Khaamosh raatoin meine

by Shweta_v7 on June 14, 2005, 06:03:39 PM
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Khaamosh raato meine tumhee yaad kiya kartee hai
Tamam umar kuch isee kadar jiya kartee hai
Lahu kee lagam koo rafter diya kartee hai
Apni khawaeshyoo koo har fakat tamam kiya kartee hai
Yaad aate hai woh saath beetayee woh afsaneee
Jab kabhi hum apnee liyee jeeyaa kartee hai
Maut kee vashindee darwazee par khadee hasaa kartee hai
Kya tujhe lee jayee jhanum meine, usee kee chaya tere ghar par padee patee hai
Agar ab humnee derr karee penee meine
Apnee liyee janaat kee mahekahnee mein, botltee meien maut khadee patee hai..
Aakhari hichaki aanee see phele bas itna aur bata jatee hai
Hum toh mar chukee barsoo phele…ruhu koo lenee yeh log aayee hai

~~NM
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«Reply #1 on: June 15, 2005, 04:11:21 PM »
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Very Nice shweta ji.......spec. these line "Aakhari hichaki aanee see phele bas itna aur bata jatee hai
Hum toh mar chukee barsoo phele…ruhu koo lenee yeh log aayee hai "
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«Reply #2 on: June 17, 2005, 12:43:07 AM »
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Khaamosh raato meine tumhee yaad kiya kartee hai
Tamam umar kuch isee kadar jiya kartee hai
Lahu kee lagam koo rafter diya kartee hai
Apni khawaeshyoo koo har fakat tamam kiya kartee hai
Yaad aate hai woh saath beetayee woh afsaneee
Jab kabhi hum apnee liyee jeeyaa kartee hai
Maut kee vashindee darwazee par khadee hasaa kartee hai
Kya tujhe lee jayee jhanum meine, usee kee chaya tere ghar par padee patee hai
Agar ab humnee derr karee penee meine
Apnee liyee janaat kee mahekahnee mein, botltee meien maut khadee patee hai..
Aakhari hichaki aanee see phele bas itna aur bata jatee hai
Hum toh mar chukee barsoo phele…ruhu koo lenee yeh log aayee hai

~~NM

HI SWETA NICE SENTENCE ...........
Aakhari hichaki aanee see phele bas itna aur bata jatee hai
Hum toh mar chukee barsoo phele…ruhu koo lenee yeh log aayee

US HANSI RAAT ME HAMNE BHI CHAND KO HASTE DEKHA HAI
HAM KYA KISIKA GHAR UJADE HAMNE TO KHUD APNA GHAR UJADTE DEKHA HAI
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«Reply #3 on: June 17, 2005, 09:43:13 AM »
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Khaamosh raato meine tumhee yaad kiya kartee hai
Tamam umar kuch isee kadar jiya kartee hai
Lahu kee lagam koo rafter diya kartee hai
Apni khawaeshyoo koo har fakat tamam kiya kartee hai
Yaad aate hai woh saath beetayee woh afsaneee
Jab kabhi hum apnee liyee jeeyaa kartee hai
Maut kee vashindee darwazee par khadee hasaa kartee hai
Kya tujhe lee jayee jhanum meine, usee kee chaya tere ghar par padee patee hai
Agar ab humnee derr karee penee meine
Apnee liyee janaat kee mahekahnee mein, botltee meien maut khadee patee hai..
Aakhari hichaki aanee see phele bas itna aur bata jatee hai
Hum toh mar chukee barsoo phele…ruhu koo lenee yeh log aayee hai

~~NM


wow,its so nice,so real Usual Smile liked it a lot shweta ji.
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«Reply #4 on: June 17, 2005, 10:46:06 AM »
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Nice one Shweta.......keep writing.......................................... .......
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«Reply #5 on: June 17, 2005, 11:32:27 AM »
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Khaamosh raato meine tumhee yaad kiya kartee hai
Tamam umar kuch isee kadar jiya kartee hai
Lahu kee lagam koo rafter diya kartee hai
Apni khawaeshyoo koo har fakat tamam kiya kartee hai
Yaad aate hai woh saath beetayee woh afsaneee
Jab kabhi hum apnee liyee jeeyaa kartee hai
Maut kee vashindee darwazee par khadee hasaa kartee hai
Kya tujhe lee jayee jhanum meine, usee kee chaya tere ghar par padee patee hai
Agar ab humnee derr karee penee meine
Apnee liyee janaat kee mahekahnee mein, botltee meien maut khadee patee hai..
Aakhari hichaki aanee see phele bas itna aur bata jatee hai
Hum toh mar chukee barsoo phele…ruhu koo lenee yeh log aayee hai

~~NM


very  nice  shweta................last  two  lines  very  touching..........
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