on March 04, 2009, 09:15:27 AM

wah chitra, wah, bahut badiya, wah

jasbir singh
thank u so much jabir singh ji ,it is really so nice of u kay app nay ezat afzayi ki
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«Reply #9 on: March 04, 2009, 07:08:42 PM »
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Quote from: sajid_ghayel on March 04, 2009, 09:05:43 AM
Kitna khush hain tujhe barbaad karke GHAYEL
Woh apne hunar pe hasta hain, tere dard pe bhala q roye

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wo jo ashaar may drd ki tashheer karay
        kysay man lun wo mairay drd pay hansa hoga
       
       
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«Reply #10 on: March 04, 2009, 07:13:04 PM »
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Quote from: Jaanasheen on March 04, 2009, 09:09:15 AM
Good One, Chitra Ji,.
And Nice Lines Sajid Bhaiya.
thank u jansheen ji
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«Reply #11 on: March 04, 2009, 07:34:08 PM »
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BADA achha kalaam hai aapka.... Applause Applause Applause
Per main ye do line theek se samaz nahi pa raha hu..
kya kehna chah rahi hain aap in lines mai...
"kehtay ho haq kay hamay door jana chahiyay
jub apnay pass muhabbat ka asra hi nahi raha
asaan nahi tha tarak e taluq ka faisala"
Quote from: chitralsony on March 03, 2009, 10:01:38 PM
ab zindagi may koyi omeed hi nahi rahi
aur tum say milnay ka to guman be nahi raha
nadaan ho tum kay tumko hay khoshbakhti ka asra
humko to ab taqdeer say gila be nahi raha
wehshat si cha gayi hay ghr kay der o diwar pr
dil may mairay ab to qaraar hi nahi raha
kehtay ho haq kay hamay door jana chahiyay
jub apnay pass muhabbat ka asra hi nahi raha
asaan nahi tha tarak e taluq ka faisala
pr ab hamaray pass hosala be nahi raha
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«Reply #12 on: March 04, 2009, 09:03:11 PM »
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Quote from: smardia on March 04, 2009, 07:34:08 PM
BADA achha kalaam hai aapka.... Applause Applause Applause
Per main ye do line theek se samaz nahi pa raha hu..
kya kehna chah rahi hain aap in lines mai...
"kehtay ho haq kay hamay door jana chahiyay
jub apnay pass muhabbat ka asra hi nahi raha
asaan nahi tha tarak e taluq ka faisala"
thank u janab ,aray maira matlub hay kay sach kehtay ho jub mairi muhabat hi mairaypass nahi hay to mujay dunia say chala jana chahiyay,and dosray ka matlub ayy hay kay mairay liyay bhot mushkil tha tum say apna taluq tor lon lakin chonkay tum mujay chor chukay thay aur tumharay wapas anay ka koyi asra hi na tha so may be hosala har giya and tum say rabta rakhna chor diya
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