Jindgi hamari .......... anmol arora

by anmolarora on November 18, 2012, 06:23:08 AM
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Bari mushkil se bhula paye the tujhe ,
Mager aa ker tune yad taza ker di ,
Rok nahi sakte hum zakhmi dil ko ,
zindgi hamari jahanum bana ker rakh di .
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«Reply #1 on: November 18, 2012, 07:33:59 AM »
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Please lafzon ko sahi likhiye.
muskil(mushkil)
bulla(bhula)
taja(taza)
jakhmi(zakhmi)
jindagi(zindagi)
jahnum(jahannum).

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«Reply #2 on: November 18, 2012, 08:00:00 AM »
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Correction Is Done And Thank u So Much For Appreciation And Mistakes Information A R Z Ji ..
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«Reply #3 on: November 18, 2012, 08:05:15 AM »
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 Applause
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«Reply #4 on: November 18, 2012, 08:09:51 AM »
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Quote from: sksaini4 on November 18, 2012, 08:05:15 AM
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Tah dil se sukhriya sk saini ji
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«Reply #5 on: November 18, 2012, 02:04:33 PM »
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nic lines .. par mai kehna chahunga :

agar mohobat thi kabhi to dekh k vo chehra muskan to ayi to hogi ...
chahe kuch pal k liye he sahi, ishq-e-khumar ki raat chayi hi to hogi..

jahanum to mastishq mai bana hoga anmol g
dil mai janaat ki ehsaas ayii to hogi ......

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«Reply #6 on: November 18, 2012, 04:11:11 PM »
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very nice
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«Reply #7 on: November 19, 2012, 06:03:03 AM »
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bahut khoob
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«Reply #8 on: November 19, 2012, 09:44:03 AM »
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kya bat hai gajb yaar....
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«Reply #9 on: November 19, 2012, 12:03:16 PM »
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Quote from: roy on November 18, 2012, 02:04:33 PM
nic lines .. par mai kehna chahunga :

agar mohobat thi kabhi to dekh k vo chehra muskan to ayi to hogi ...
chahe kuch pal k liye he sahi, ishq-e-khumar ki raat chayi hi to hogi..

jahanum to mastishq mai bana hoga anmol g
dil mai janaat ki ehsaas ayii to hogi ......


Sukhriya roy ji ....
aap ne bhi kafi aacha likha hai
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«Reply #10 on: November 19, 2012, 12:03:54 PM »
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Quote from: aqsh on November 19, 2012, 06:03:03 AM
bahut khoob
Bahut bahut sukhriya aqsh ji
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«Reply #11 on: November 19, 2012, 12:04:40 PM »
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Quote from: nandbahu on November 18, 2012, 04:11:11 PM
very nice
Aap ka bahut bahut sukhriya nand bahu ji
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«Reply #12 on: November 19, 2012, 12:07:03 PM »
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Quote from: satyawan sharma on November 19, 2012, 09:44:03 AM
kya bat hai gajb yaar....
sukhriya satyawan ji
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«Reply #13 on: November 19, 2012, 12:42:41 PM »
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Quote from: anmolarora on November 19, 2012, 12:03:16 PM
Sukhriya roy ji ....
aap ne bhi kafi aacha likha hai

shukriya jnab ... bas apka thought churaya tha tongue3
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«Reply #14 on: November 19, 2012, 12:51:56 PM »
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Quote from: roy on November 19, 2012, 12:42:41 PM
shukriya jnab ... bas apka thought churaya tha tongue3
koi bat nahi janab ye to pyaar hai aap ka
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