Iñtêkääm

BUSDIL Kahdu use ya RAHNE DU chup rahun Ya SABSE KAHDU EHSAS NAHI JISE wafai ka use BEWAFA kahdu ya rAHNE DUN

wah mian wah , kia jaunpur ka naam raushan kia hai,
inteqaam hi lena hai to dhang se lain kia hai allah ki tarah chutki lene ki koshish ker rahe hai, woh bhi raigaan ja rahi hai,

mia shair hi likhna tha to kisi se udhar manng liya hotta

kuin khud ka aur shairi ki --------- kerwa rahe hain , sorry to say.

Sheba ji yeh confusing nahin hai , inhain khud nahin ilm hai keh kia kahna ya masg dena chah rahe hain . uski bewafai to samajh mein aa gayee mager apni baat samajh mein nahin aayee , jisko chahete hain usko kabhi naam nahin dharte  yani badnaam nahin kerte hain , zahir hai shayed isi herkat se bewafayee ka tauq mila hai,


main nahin chaheta tha ke likhon mager jaunpur phir aap ka jumla in cheezoon ne likhne per majboor ker diya

shukria

javed

samajh naheen aayaa

  Sheba ji aur javed bhai sukriya aap ne bilkul sahi comment arj kiya miya ye shayri samjh se pare jaroor hai per agr itni jayda ghadiya hai ki mai  yahan apni TOOTI FOOTI NA SAMJH sayri na likhu to mai yahan dubara koi shayri nahi likhunga.

janab jaunpuri Sb


yaar samajhne aur khud ko durust kerne ke bajaiye buzdili dekhana yeh mard ka sheva nahin hoota

aagay mashallah se aap samajhdaar hain

main aap ki her mumkin khidmat ke l;iye hazir hun

apka

javed

amman hum samajhte they kuch qaide ki baat karaingay, afsoos sad afsoos , banjar zameen ko zerkhaiz nahin banaya ja sakta
shukria

Jawed uncle aaj kal thoda busy hai  kisi din tumhare jajbato ko bhi dekh lenge