Ki gujara jamana yad aa sa gaya hai

by nandbahu on October 03, 2012, 05:15:17 AM
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Unse mulakat kuchh iss terah huyee
Ki gujra jamana yad aa sa gaya hai

Mehphil mein ajnabee se baithe rahe vo
Hume unka apna banana yad aa sa gaya hai

Hath kisi ka thhame ja rahe thhe vo
Hume baho ka ghera yad aa sa gaya hai

Khul ke muskurane ka andaj aisa vo
Aaj "Nand" ko ghayal kar sa gaya hai
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«Reply #1 on: October 03, 2012, 05:43:48 AM »
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waah bahut khoob
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bahut khoob........  Applause Applause
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gud creation......
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bahut khoob.......
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«Reply #6 on: October 03, 2012, 06:04:57 PM »
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Quote from: nandbahu on October 03, 2012, 05:15:17 AM
Unse mulakat kuchh iss terah huyee
Ki gujra jamana yad aa sa gaya hai

Mehphil mein ajnabee se baithe rahe vo
Hume unka apna banana yad aa sa gaya hai

Hath kisi ka thhame ja rahe thhe vo
Hume baho ka ghera yad aa sa gaya hai

Khul ke muskurane ka andaj aisa vo
Aaj "Nand" ko ghayal kar sa gaya hai


Very beautiful creation and very nice thoughts.. Nand saheb, aapke liye kuch mashvira hai,

Aap apne talaffus pe dhyan dijiye, yaani Aapka J aur Z main farak kijiye. 

Apne jo pehla sher likha hai, woh kuch iss tarah hona chahiye tha

Unse mulakat kuchh iss terah huyee
Ki guzra zamana yad aa sa gaya hai


Umeed hai mujhe apna muhib mante hue aapk ghaur farmayenge aur bura nahi manenge.

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«Reply #7 on: October 07, 2012, 05:00:49 PM »
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shukriya CIC ji, aage se dhyan rakhunga
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«Reply #8 on: October 11, 2012, 05:50:03 AM »
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thanx saini ji
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thanx vimmi ji
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shukriya aqsh ji
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dhanyavad ritesh ji
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