jo dil tuta ek bar mera....premdeep

by premdeep on July 01, 2013, 09:00:39 PM
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Jo unse pyaar karte rahe
khata har bar karte  rahe

Raat ke panchi the hum
din me shikaar karte rahe

jo dil tuta ek bar mera
tukde hazar karte rahe

Zindagi se dosti ka
maut se karar karte rahe

Berukhi ke khanzar se wo
har bar vaar karte rahe

Dard ke pahlu se lipte
chahat ka intezaar karte rahe
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«Reply #1 on: July 01, 2013, 09:20:53 PM »
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Quote from: premdeep on July 01, 2013, 09:00:39 PM
Jo unse pyaar karte rahe
khata har bar karte  rahe

Raat ke panchi the hum
din me shikaar karte rahe

jo dil tuta ek bar mera
tukde hazar karte rahe

Zindagi se dosti ka
maut se karar karte rahe

Berukhi ke khanzar se wo
har bar vaar karte rahe

Dard ke pahlu se lipte
chahat ka intezaar karte rahe
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«Reply #3 on: July 02, 2013, 02:19:36 AM »
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Jo unse pyaar karte rahe
khata har bar karte  rahe

Raat ke panchi the hum
din me shikaar karte rahe

jo dil tuta ek bar mera
tukde hazar karte rahe

Zindagi se dosti ka
maut se karar karte rahe

Berukhi ke khanzar se wo
har bar vaar karte rahe

Dard ke pahlu se lipte
chahat ka intezaar karte rahe

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