Itna Jeete Jee...........(Ghayel)

by sajid_ghayel on October 26, 2008, 01:12:57 PM
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Itna jeete jee tune use sataya hoga
Baad marne ke tere woh muskaraya hoga

Muje bhulne wale us pal to mera khayal aaya hoga
Jab kisi apne ne tujko bhi bhulaya hoga

Jab dil tera bhi kisi ne dukhaya hoga
Karna us waqt ehsas, tune kitna muje rulaya hoga

Koi sher kabhi tujko GHAYEL ka bhaya hoga
Jab tera nam meri ghazlo me aaya hoga

                             -Sajid Ghayel-
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«Reply #1 on: October 26, 2008, 02:10:41 PM »
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bohat khoob sajid ji...very nice Applause Applause
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«Reply #2 on: October 26, 2008, 02:14:17 PM »
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Thanks Tanha
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«Reply #3 on: October 27, 2008, 11:01:46 AM »
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Wonderful Ghayel Ji  Applause Applause
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«Reply #4 on: October 27, 2008, 11:17:01 AM »
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Itna jeete jee tune use sataya hoga
Baad marne ke tere woh muskaraya hoga

Muje bhulne wale us pal to mera khayal aaya hoga
Jab kisi apne ne tujko bhi bhulaya hoga

Jab dil tera bhi kisi ne dukhaya hoga
Karna us waqt ehsas, tune kitna muje rulaya hoga

Koi sher kabhi tujko GHAYEL ka bhaya hoga
Jab tera nam meri ghazlo me aaya hoga

                             -Sajid Ghayel-


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Nice lines Sajid ji..
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«Reply #5 on: October 28, 2008, 03:24:41 AM »
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Thanks Rajesh and Honey
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«Reply #6 on: October 28, 2008, 04:07:16 AM »
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nice sharing SG ji
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«Reply #7 on: October 28, 2008, 09:32:43 AM »
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nice sharing SG ji
Again nice sharing hello madam actually yeh nice sharing to tab likha jata hain na jab kisi aur writer ka kam post karo to usually to aisa hi ho raha hain lekin aap ke dimag me kya chal raha hain mere samaj me nahi aa raha hain anyway main phir ek baar bata du yeh kalam bhi mera hai isi liye mere nam likha hain SAJID GHAYEL under it
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«Reply #8 on: November 02, 2008, 03:01:05 PM »
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Nice One Sajid Bhaiyaa,.
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«Reply #9 on: November 02, 2008, 06:55:17 PM »
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thanks janasheen
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«Reply #10 on: November 03, 2008, 09:59:49 AM »
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Welcome Bhai,.

Bewafaai Tu Kar Shauk Se, Magar Is Baat Ka Bhi Ilam Rakhna,.
Main Phir Bhi Insaan Hoon, Sehne Paaoonga Tera har Sitam,.

Tu De Mujhe, Har Roz Ek Naya Zakham Dil Pe "Jaanasheen",.
Toot Jaoonga Main Bhi, Insaan Jo Hoon Sehna Sakoonga Tera Har Gham,.

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