jinse milne ki tamanna thi ek muddat se

by disha on October 19, 2004, 11:00:49 AM
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jinse milne ki tamanna thi ek muddat se
wo mile bhi to yun mile
ki hum aah bhar kar reh gaye
wo sir jhuka kar chale gaye
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«Reply #1 on: October 21, 2004, 10:34:28 AM »
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hi disha\
really u wrote so well
keep it up
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«Reply #2 on: October 21, 2004, 01:20:33 PM »
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nice disha
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«Reply #3 on: October 24, 2004, 10:38:47 PM »
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good one

tune ki bewafai hamse ,
iss bedard zamane ke liye
ab zamane se rudana kaisa,
jab thu hi nahi hai hame manane ke liye.
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«Reply #4 on: October 24, 2004, 10:48:19 PM »
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wah!!!!!!
thune choda tha mujhe
iss bedard jamane ke liye,
zamane se ab rhudna kaisa,
jab thu hi nahi hai manane ke liye.
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«Reply #5 on: October 27, 2004, 07:23:42 AM »
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nice one akela ji

kya kya bataayein hum, yahaan sau gham hain bataane ke liye
rooth kar chup baithein bhi kaise, kaun aayegaa humein manaane ke liye
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«Reply #6 on: October 28, 2004, 11:02:32 PM »
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good disha
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«Reply #7 on: October 31, 2004, 06:32:52 AM »
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thanx raj
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«Reply #8 on: October 31, 2004, 05:16:55 PM »
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nice one akela ji

kya kya bataayein hum, yahaan sau gham hain bataane ke liye
rooth kar chup baithein bhi kaise, kaun aayegaa humein manaane ke liye


nice all!

Ruth kar meri zindagi say wo kuchh is kadar chalay gaye,
Mano baharon mein kiza kay aatay hi, sab patay beekhar gaye,
Awaaz dekar rokna bi chaha tha unhain, magar
Wo damaan mera jhatak kar chalay gaye
Ab to baithi hoon un bin udaas, gumsum aur tanha,
Jhulsay phool jaisay meray daman mein bar gaye!
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«Reply #9 on: November 01, 2004, 06:48:57 AM »
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nice khushboo

Log dete rahe kya kya na dilase mujhko
zakhm gehra hi sahi zakhm hai bhar jayega,
ankh chaphke hi na kahin raah andheri hi sahi
aage chal ke kisi mord pe mil hi jayega..... (NM)
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«Reply #10 on: November 01, 2004, 04:35:06 PM »
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nice work ..... disha........akela.,,,...khushboo.........nishita....

aynon ke ada na apnao
aynay to khafa bhi hote hain
derd ke intiha na samjho
derd be intiha bhi hote hain
khud ko shamil na kero logon main
log to be wafa bhi hote hain    (nm)..................
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«Reply #11 on: November 02, 2004, 10:46:18 PM »
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Nice disha, akela, khushboo, nishita and Waheed_rose!!!!!!!
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«Reply #12 on: November 03, 2004, 08:19:11 AM »
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thanx pooja..............
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«Reply #13 on: November 06, 2004, 06:41:34 AM »
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thanx all
i m having my examz now...n so i want ur good wishes
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«Reply #14 on: November 06, 2004, 08:18:33 AM »
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best of luck disha.........
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