Jab Bachay Thay tu Dartay Thay Andheeron Say ...........:Shayeri for Dard -e- Bewafai

Farhan Sohail

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Yeh Behar (Metre) Sirf apni Muzahaf shakal main mustamal hai,

jab bachay thay tu dartay thay andheeron say
Baray ho ker woh dartay hain saweeron say

jiss Ishq ki Rahbri main chora hai ghar
fun seekh ker aya tha woh luteeron say

Daikh ker insaa'n se insaa'n ki adawat pher
saanpon nay dosti ker li sapeeron say

Din kahin paa na jaye shab ka yeh raaz
Main poch ker nikalta hon andheeron say

Jis yaar ko mangaa tha duaoon se
Lay gaya koi chheen ker lakeeron say

FARHAN SOHAIL


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Advo.RavinderaRavi

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Re: Jab Bachay Thay tu Dartay Thay Andheeron Say ...........

«Reply #1 on: March 24, 2013, 01:55:16 AM »

Nice,,,,,,,,,


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ParwaaZ

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Re: Jab Bachay Thay tu Dartay Thay Andheeron Say ...........

«Reply #2 on: March 24, 2013, 02:04:34 AM »

Farhaan Sahaab Aadaab!

Janab humara ilm bher ke hadh tak toH zyaada nahi hai par hume aapki kalaam meiN
kuch hadh tak rawaani narzar aayi aur kayiN sher rawaani se hat gaye....

HaaN par ashaaroN meiN kuch zyaada gehraai aur khubsurati nahi lagi.. shaayd
humara zaheN itna qabil nahi ke hum aapke khayaal samjh sake..

Par aapki kalaam ka yeH sher hume behad khoob laga is par humari hazaaroN dili daad
O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye...

daikh ker insaa'n se insaa'n ki adawat pher
saanpon nay dosti ker li sapeeron say

Baqee toH aapko ustaad shohara tanqeed de hi deNge... ke kahaaN kahaaN khamiyaaN nazar
aayi unhe..

Likhate rahiye.. aate rahiye.. Shaad O aabaad rahiye..
Khuda Hafez...


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laaiba

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Re: Jab Bachay Thay tu Dartay Thay Andheeron Say ...........

«Reply #3 on: March 24, 2013, 02:18:03 AM »

Quote from: Farhan Sohail on March 24, 2013, 01:35:03 AM

Faa-II-Laa-Tan Faa-II-Laa-Tan Mus-Taf-II-Lun

Yeh Behar (Metre) Sirf apni Muzahaf shakal main mustamal hai,

jab bachay thay tu dartay thay andheeron say
Ab baray ho ker dartay hain saweeron say

waah khoob matla hai ,...
jiss Ishq ki Rahbri main chora hai ghar
fun seekh ker aya tha woh luteeron say

laajawab,.....
daikh ker insaa'n se insaa'n ki adawat pher
saanpon nay dosti ker li sapeeron say
haasil e ghazal yehi sher hai ,....bohat c daad,

Din kahin paa na jaye yeh shab ka raaz
Main poch ker nikalta hon andheeron say
khubsurat khyal

Jis yaar ko mangaa tha duaoon se
Lay gaya koi chheen ker lakeeron say

lajawab maqte ke sath behtereen ghazal,....
farhan sohail ji ,.....bohat bohat c daad ,.....

FARHAN SOHAIL


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Miru;;;;

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Re: Jab Bachay Thay tu Dartay Thay Andheeron Say ...........

«Reply #4 on: March 24, 2013, 03:51:31 AM »


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Re: Jab Bachay Thay tu Dartay Thay Andheeron Say ...........

«Reply #5 on: March 24, 2013, 07:59:02 AM »

bahut khoob


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BANSI DHAMEJA

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«Reply #6 on: March 24, 2013, 12:28:33 PM »

very nice.
likhte rahiye


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aqsh

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«Reply #7 on: March 24, 2013, 07:49:32 PM »

behad khoob. bahut achche ehsaas o khayaal rahe. dheron daad.


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