khula darwaja:Shayeri for Dard -e- Bewafai

saaz_haldwanvi

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kuchh lines meri nayi composition se lekar aake janib paish kar raha huN ,ye meri kitab
"muhhajab lehje" se lee gayee hai, ye composition thori badi hai, chunache kuchh lines hi likh raha huN jo mujhe pasand hain,

"TUFAAN GUJAR JATE HAIN,PICHHE CHOD JATE HAIN
KUCHH DARWAJE TUTE HUE,KUCHH DEEWARE DHAYEE HUYEE
AISE MEIN WO DEEWARE DIKHTI NAHI,JIS PER
PATKA THA TUNE DARWAJA,
CHALO -- , DARWAJA TO KHULA
TUTA HI SAHI," [ SAAZ HALDWANVI]

[ COPY RIGHT RESERVED]
"padne waalo se ilteja hai ki aap log is composition ki soul ko, iske mufhum ko likh kar mujhe reply de"


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khamosh_aawaaz

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Re: khula darwaja

«Reply #1 on: May 21, 2009, 09:50:55 AM »

Quote from: saaz_haldwanvi on May 21, 2009, 08:44:34 AM

KAFI ACHCHI LINES HAIN ..SAAZ SB...ISS LINES KO PADH KAR HAR INSAAN APNEY NAZARIYE SEY MATLAB NIKAA LEGAA...!!


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saaz_haldwanvi

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Re: khula darwaja

«Reply #2 on: May 21, 2009, 09:57:21 AM »

Quote from: khamosh_aawaaz on May 21, 2009, 09:50:55 AM

KAFI ACHCHI LINES HAIN ..SAAZ SB...ISS LINES KO PADH KAR HAR INSAAN APNEY NAZARIYE SEY MATLAB NIKAA LEGAA...!!

thank khamosh ji,
but i just want to know your point of view in this composition, aap ko kya lagta hai?


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