ik bat batao tum jana

by anokhiladli on April 06, 2010, 06:46:00 AM
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Mian door to tum say rehti hoon
per  atay  jatay  saroon  say
tumhara pochti rehti hoon
or yuon hi tum say milti hon
kis hal main din main rehtay ho
sooraj keh ker jata hay
ab kis kay sapnay daikhtay ho
chand bata ker jata hay
jo khushboo tum lagatay ho
hawa kay sang to ati hay
tumhari sari batoon ko
barish chore kay jati hay

yoon tum say milna hota hay
or main bhee jeeti rehti hoon

ik bat  bataoo  tum   jana
kaia tum bhee mujh ko sochtay ho
or yuon he mujh ko khojtay ho?Huh?Huh??

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Rajesh Harish
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«Reply #1 on: April 06, 2010, 07:02:18 AM »
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Nice effort
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cara
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«Reply #2 on: April 06, 2010, 07:03:22 AM »
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WAH KYA BAAT HAI        ANOKHILADLI JI.....


TUMSE DOOR RAHEKAR BHI MEH TUMHARE PAAS RAHETI HUN
HAR NAZARON MEIN MEH AKSAR TUMHE MEHSUS KARTI HUN
HAWAON SE BAAT KARTE LAGTA HAI TUMSE BAAT KARTI HUN
MUJHE "EK BAAT TO BATAO JANA"
KYA MEH TUMHARE KHAYALON MEIN HUN


  
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Rajesh Harish
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«Reply #3 on: April 06, 2010, 07:05:35 AM »
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Nice response Cara Ji
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riyaz106
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«Reply #4 on: April 06, 2010, 07:10:48 AM »
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Wah wah Uzma ji bahut achhi peshkash. Purkashish aur behtreen. 
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vb
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«Reply #5 on: May 17, 2010, 04:08:42 PM »
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well.. buhat he khoobsurat see poem hay.. chhoti beher...  saada alfaz k saath..
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«Reply #6 on: May 18, 2010, 11:35:51 AM »
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Wah bahut khoob Uzma ji,very touching and beautiful creation,great lines by Cara ji.keep it up icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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