Ham gair nazar aate hain. "manjum"

by manjum on January 17, 2011, 06:44:02 AM
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nirala
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«Reply #15 on: January 17, 2011, 08:51:44 AM »
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thanku ji
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ParwaaZ
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«Reply #16 on: January 17, 2011, 09:36:52 AM »
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Manjum Jee Aadaab!

Waah kia baat hai manjhum jee..
Kia kalaam kahi hai aapne waah daad daad daad..

Behad umdaa khayaal aur gazab ki bayaani Usual Smile          




Chaliye ab is pyar ko is tarah nibhate hain.
Bewafa hain wo ji unko bhul jate hain.

Masha Allah kia kahne hai waah jee
waah behad khoob... Usual Smile          


Poochte hain ab unse kyon ye bewafayi ki,
Dekhe hain iski wo kya wajah batate hain.

Oe hoye ... kia kahne hai jee bahhut khoob. Usual Smile          

Saikdon hasinaaon ke dil dhadkne lagte hain.
Saj sanwar ke jab bhi wo mahfilon main jate hain.

Hmm achcha sher hai daad..          

Unko ghere rahte hain anginat hasin chehare,
Islie ab ham unko yaad nahin aate hain.

Behad khoob...          

Kya hua ki unke lie hamne jan lutayi hai,
Ajj bhi magar unko ham gair nazar aate hain.

Waah jee waah kia baat hai.. daad daad Usual Smile          

manjum "mann"

Behad khoob manjum jee ...
Ahsaas O khayaal behad khoob rahe aapke is kalaam ke,

Aise hi umdaa likhate rahiye..
Khush O aabaad rahiye...
Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile          

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«Reply #17 on: January 17, 2011, 09:48:41 AM »
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bht bht khoob manjum ji...
sabhi sher acche lage hume...
very nice...
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nirala
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«Reply #18 on: January 17, 2011, 10:05:43 AM »
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humne andaaza lagaya tha ki aaj iss post ka post-martom hoga par itni jaldi hoga ye soch ke bahar ki baat thi Usual Smile
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«Reply #19 on: January 17, 2011, 10:55:42 AM »
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Achchi koshsih hai........keep writing.
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manjum
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«Reply #20 on: January 17, 2011, 12:15:22 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriya... parwazji...

yese hi ek ek sher ko daad se nawazte rahen...

sath rahen..daad dete rahen..

shukriya..
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manjum
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«Reply #21 on: January 17, 2011, 12:16:48 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriya sajidji...

duaye dete rahen.. khush rahen..
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manjum
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«Reply #22 on: January 17, 2011, 12:18:00 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriya.. manzilji...

daad aur duaye dete rahen...
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«Reply #23 on: January 18, 2011, 05:22:06 PM »
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Bahut Khub Manjum Ji And Matrix Ji U Also Nice Reply
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«Reply #24 on: January 19, 2011, 03:42:25 AM »
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bahut bahut ashukriya rishiji..

yun hi sath rahen...
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«Reply #25 on: January 19, 2011, 04:01:19 AM »
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Chaliye ab is pyar ko is tarah nibhate hain.
Bewafa hain wo ji unko bhul jae hain.

Poochte hain ab unse kyon ye bewafayi ki,
Dekhe hain iski wo kya wajah batate hain.

Saikdon hasinion ke dil dhadkne lagte hain.
Saj sanwar ke jab bhi wo mahfilon main jate hain.

Unko ghere rahte hain auginat hasin chehare,
Islie ab ham unko yad nahin aate hain.

Kya hua ki unke lie hamne jan lutayi hai,
Ajj bhi magar unko ham gair nazar aate hain.

manjum "mann"

bahoot khoob manjum ji ....

ek khushnuma nazar tak beraham ki haasil nahi mujhe,
mere alawa har ek pe wo muskarahaten lutaate hain


waaah manju ji bahot hi mast mast likha he apne......baht khub ji
lijiye kuch agey badaya he ise mene bhi ...jara najar daliye


meri wafa ko wo bewafayi se is kadar nibhate he
jo they kabhi apne ab wo hi dil pe khanjar chalate he

has has ke milte he uu to wo sabhi se
jane kyu humse hi wo najare churate he

ek hum he ki unhe yaad karte he sahm-o-sahar
ek wo he ki hume bhulne ko adat banate he

bahoot khoob MG ...

bahoot behtreen
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«Reply #26 on: January 19, 2011, 04:08:04 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriya bekararji...

aapki daad sar aankhon per...

daad dete rahie.. sath rahiye..
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