Gustakhi..!! -Panna 2:Shayeri for Dard -e- Bewafai

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«Reply #15 on: September 17, 2011, 08:33:11 AM »

Quote from: tamanna1 on September 17, 2011, 07:51:33 AM

kitne bi door chale jaaye
pyaar karne waale humse
humare yaadon ko nahin bhool paayenge
peecha karenge hum
yaadon ke vaaste

Wah...Khub...

Jin keshuo.n pe tha in hatho.n ko adhikar
Khula na rakho ab use..meri khusboo se mahak jayenge
Jin din humari ankho.n se barish rukegi..
Yadon mein tere aansoo chhalak jayenge..!!


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Re: Gustakhi..!!

«Reply #16 on: September 17, 2011, 09:21:55 AM »

gustaakhiyo se yu na najar hataiye
hum jaha se chale the vahi laut aaiye


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Re: Gustakhi..!!

«Reply #17 on: September 17, 2011, 09:22:11 AM »

G P jee Aadaab!

Bahut khoob janab behad achcha khayaal hai daad..
Is khayaal ka aik sher yaad aa gaya..

Ek zara c baat par wo mujhse yu khafa ho gaya
jaise sadiyon se use kisi bahane ki talash thi

... Not Mine

Aur is khayaal par aik apna sher bhi kah dete haiN

Bahut bechaiN tha zalim furkhat meiN mere
Jaise aazaadi thi qaid uski chahat meiN mere


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Re: Gustakhi..!!

«Reply #18 on: September 17, 2011, 10:21:31 AM »

Quote from: Gyan Prakash on September 17, 2011, 05:53:25 AM

Sah lenge har dard teri ruswai ka sanam..
Bas itna bata de ki gustakhiyan kahan hui..!!

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Gyan Prakash

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Re: Gustakhi..!!

«Reply #19 on: September 17, 2011, 02:57:57 PM »

Quote from: ParwaaZ on September 17, 2011, 09:22:11 AM

G P jee Aadaab!

Bahut khoob janab behad achcha khayaal hai daad..
Is khayaal ka aik sher yaad aa gaya..

Ek zara c baat par wo mujhse yu khafa ho gaya
jaise sadiyon se use kisi bahane ki talash thi

... Not Mine

Kya khoob kaha apne Parwaaz Ji...Jaise dil ki baat cheen li ho..

Ye gustakhiya.n ye ruswai to jaise ek bahana tha..
Unhein to waise bhi humein chhor ke jana tha..!!
-NM

Aur is khayaal par aik apna sher bhi kah dete haiN

Bahut bechaiN tha zalim furkhat meiN mere
Jaise aazaadi thi qaid uski chahat meiN mere

Bahut Khub..!!