Itna Tarsa hu....

by Saavan on July 28, 2012, 05:32:33 PM
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Itna Tarsa hu 'kinare' ke liye..
Ki meri ummidon me koi Sahil na raha,
Gum to akele hi kate hai apne..
Ab khushiyon me bhi koi shamil na raha,
Ichhayen to sab hui puri apni..
Par ab bhi mujhe kuchh hasil na raha,
Anpadh hota... To sukun tha..
Badkismati itni hai ki mai Zahil na raha,
Apne labon se padha maut ka paigam maine..
Ki mai uski wafa ki ab Manzil na raha,
Tod dala in karamati hatho ko Zamane me..
Khata thi ki mai kabhi Kahil na raha,
Bikhare pade hai iske Tukde har ik raah me..
Ye dil aie 'Saavan' ab kisi ke Kabil na raha.
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«Reply #1 on: July 28, 2012, 06:17:55 PM »
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Saavan Jee Aadaab!


Janab bahut khoob ... badi hi khoob kalaam kahi hai aapne...
Sabhi khayaal behad dilfareb rahe... Aap ki kalam meiN
real shayri ki spirit hai... Aap behad achcha likhate hai
janab... Usual Smile Aapki writting ki pratibha aapko yakeenan uncha
le jayeNgi... Usual Smile

Is khoob kalaam par humari dheroN daad .. kabul kijiye..

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Quote from: Saavan on July 28, 2012, 05:32:33 PM
Itna Tarsa hu 'kinare' ke liye..
Ki meri ummidon me koi Sahil na raha,
Gum to akele hi kate hai apne..
Ab khushiyon me bhi koi shamil na raha,
Ichhayen to sab hui puri apni..
Par ab bhi mujhe kuchh hasil na raha,
Anpadh hota... To sukun tha..
Badkismati itni hai ki mai Zahil na raha,
Apne labon se padha maut ka paigam maine..
Ki mai uski wafa ki ab Manzil na raha,
Tod dala in karamati hatho ko Zamane me..
Khata thi ki mai kabhi Kahil na raha,
Bikhare pade hai iske Tukde har ik raah me..
Ye dil aie 'Saavan' ab kisi ke Kabil na raha.
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«Reply #2 on: July 28, 2012, 06:37:09 PM »
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Quote from: Saavan on July 28, 2012, 05:32:33 PM
Itna Tarsa hu 'kinare' ke liye..
Ki meri ummidon me koi Sahil na raha,
Gum to akele hi kate hai apne..
Ab khushiyon me bhi koi shamil na raha,
Ichhayen to sab hui puri apni..
Par ab bhi mujhe kuchh hasil na raha,
Anpadh hota... To sukun tha..
Badkismati itni hai ki mai Zahil na raha,
Apne labon se padha maut ka paigam maine..
Ki mai uski wafa ki ab Manzil na raha,
Tod dala in karamati hatho ko Zamane me..
Khata thi ki mai kabhi Kahil na raha,
Bikhare pade hai iske Tukde har ik raah me..
Ye dil aie 'Saavan' ab kisi ke Kabil na raha.


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«Reply #3 on: July 28, 2012, 10:19:29 PM »
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Beautifulllllllllllllllllll
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«Reply #4 on: July 28, 2012, 10:57:35 PM »
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«Reply #5 on: July 29, 2012, 12:13:20 AM »
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Quote from: Saavan on July 28, 2012, 05:32:33 PM
Itna Tarsa hu 'kinare' ke liye..
Ki meri ummidon me koi Sahil na raha,
Gum to akele hi kate hai apne..
Ab khushiyon me bhi koi shamil na raha,
Ichhayen to sab hui puri apni..
Par ab bhi mujhe kuchh hasil na raha,
Anpadh hota... To sukun tha..
Badkismati itni hai ki mai Zahil na raha,
Apne labon se padha maut ka paigam maine..
Ki mai uski wafa ki ab Manzil na raha,
Tod dala in karamati hatho ko Zamane me..
Khata thi ki mai kabhi Kahil na raha,
Bikhare pade hai iske Tukde har ik raah me..
Ye dil aie 'Saavan' ab kisi ke Kabil na raha.

bahut khoob
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«Reply #6 on: July 29, 2012, 12:15:59 AM »
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Bahut umda.
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«Reply #7 on: July 29, 2012, 01:49:39 AM »
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beautiful
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«Reply #8 on: July 29, 2012, 01:55:26 AM »
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Good one Savan jee
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«Reply #9 on: July 29, 2012, 02:41:52 AM »
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bahut badhiya bahut umda likha savan ji.... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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