Jis Rehguzar se Guzar gyaa:Shayeri for Dard -e- Bewafai

Alam Qazi

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Jis rehguzar se guzar gya, wafaa ki justuzu mein mai
Mile hai khaar har samt, Har jagaa beshumaar
Tadap rahaa tha deed ko, Mai kisi ki yaad mein
Huwee Gark wafa-e-aarzoo, Ashk mile behsumaar
Jo kabhi the humkadam, Har jaga har nazar
Nazar bhi woh badal gayee. Roya hai dil zaar zaar !!!!! :cry: :cry: :cry:


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Sahiba Zehra

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Jis Rehguzar se Guzar gyaa

«Reply #1 on: August 09, 2007, 07:10:41 AM »

wah wah
boht acha laga Alam G !


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Alam Qazi

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«Reply #2 on: August 13, 2007, 02:36:26 PM »

Quote from: "Alam Qazi"

shukriya zahra !! once again !!! mujhe behad khushi hoti hai, jab koi appreciate karta hai, par kya karoon mujhe sirf dard ke siwa aur kuch nahi likhna aata,
meri zindagi hai kya, ek tanha laash
jise phir raha hoon lekar, gali gali shaher shaher !!!!


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Sahiba Zehra

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Jis Rehguzar se Guzar gyaa

«Reply #3 on: August 13, 2007, 07:49:36 PM »

alam G
ye kya hua apko

wo log bad kismat hote hain jo sache pyar ko nahi pehchan pate
woh bad kismat hain jinhone apko nahi samjha


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Talat

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«Reply #4 on: August 13, 2007, 09:01:06 PM »

Aapne bohot achcha likha hai Alam Sahab....Zindagi se itna maayoos nahin hote, maayoosi kufr hai....Humari dua hai ki aap ki zindagi phir se muskurane lage Usual Smile


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Shikha12

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Jis Rehguzar se Guzar gyaa

«Reply #5 on: August 14, 2007, 01:02:26 PM »

Bahut hi achha likha hai aapne... Usual Smile

Is kadar zindagi se mayoos ho kar chale hai,
Hum ishq mein khud ko hi kho kar chale hai!!
Ilzaam unke saare humne sir pe utthaye hai,
Ye baat aur hai Palkon ko bhigo kar chale hai!!!


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Talat

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«Reply #6 on: August 14, 2007, 01:17:11 PM »

Waah Shikha !! Good one !! Usual Smile

Jaane kaisa bojh hai dil par, jaane kaisi yeh kahani hai
Bahar hai ek shor barpah, dil main chaayi veerani hai
Bewafa samjhe wo humko, hum bhi hain lab siye hue
Koi na jaane, khusk aankhon main askhon ki ravani hai !!!!


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Shikha12

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Jis Rehguzar se Guzar gyaa

«Reply #7 on: August 14, 2007, 01:21:02 PM »

Its So Beautiful.. Talat... =D>
Really Too Good....

Iska Reply dene ke liye mujhe kam se kam 1 month ki leave leni padegi... :D
Really have no reply for now...


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Talat

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«Reply #8 on: August 14, 2007, 01:41:44 PM »

Thanks so much Shikha......getting such appraisal from you is really very encouraging !! :D


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«Reply #9 on: August 14, 2007, 07:24:10 PM »

Sab achha achha likh rahe hain,
Let me JOIN too..

Bewafa aur nahi.. humari humse zindagani hai,
Kaifiyat hi aise hai.. bass ab yuhin nibhani hai,
Kisi k tasavvur mein ab bhi hum shamil toh hain ..
Lekin woh jo meri zindagi ab kisi aur ki rawani hai !!!


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Roja

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«Reply #10 on: August 15, 2007, 02:16:48 AM »

Quote from: "Alam Qazi"

Alam ji bahut dard bara sher likha aapne.....
Kuch aap k sher se milta hua kalam pesh karti hu ...

Sahiba, Talat, Shikha and Mr Ricky ... aap sab ne b
bahut accha likha..

Chordkar chale gaye vo hame aise halathon main
Roti hu yaad kar unko mai chandni rathon main
Unka hi jikr aata hai "roja" ke her sher main
Jisne ker diya pagal hame chand mulakaton main.. :cry: [/color]


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«Reply #11 on: August 15, 2007, 07:05:21 PM »

Thankyou Roja !

You also did write nice one.


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Talat

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«Reply #12 on: August 16, 2007, 10:56:33 AM »

Thank You Ricky.... Roja.....for the appreciation. You also wrote nice ones.


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«Reply #13 on: August 17, 2007, 11:55:59 AM »

bahut acha likha hai sabhi ne . . .

Ricky ji aap isi trah likhte rahiye aap acha likhte ho. . .humne abhi tak bahut kum post dekhe hai aapke . . .umeed hai ab dher saari aapki shayeri padhne milegi


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