~*~*~Kami Thi~*~*~

by pankshivam on February 04, 2009, 01:49:52 PM
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Roshan thi har shay zindagi teri,
Par teri mehfil me parvano ki kami thi...

Dhadhak jaye dil, thi aadaye lakh aaisi tujhme,
Sambhal paye dilko aaise deewano ki kami thi...

Dekar aawaz rok leti mujhko,
Thi kitani tanhayi mujhme, afsano ki kami thi...

Behate rahe jasbaat khamosh samandar me lehron ki tarah,
Mera dard mitane, kuch tufano ki kami thi...

~Pank~
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«Reply #1 on: February 04, 2009, 02:04:05 PM »
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Roshan thi har shay zindagi teri,
Par teri mehfil me parvano ki kami thi...

Dhadhak jaye dil, thi aadaye lakh aaisi tujhme,
Sambhal paye dilko aaise deewano ki kami thi...

Dekar aawaz rok leti mujhko,
Thi kitani tanhayi mujhme, afsano ki kami thi...

Behate rahe jasbaat khamosh samandar me lehron ki tarah,
Mera dard mitane, kuch tufano ki kami thi...

~Pank~

Wah wah kya khoob likha aapne Pank ji..
Bahut accha laga padkar Applause Applause. Good work... Keep up.
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Talat
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«Reply #2 on: February 04, 2009, 02:25:46 PM »
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Bohot Khoob Pank Ji..Yunhi likhte rahiyega.
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pankshivam
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«Reply #3 on: February 04, 2009, 03:07:38 PM »
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Shukriya Rojaji
Shukriya Celmiraji
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salma786
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«Reply #4 on: March 12, 2009, 08:15:47 AM »
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Roshan thi har shay zindagi teri,
Par teri mehfil me parvano ki kami thi...

Dhadhak jaye dil, thi aadaye lakh aaisi tujhme,
Sambhal paye dilko aaise deewano ki kami thi...

Dekar aawaz rok leti mujhko,
Thi kitani tanhayi mujhme, afsano ki kami thi...

Behate rahe jasbaat khamosh samandar me lehron ki tarah,
Mera dard mitane, kuch tufano ki kami thi...

~Pank~

Applause Applause Applause Bahot khoob!

Thi jalne ki tamanna is shama ki,
Bas kisi parwane ki kami thi!

Tha noor jahan kaa mere chehre me,
Bas kisi parkhi nazar ki kami thi!

Adaaye to thi shok jawani ki mujhme,
Bas kisi jawaan mohabbat ke irado ki kami thi!

Dil dhadkana to khoob ata tha,
Bas dhadkan ko samajhta aise diwane ki kami thi!

Tanhaayion ki adat si ho hi gayi thi,
Sath rakh pate aise afsano ki kami thi!

Sailabo se takrane ki tamanna to rakhte the,
Par samna hota mera aise toofano ki kami thi!

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«Reply #5 on: March 12, 2009, 09:59:28 AM »
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Applause Applause Applause Bahot khoob!

Thi jalne ki tamanna is shama ki,
Bas kisi parwane ki kami thi!

Tha noor jahan kaa mere chehre me,
Bas kisi parkhi nazar ki kami thi!

Adaaye to thi shok jawani ki mujhme,
Bas kisi jawaan mohabbat ke irado ki kami thi!

Dil dhadkana to khoob ata tha,
Bas dhadkan ko samajhta aise diwane ki kami thi!

Tanhaayion ki adat si ho hi gayi thi,
Sath rakh pate aise afsano ki kami thi!

Sailabo se takrane ki tamanna to rakhte the,
Par samna hota mera aise toofano ki kami thi!


Very Nice Salmaji
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salma786
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«Reply #6 on: March 12, 2009, 10:10:17 AM »
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Thank you pank ji Usual Smile
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deepika_divya
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«Reply #7 on: March 12, 2009, 10:13:18 AM »
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Very Very Nice Pankj Ji. bahoot khoob likha hai aapne

Gud work Salma..
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pankshivam
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«Reply #8 on: March 12, 2009, 10:17:03 AM »
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Thank you pank ji Usual Smile

Ur Welcome Salmaji
Achha Likhne ke Bad Tarifon ke Liye Taiyar Raha Kijiye  Thumbs UP
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«Reply #9 on: March 12, 2009, 10:17:42 AM »
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Very Very Nice Pankj Ji. bahoot khoob likha hai aapne

Gud work Salma..
Shukriya Sophiji
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Roja
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«Reply #10 on: March 17, 2009, 02:56:21 AM »
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Applause Applause Applause Bahot khoob!

Thi jalne ki tamanna is shama ki,
Bas kisi parwane ki kami thi!

Tha noor jahan kaa mere chehre me,
Bas kisi parkhi nazar ki kami thi!

Adaaye to thi shok jawani ki mujhme,
Bas kisi jawaan mohabbat ke irado ki kami thi!

Dil dhadkana to khoob ata tha,
Bas dhadkan ko samajhta aise diwane ki kami thi!

Tanhaayion ki adat si ho hi gayi thi,
Sath rakh pate aise afsano ki kami thi!

Sailabo se takrane ki tamanna to rakhte the,
Par samna hota mera aise toofano ki kami thi!


Wooow Salma dear... Bahut khoob.. Applause
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salma786
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«Reply #11 on: March 17, 2009, 04:21:41 AM »
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Shukriya Roja dear Usual Smile
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