jeena btaya

by nutan.zu on March 30, 2010, 08:38:18 AM
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wo keha karte the ki meri jaan, zindgi gujaro nhi zindgi jio.
maine keha tha- jina esi ka to naam hai
aaj jb jaan atki hai unke bagair to jana ki gujarna v to esi ka naam hai.
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«Reply #1 on: March 30, 2010, 08:53:15 AM »
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hey Nutan .. Nice try

Welcome to Yoinidia....keep writing

Jeene ki ummeed me zindagi guzarte rahe
Toot k bikharta tha woh aur hum sanwarte rahe



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«Reply #2 on: March 30, 2010, 08:57:35 AM »
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talab karke dekha humne mout ka manzar,
bhot khub tha teri berukhi se.....
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«Reply #3 on: March 30, 2010, 08:58:10 AM »
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sabaji bhot khub...
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«Reply #4 on: March 30, 2010, 09:55:02 AM »
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Welcome to Yoindia Nutan...!!!

Aur aapne jo likha hai bahut achcha likha hai...  Clapping Smiley
keep writing...
All the best...!!!

wo keha karte the ki meri jaan, zindgi gujaro nhi zindgi jio.
maine keha tha- jina esi ka to naam hai
aaj jb jaan atki hai unke bagair to jana ki gujarna v to esi ka naam hai.


Aapne bahut pyara likha hai Saba ji... Bahut khoob...!!! Clapping Smiley
Jeene ki ummeed me zindagi guzarte rahe
Toot k bikharta tha woh aur hum sanwarte rahe


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«Reply #5 on: March 30, 2010, 01:06:58 PM »
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Shukriya Klaskar Ji

Aapne bahut pyara likha hai Saba ji... Bahut khoob...!!! Clapping Smiley



Jeene ki ummeed me zindagi guzarte rahe
Toot k bikharta tha woh aur hum sanwarte rahe


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