hum unka mazaak

by yoshiki on May 25, 2007, 02:32:42 PM
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hey its my 1st post hope u like it
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@unke pyaar mai hum aise jale ki jal kr raakh ho gye,
gunaah lakh kr ke bi ishq ki ibaadat kr hum dil se paak ho gye,
kushi milli tab b hume jb yaar ne hume thukraa diya ...
kum se kum hum unke liye..ek hassi..ek mazaak ho gaye.....
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«Reply #1 on: June 05, 2007, 04:03:43 PM »
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@ zindagi se jo maine maddat mangi to wo inkaar kr haath chod gayi,
galtio se jo maine sikhna chaha to wo b puraani hr baat chod gayi,
socha chalo kalam me hi apne gum sament le,
likhne beti to bewafaa siyaahi bi mera sath chod gayi...
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«Reply #2 on: June 05, 2007, 05:22:32 PM »
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hey its my 1st post hope u like it
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@unke pyaar mai hum aise jale ki jal kr raakh ho gye,
gunaah lakh kr ke bi ishq ki ibaadat kr hum dil se paak ho gye,
kushi milli tab b hume jb yaar ne hume thukraa diya ...
kum se kum hum unke liye..ek hassi..ek mazaak ho gaye.....


hey pooja......
its reaaly very nice.....
   i liked it........
keep going.......
 :heart: do lafzon ki baat thi...
     tum se keh na paayi....
inhi do lafzon ne mujhe...
      umar bhar rulaya....
kehte nahi ab hum.....
       dil ki baat kisi se....
jisey kehna tha....
        use hi na keh paaye..... sad5
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«Reply #3 on: June 06, 2007, 08:35:18 AM »
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Bahoot Khoob Yoindia Shayariadabhika Ji,..

Dard Har Ek Ka Dard Hi Hota Hai...
Kisi Ke Nikalte Hain Baad Me Aansoon,.
Pehle Magar Dil Hi Rota Hai,..

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«Reply #4 on: June 06, 2007, 09:09:32 AM »
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Yoindia Shayariadabhiki aapne bhoot acha likha hai, likte rahiye, jansheen jee ke bare me kuch kahana bhee gustakhi hogi....wo to sada hee bhoot acha likte hai..


khaane ka mja kya  gar usme jahar n ho
peena ka maja nahi maykhane me gar sakee n ho
jeete jindgee ko affree ayeshee me sab musafir
par maja kabhi ataa nahi gar jindgee me dard n ho

netra....
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«Reply #5 on: June 06, 2007, 09:15:57 AM »
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Yoindia Shayariadabhiki aapne bhoot acha likha hai, likte rahiye, jansheen jee ke bare me kuch kahana bhee gustakhi hogi....wo to sada hee bhoot acha likte hai..


khaane ka mja kya  gar usme jahar n ho
peena maja nahi maykhane me gar sakee n ho
jeete jindgee ko affree ayeshee me sab musafir
par maja kabhi ataa nahi gar jindgee me dard n ho

netra....


Bahoot Khoob Netra Bhai,..
Hum To Bhai Aapse Hi To Seekh Rahe Hain..

Zindagi Mein Agar Dard Na Hota,.
To Koi Kisi Ka Dard Na Samajhta,..
Milte Na Hum is Mehfil Mein Aaj "Netra",..
Jab Dil Mein Apne Dard Na Hota...

___________________-Jaanasheen-
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«Reply #6 on: June 06, 2007, 12:35:55 PM »
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Yoindia Shayariadabhiki aapne bhoot acha likha hai, likte rahiye, jansheen jee ke bare me kuch kahana bhee gustakhi hogi....wo to sada hee bhoot acha likte hai..


khaane ka mja kya  gar usme jahar n ho
peena maja nahi maykhane me gar sakee n ho
jeete jindgee ko affree ayeshee me sab musafir
par maja kabhi ataa nahi gar jindgee me dard n ho

netra....


Bahoot Khoob Netra Bhai,..
Hum To Bhai Aapse Hi To Seekh Rahe Hain..

Zindagi Mein Agar Dard Na Hota,.
To Koi Kisi Ka Dard Na Samajhta,..
Milte Na Hum is Mehfil Mein Aaj "Netra",..
Jab Dil Mein Apne Dard Na Hota...

___________________-Jaanasheen-


kya bat hai aisa lag raha hai kee ma ghar par aap se bat kar raha hoo

rah hoti haseen jindgee kee, to gam ke saye bhee hote hai
maltee hai jab bahan aap jaise to bhai gale mil ke rote hai....


aapne bhai kaha bhoot bhoot shukriya.....

netra.....
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«Reply #7 on: June 07, 2007, 04:37:35 AM »
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@galti se mai unse aankhai chaar kar beti..
ret ban samundra ki lehro se pyaar kr beti....
choda saath jab yaar ne to chup chaap seh lia
teri judaai ka gum kya hua,kya khe..............
maut bhi hme apne sath lene se inkaar kr gayi..
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«Reply #8 on: June 07, 2007, 05:29:43 AM »
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@galti se mai unse aankhai chaar kar beti..
ret ban samundra ki lehro se pyaar kr beti....
choda saath jab yaar ne to chup chaap seh lia
teri judaai ka gum kya hua,kya khe..............
maut bhi hme apne sath lene se inkaar kr gayi..


KARNE SE NAHI HOTA HAI ISHK KISI SE BHEE
HOJATA HAI  ISHK BAS NAJARO KE MILNE SE HEE
KYO LAGATE HO TUM ILJAM BEWAFAYEE KA 'JIGAR'
WO TO DAFAN HO GAYE THE TERE ANE SE PAHLE HEE..

netra....



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«Reply #9 on: June 08, 2007, 11:39:28 AM »
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Yoindia Shayariadabhiki aapne bhoot acha likha hai, likte rahiye, jansheen jee ke bare me kuch kahana bhee gustakhi hogi....wo to sada hee bhoot acha likte hai..


khaane ka mja kya  gar usme jahar n ho
peena maja nahi maykhane me gar sakee n ho
jeete jindgee ko affree ayeshee me sab musafir
par maja kabhi ataa nahi gar jindgee me dard n ho

netra....


Bahoot Khoob Netra Bhai,..
Hum To Bhai Aapse Hi To Seekh Rahe Hain..

Zindagi Mein Agar Dard Na Hota,.
To Koi Kisi Ka Dard Na Samajhta,..
Milte Na Hum is Mehfil Mein Aaj "Netra",..
Jab Dil Mein Apne Dard Na Hota...

___________________-Jaanasheen-


kya bat hai aisa lag raha hai kee ma ghar par aap se bat kar raha hoo

rah hoti haseen jindgee kee, to gam ke saye bhee hote hai
maltee hai jab bahan aap jaise to bhai gale mil ke rote hai....


aapne bhai kaha bhoot bhoot shukriya.....

netra.....


Kaise Aaapko Aisa Laga
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«Reply #10 on: June 09, 2007, 01:03:18 PM »
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kyo datrte to dard ke ghane daravne saye se
bana le hamsafar aashik ko, dard bhee to darta hai aashik se

hamne jhele hai thapade gam ke aye mahobaate duniya walo
tham lo ek bar ashik ko jhuk kar neeche, lagalo ek bar use bhee,
apne seene se

netra.......




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«Reply #11 on: September 03, 2007, 04:31:54 PM »
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humne jo har kwaab har sapna unke naam likh diya
unhone kaha ki maine bi apna pyaar tmahre naam likh diya...
fir pata chala ki unke dil mai hamare maiyne kuch na the..
hadd to tab hui... jab unhone apni kitaab mai bhi hamara naam mazaak likh diya
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