Jishm zinda raha mann se marne laga... "manjum" -Panna 2:Shayeri for Dard -e- Bewafai

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«Reply #15 on: January 22, 2011, 03:48:58 AM »

bahut bahut shukriya rishiji....

sath rahen


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Re: Jishm zinda raha mann se marne laga... "manjum"

«Reply #16 on: January 22, 2011, 05:55:26 AM »

mastam post manjum maza aagaya padhkar.... dard bhari gazal....

lamha lamha jab wo muh humse ferne lage
unki niyat ko tab hum samjhne lage

pyaar me unke kya kya karti chali gai
apni harkaton pe khud sharmsaar hone lage...


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Re: Jishm zinda raha mann se marne laga... "manjum"

«Reply #17 on: January 22, 2011, 11:04:05 AM »

Quote from: manjum on January 19, 2011, 09:19:45 AM

Zakh jab mere sine ke bharne laga.
Tab naye waar wo mujh pe karne lage.

Uske aane ki ummid itni rahi.
Phool bankar khile aur bikharne lage.

Ye khabar jab udi ke aane wale hain wo,
Uski yadon main ham sanwarne lage.

Chhod kar jab gaye sath apne sabhi,
Jishm zinda rahe mann se marne lage.

Toot kar usko chaha dilo jan se,
Ye wajah thi ki had se gujarne lage.

manjum "mann"


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Re: Jishm zinda raha mann se marne laga... "manjum"

«Reply #18 on: January 24, 2011, 03:56:31 AM »

bahut bahut shukriya Yaashji...

duaye dete rahen.


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Re: Jishm zinda raha mann se marne laga... "manjum"

«Reply #19 on: January 24, 2011, 04:24:23 AM »

Quote from: manjum on January 19, 2011, 09:19:45 AM

dil ko chhuu gaye ehsaas ... Manjum Ji !

bahut umdaa likha hai aapne ... ek asardaar peshkash ... dil se daad ... aise hi likhte rahen ... khush rahen ... !

duaaon ke saath ... !


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Re: Jishm zinda raha mann se marne laga... "manjum"

«Reply #20 on: January 24, 2011, 04:41:32 AM »

bahut bahut shukriya anshuji..
yun hi duaye aur daad dete rehan...


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Re: Jishm zinda raha mann se marne laga... "manjum"

«Reply #21 on: January 27, 2011, 09:02:24 AM »

Manjum jee Aadaab!

Aapko is kalaam par deri se nazar gayi...
Takheer se aane ke liye mazrrat chahate hai...

Behad laa-jawaab tehreer se nawaaza hai aapne..

Quote from: manjum on January 19, 2011, 09:19:45 AM

Zakham jab mere sine ke bharne lage.
Tab naye waar wo mujh pe karne lage.

Behad khoob aur dilfareb matlaa kaha hai Manjum jee daad hazir hai

Uske aane ki ummid itni rahi.
Phool bankar khile aur bikharne lage.

Masha Allah kia kahne hai .. Bahut umdaa
Behad khoob khayaal " Phool bankar khile aur bikharne lage" Amazing thought..

Ye khabar jab udi ke aane wale hain wo,
Uski yadon main ham sanwarne lage.

Achcha khayaal hai daad ..

Chhod kar jab gaye sath apne sabhi,
Jism zinda rahe mann se marne lage.

Waah jee waah bahut khoob bahut umdaa

Toot kar usko chaha dilo jan se,
Ye wajah thi ki had se gujarne lage.

Bahut umdaa Manjum jee bahut khoob... )

manjum "mann"

Manjum Jee aapki is kalaam ke sabhi ashaar beintehaaN khoob hai... Har ashaar par daad kabool kijiye...

Aise hi umdaa kalaamoN ke saath aate rahiye...
Khush O aabaad rahiye....
Khuda Hafez


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Re: Jishm zinda raha mann se marne laga... "manjum"

«Reply #22 on: January 27, 2011, 09:07:24 AM »

Quote from: manjum on January 19, 2011, 09:19:45 AM

Bahut Bahut Khoob Manjum Ji..

Lajawaab Peshkash!!!


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Re: Jishm zinda raha mann se marne laga... "manjum"

«Reply #23 on: January 28, 2011, 05:11:15 AM »

bahut bahut shukriya parwazji... bahut bahut shukriya...

aapki daad sar aankho dil dimag sab par
dis se bahut shukriya..

sath rahiye... khush rahiye


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Re: Jishm zinda raha mann se marne laga... "manjum"

«Reply #24 on: January 28, 2011, 05:12:47 AM »

bahut bahut shukriya khawaishji... yun hi sath rahiye
mushkurahe rahiyae sada


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Re: Jishm zinda raha mann se marne laga... "manjum"

«Reply #25 on: January 28, 2011, 05:15:32 AM »

kya baat hai kasak...
sach ese laga jaise mere hi dil ki baat kahi hai tumne...

shukriya


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Re: Jishm zinda raha mann se marne laga... "manjum"

«Reply #26 on: January 29, 2011, 09:55:43 PM »

Dil se daad hai..
bahaut bahaut khoob..
Applause

Khush rahiye..!


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Re: Jishm zinda raha mann se marne laga... "manjum"

«Reply #27 on: January 30, 2011, 04:19:03 AM »

Manju kahan ho --??
missing u sad5


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Re: Jishm zinda raha mann se marne laga... "manjum"

«Reply #28 on: February 01, 2011, 11:57:42 AM »

bahut bahut shukriya rahimji... duaye dete rahen....

sath rahen...


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Re: Jishm zinda raha mann se marne laga... "manjum"

«Reply #29 on: February 01, 2011, 12:00:33 PM »

han niralaji... bahut bahut shukriya aapko ki meri kami mahsus ho rahi hai...

yun hi yad karte rahiye..

hai yahin hain par thoda sa kaam jyada hai islie kuchh likh nahin pa rahe aur padhne ka time bhi nahin mil raha... sorry bahut jldi hi kuchh ache geet ghazalo ke sath aate haain...


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