Hardam jo hosh khote rahe.....premdeep

by premdeep on July 18, 2013, 07:02:55 PM
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Hardam jo hosh khote   rahe
kabhi jagte kabhi sote rahe

gairon me aksar nazar ate hain
yaadon me jinki hum rote rahe

Hifazat me jinki toofan mein hum
Meri kashti  wo hi dubote rahe

Dua me jo uthe the  adab se sada
us hatheli par chale kyu hote rahe

Basti ki basti basa kar ke hum
akele hi ghar me yun sote rahe

panahon me meri hi aakar ke wo
seene mein nashtar chubhote rahe

Har pal chala tha jisne mujhe
hum sapne use ke sanjote rahe

Log hairaan ho meri maut par
kabhi hanste rahe  kabhi rote rahe

Hardam jo hosh khote  rahe
kabhi jagte kabhi sote rahe
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«Reply #1 on: July 18, 2013, 07:11:58 PM »
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bahut sunder premdeep ji
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«Reply #3 on: July 18, 2013, 07:55:21 PM »
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bahut achhe paramdeep ji.. aise hi likhte rahe,,

aate rahe.. Applause Applause
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«Reply #6 on: July 18, 2013, 10:22:15 PM »
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Quote from: premdeep on July 18, 2013, 07:02:55 PM
Hardam jo hosh khote   rahe
kabhi jagte kabhi sote rahe

gairon me aksar nazar ate hain
yaadon me jinki hum rote rahe

Hifazat me jinki toofan mein hum
Meri kashti  wo hi dubote rahe

Dua me jo uthe the  adab se sada
us hatheli par chale kyu hote rahe

Basti ki basti basa kar ke hum
akele hi ghar me yun sote rahe

panahon me meri hi aakar ke wo
seene mein nashtar chubhote rahe

Har pal chala tha jisne mujhe
hum sapne use ke sanjote rahe

Log hairaan ho meri maut par
kabhi hanste rahe  kabhi rote rahe

Hardam jo hosh khote  rahe
kabhi jagte kabhi sote rahe


bahot khoob Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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Lajwab peshkash.. Keep it up.
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Wah,Wah,Waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah.Bahut khoob.
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wah wah bahut khub
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waah waah bahut hi achchi peshkash premdeep ji. likhte rahiye. dheron daad daad daad.
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thanks to all
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