khalta hu(CSET)

by MANOJ6568 on August 28, 2010, 05:50:48 AM
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nazer mei jiske harwaqt mei khalta hu
use na paake bus harbaar haath malta hu

Haar jaata hu apni he her ek chaal per
jo bhi chaal use paane ke liye chalta hu

jiske liye manoj din raat mei marta hu
na paake use suraj ki tarah dhalta hu
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«Reply #1 on: August 28, 2010, 05:58:58 AM »
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Bahut khoob
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«Reply #2 on: August 28, 2010, 06:06:43 PM »
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Quote from: Rajesh Harish on August 28, 2010, 05:58:58 AM
Bahut khoob



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«Reply #3 on: August 28, 2010, 07:38:11 PM »
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nice one...!!!
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«Reply #4 on: August 29, 2010, 07:44:32 PM »
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Quote from: klaskar on August 28, 2010, 07:38:11 PM
nice one...!!!

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«Reply #5 on: August 29, 2010, 08:28:55 PM »
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Manoj Jee aadaab!

Aapke sabhi ashaar khoob lage... behad achcha likhate hai aap... Guzarish hai kalaam ko pura kijiye....

Likhate rahiye...
Khush rahiye....
Khuda Hafez...         
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«Reply #6 on: August 29, 2010, 08:44:48 PM »
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Quote from: ParwaaZ on August 29, 2010, 08:28:55 PM
Manoj Jee aadaab!

Aapke sabhi ashaar khoob lage... behad achcha likhate hai aap... Guzarish hai kalaam ko pura kijiye....

Likhate rahiye...
Khush rahiye....
Khuda Hafez...         


hausalaafsai ke liye sukariya
kalaam kaise pura karu,mei nahi samjh pa raha
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«Reply #7 on: August 29, 2010, 09:30:08 PM »
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Jee Janab chand ashaar aur jodiye kam se kam 5/ 7 sher to kahiye..... tab jake yeh mukammal ho jayengi... Usual Smile         
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«Reply #8 on: August 30, 2010, 03:13:07 AM »
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ok kausis karuga
Quote from: ParwaaZ on August 29, 2010, 09:30:08 PM
Jee Janab chand ashaar aur jodiye kam se kam 5/ 7 sher to kahiye..... tab jake yeh mukammal ho jayengi... Usual Smile         

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