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«Reply #15 on: January 09, 2009, 11:50:18 AM »
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Waah Ji.Kya Khoob Likha Hai,.
Phirse,.
Nice One,m.
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«Reply #16 on: January 09, 2009, 06:42:00 PM »
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thnx everyone...hum toh bas koshish karte hai likhne ki...thnx for reading..
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«Reply #17 on: January 09, 2009, 06:48:00 PM »
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Quote from: salma786 on January 09, 2009, 10:56:00 AM
Beabru hokar tere darse,
Hum yu chale aye,
Tune jitne sitam kiye,
Uspar aah v na bhar paye!

Jo Karna hi tha khilwad,
Tujhe Meri zindegi se,
Phir mulakat kyu karwai thi,
Tune Meri khusiyo se!

Tadapta chod akele,
Meri duniya le gaya,
Mere janaze ko kandha
Koi Paraya degaya!

Muddato bad mere kaleje ko,
Thandak pahuchane,
Ab aya tu meri kabr pe,
Ashq bahane!!

wah salma jee..kya khoob likha hai...especially the third and fourth stanza..touched my heart emmensely...

Quote from: Jaanasheen on January 09, 2009, 11:03:07 AM
Nice One Salma Ji,.

Sawar Jaati Hai, Zindagi Uski, Jisko Kisi Se Pyaar Hota Hai,.
Mohabbat Milgayi To Meharbaani, Khogayi, To Jeena Dushwaar Hota Hai,.

Bewafaa, To Dil Dukhaata Hai, Zaalim To Sitam Dhaata Hai,.
Yaar To Banta Hai Sahaara, Yaar To Phir Bhi Yaar Hota Hai,.

Dil Se Kaam Karne Waala To Aashiq, Ya Wafadaar Hota Hai,,.
Beshaq Deemaag Se Kaam Karne Waala To Samajhdaar Hota Hai,.

Jisne Kisi Se Dil Na Lagaaya, Usne Kabhi Lutf-e-Zindagi Na Uthaaya,.
Aisa Logon Ka Jeena To "Azeem, Ek Dum Bekaar Hota Hai,.

Zindagi Hi, Jab Nikalti Hai, Bewafaa Yahaan,.
Kaise Samajh Lein Ke Har Koi Wafadaar Hota Hai,.


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wah...har ek lavz main sachai bhari hai...bahaut khoob...

Quote from: salma786 on January 09, 2009, 11:19:44 AM
Ishq mohabbat ke bate,
Sun ne me sache lagte hai,
Par pyar k kasme wade,
Kisso me hi ache lagte hai!

Sawar jati hai zindegi,
Ishq k armaan se?
Mit jati hai hasti,
Is duniya ki pehchaan se!

Ye lagta to hai sahil,
Zindegi k lehro me,
Par dur khada hasta hai,
Jab zarurat ho toofano me!

wah...another beautiful piece of writing....amazing...
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«Reply #18 on: January 09, 2009, 07:23:05 PM »
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kisi ko bhi khushi se milana hume nahin ata,
kisi ke bhi janaze ko kandha dena hume nahin bhata,
shukar man khuda ka ke koi toh aya hai teri kabar pe ashq bahane,
warna ek bewaffa ki kabar pe toh koi gada bhi nahin ata...
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«Reply #19 on: January 10, 2009, 06:11:12 AM »
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Shukriy dead heart ji!!!
Hum to bas aap jaiso se sikh rahe hai Usual Smile
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«Reply #20 on: January 10, 2009, 06:30:47 AM »
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Itna ghamand na hota khudpar,
To ab v sar na uthaye khada hota,
Wafa me jaan gawaai humne,
Varna tu mitti me pada hota!!

Kandha to tab dega tu,
Jab dilse kisike karib hoga,
Mera jo hua hogaya,
Tujhe kandha v na naseeb hoga!

Meri Khushnasibi ka ye alam hai,
Koi to aya ashq bahane,
Tadapta rehjaega tu,
koi na ayega tujhe dafnane!!
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«Reply #21 on: January 10, 2009, 08:20:51 PM »
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Quote from: salma786 on January 10, 2009, 06:30:47 AM
Itna ghamand na hota khudpar,
To ab v sar na uthaye khada hota,
Wafa me jaan gawaai humne,
Varna tu mitti me pada hota!!

Kandha to tab dega tu,
Jab dilse kisike karib hoga,
Mera jo hua hogaya,
Tujhe kandha v na naseeb hoga!

Meri Khushnasibi ka ye alam hai,
Koi to aya ashq bahane,
Tadapta rehjaega tu,
koi na ayega tujhe dafnane!!

wah wah wah wah wah wah!!!! Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Applause Applause Applause Applause hum aapse sikh rahe hai aur aap humse...aise hi yeh mehfil jamegi...i dnt have words to say how gud these lines were...superb amazing outstanding writing...

mana mujhe apne aap pe bahaut ghamand hai,
magar ter guroor bhi toh isse kam nahin hai,
ager mil bhi gaya meeti main toh kya hua,
akhir ek na ek din sabko meeti main hi jana hai...

dil toh ek sheesha hai,
hum sheeshon ke kareeb nahin jate,
ae bewaffa abhi toh tu khuda ke insaaf se bach gayi hai,
warna tere jaise daag bhare dil maut bhi nahin pate...

humara toh dil dafan hogaya,
hume mitti nahin chahiye,
logon ki humare liye mohobat toh tu apne saath hi legaya,
hume ab koi kandha dene wala nahin chahiye...
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«Reply #22 on: January 11, 2009, 06:30:17 AM »
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Shukriya Usual Smile
dil toh ek sheesha hai,
hum sheeshon ke kareeb nahin jate,
ae bewaffa abhi toh tu khuda ke insaaf se bach gayi hai,
warna tere jaise daag bhare dil maut bhi nahin pate...

Kya baat kahi hai apne....bahut khoob Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #23 on: January 11, 2009, 06:50:28 AM »
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Bahut khoob DH ji and Salma  Applause Applause
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«Reply #24 on: January 11, 2009, 06:54:33 AM »
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Shukriya Roja Usual Smile
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«Reply #25 on: January 11, 2009, 10:54:24 AM »
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shukriya Roja jee aur Salma jee...
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«Reply #26 on: January 11, 2009, 11:19:53 AM »
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Applause Applause

Good going DH aur salma ...
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«Reply #27 on: January 12, 2009, 10:44:46 AM »
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Nice One Salma Ji,.
And Dead Heart Bhai,.

And Thank U,.
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«Reply #28 on: January 12, 2009, 10:58:09 AM »
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Shukriya Azeem ji
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«Reply #29 on: January 12, 2009, 05:23:20 PM »
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thnx everyone...
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