hu main bewaffa ....

by VIPAL on June 16, 2007, 03:16:09 PM
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vada karke payar ka
woh zalim ilzam laga gaya

hu main bewaffa keh kar
mera payar dhutkar gaya

kismat meri na jaane kya chahe
ussi ke liye maine khudko tabah kiya

abb hasta hai zamana mere zakhm dekh
ajj bhi chutta aor vartman bhi tar-tar hua


Vipal!!!
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«Reply #1 on: June 17, 2007, 04:07:28 AM »
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Humm.... apke munh se chulbuli baatein hi achi lagati hai...
But nice lines Vipal...

kahati hai jo tumko bewafa
wo khud tumhare layak nahi

na ro uske liye, jisko teri parwah nahi!!!!

zamane ka kaam hai hansna
na tu uski kabhi parwah kar

kismat per rakh apne bharosa
her apne se bas payar kar!!!!
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«Reply #2 on: June 17, 2007, 04:29:28 AM »
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nice ones from both of you.......

Dil toda gaya kai bar mera, chup hi rahe hum,
Muhabbat mein mile the dard kai, sehte gaye hum,
Par ye ilzaam khud pe lene ki takat nahi mujhmein,
Bewafa naam na de koi mujhe, kehte gaye hum.....Usual Smile
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«Reply #3 on: June 18, 2007, 12:45:47 PM »
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vada karke payar ka
woh zalim ilzam laga gaya

hu main bewaffa keh kar
mera payar dhutkar gaya

kismat meri na jaane kya chahe
ussi ke liye maine khudko tabah kiya

abb hasta hai zamana mere zakhm dekh
ajj bhi chutta aor vartman bhi tar-tar hua


Vipal!!!


good going dear, keep writing

tabah hona hee  fitrat hai ishak me aashik kee
kyo baya karete ho dantan jamane me ishk  kee
kon ayega seene se lagane jamana to hansega tum par
ishak to samandar hai dost talash karte rahjaoi ge kinare kee

netra..
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«Reply #4 on: June 18, 2007, 01:39:30 PM »
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Bahot Khoob Vipal,..
Pooja Didi,.,.
Netra Bhai AndThe Creator,..
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«Reply #5 on: June 18, 2007, 01:43:20 PM »
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Bewafaai Me Bhi Uski Wafa Chupi Thi,..
Jisne Bewafaai Humse Wafaa Nibaane Ke Liye Ki,..

Tohmat Na Lagaao Mere Mehboob Par,..
Ke Usne Ye Bhi Adaa Rasme-e-Mohabbat Mitaane Ke Liye Ki,.

____________________________________-Jaanasheen-
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Pooja
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«Reply #6 on: June 20, 2007, 02:37:44 PM »
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bahoot khoob Netra and Jaansheen ji
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«Reply #7 on: June 23, 2007, 10:54:27 AM »
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Kya bat hai.......nice one from everybody.....

Suna hai chalan dunia ka badalne laga hai ab,
Aag ko chod barf se insaan jalne laga hai ab,
Hawa chali hai bewafai ki kuch aisi jahan mein,
Ek wada bhi karne se insaan talne laga hai ab...
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«Reply #8 on: June 26, 2007, 06:04:16 PM »
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bahoot khoob Amit!!
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«Reply #9 on: June 28, 2007, 05:13:49 PM »
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Quote from: "Pooja"
bahoot khoob Amit!!


Thanks again Pooja ............. Winking
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«Reply #10 on: June 29, 2007, 05:45:18 AM »
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Vipal... Very Lovely Post...
Especially these lines...

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abb hasta hai zamana mere zakhm dekh
ajj bhi chutta aor vartman bhi tar-tar hua



Very Nice Additions... Pooja di, Amit, Netra, Azeem.... =D> =D> =D>
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«Reply #11 on: June 29, 2007, 05:47:21 PM »
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Thanks a lot Shikha.....

Nahi gum hai mujhko ki dil ye mera tod diya usne,
Bas yahi dar hai ki kahin ye uski aadat na ban jaye...tongue3
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