Jishm zinda raha mann se marne laga... "manjum"

by manjum on January 19, 2011, 09:19:45 AM
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Zakh jab mere sine ke bharne laga.
Tab naye waar wo mujh pe karne lage.

Uske aane ki ummid itni rahi.
Phool bankar khile aur bikharne lage.

Ye khabar jab udi ke aane wale hain wo,
Uski yadon main ham sanwarne lage.

Chhod kar jab gaye sath apne sabhi,
Jishm zinda rahe mann se marne lage.

Toot kar usko chaha dilo jan se,
Ye wajah thi ki had se gujarne lage.

manjum  "mann"
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«Reply #1 on: January 19, 2011, 10:06:57 AM »
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kya baat kya baat.
""
iss dard ka daaman ab chodo tum
     nagme khushiyon ke ab bolo tum
jo chala gaya wo sangdil tha
     uski hi yaad me yun na khud ko hi dubo lo tum
""
thanx
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«Reply #2 on: January 19, 2011, 11:17:40 AM »
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kya kahne manjum ji.....
kamal likha hai....
sabh ashaar khoob lage....
bht bht khoob...
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«Reply #3 on: January 19, 2011, 11:28:18 AM »
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bahut khoob manjum ji..

dher saari daad~
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«Reply #4 on: January 19, 2011, 02:30:22 PM »
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Quote from: manjum on January 19, 2011, 09:19:45 AM
Zakh jab mere sine ke bharne laga.
Tab naye waar wo mujh pe karne lage.

Uske aane ki ummid itni rahi.
Phool bankar khile aur bikharne lage.

Ye khabar jab udi ke aane wale hain wo,
Uski yadon main ham sanwarne lage.

Chhod kar jab gaye sath apne sabhi,
Jishm zinda rahe mann se marne lage.

Toot kar usko chaha dilo jan se,
Ye wajah thi ki had se gujarne lage.

manjum  "mann"

Bahut Umdaa ehsaas se labrez rahi aapki ghazal ... manjum Ji !

Very Nice Creation ... tahe dil se daad hazir hai ... ! Applause Clapping Smiley Applause

likhte rahen aage bhi ... khush rahen ... !  

duaaon ke saath ... !
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«Reply #5 on: January 20, 2011, 03:25:27 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriya niralaji...

aapki koshish jari hai hamse khushi ke geet likhwane ki aur khush rahne ki Duao ki

bahut bahut shukriya..
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«Reply #6 on: January 20, 2011, 03:26:36 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriya anshuji...

yun hi pasand karte rahen aur daad dete rahen..

shukriya.
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«Reply #7 on: January 20, 2011, 03:33:48 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriya abhiji....
tun hi duaye dete rahen..
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«Reply #8 on: January 20, 2011, 03:43:18 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriya manzilji...

yun hi sath rahen...

daad dete rahen..
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«Reply #9 on: January 20, 2011, 04:43:54 AM »
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kya kare humari to aadat hai--
masti me rahne aur sabko khus dekhne ki
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«Reply #10 on: January 20, 2011, 04:50:00 AM »
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thanks....
shukriya...
dhanywad....
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nirala
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«Reply #11 on: January 20, 2011, 05:13:47 AM »
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aji isme sukriya ki ka baat hai
bas khus reh lo yahi kaafi h
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manjum
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«Reply #12 on: January 20, 2011, 05:23:41 AM »
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aap duayen dete rahen ham khush rah lenge..ji

shukriya
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nirala
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«Reply #13 on: January 20, 2011, 05:43:52 AM »
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hahaha
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Rishi Agarwal
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«Reply #14 on: January 21, 2011, 05:10:19 PM »
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Bahut Khub Manjum Ji Yuhi LIkhte Rahiye Aur khush Rahiye

Rishi
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