Khuli Jo Aankh..:Shayeri for Dard -e- Bewafai

ajnabee22

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Khuli jo aankh to wo tha na wo zamana tha
Dahekti aag thi tanhaai thi fasana tha.

Ye kya ki chand hi qadmo pay thak ke baith rahay
Tumhay to saath mera door tak nibhana tha

Mujhay jo meray lahu main duboo ke guzra hai
Wo koi ghair nahi yaar ek puraana tha

Ghamo ne baant liya hai mujhay yoon aapas main
ke jaisay main koi loota hoa khazaana tha


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Meena

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Khuli Jo Aankh..

«Reply #1 on: April 06, 2005, 05:13:40 PM »

beautifulllllllllllllll!!!!!!!!! esp ur last 4 lines toooooo kamal ki hai ajnabee ji!!!!!!! keep it up!!!!!!!!!

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Re: Khuli Jo Aankh..

«Reply #2 on: January 22, 2009, 04:08:03 PM »

NIce One,.


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Re: Khuli Jo Aankh..

«Reply #3 on: January 22, 2009, 04:29:49 PM »

Quote from: ajnabee22 on April 05, 2005, 08:56:40 AM

wah wah wah wah...kya khoob likha hai...
"Mujhay jo meray lahu main duboo ke guzra hai
Wo koi ghair nahi yaar ek puraana tha

Ghamo ne baant liya hai mujhay yoon aapas main
ke jaisay main koi loota hoa khazaana tha".. yeh chaar lines ne toh jaise loot lia hume...very very good...


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Rajesh Harish

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Re: Khuli Jo Aankh..

«Reply #4 on: January 22, 2009, 05:17:14 PM »

Nice one Ajnabee Ji


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