kiska jor hota hai

by bekarar on June 11, 2011, 05:00:40 PM
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सीना मेरा, बंदूक उनकी, कंधा किसी और का होता है,
दिलों को तोड़ने का ये तमाशा रोज़ होता है

भरम कायम भी रहने दूं की उसका दिल रह जाए,
मगर फ़ितरत की पाबंदी पे किसका ज़ोर होता है,

seena mera, banduk unki, kandha kisi aur ka hota hai,
dilon ko todne ka ye tamasha roz hota hai

Bharam kayam bhi rahne dun ki uska dil rah jaaye,
Magar fitrat ki pabandi pe kiska jor hota hai,
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«Reply #1 on: June 11, 2011, 05:37:47 PM »
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Bhuat Khoob Bekarar g
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«Reply #2 on: June 12, 2011, 04:57:02 AM »
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Bekarar Sahab,

Bahut khoob kya baat hai...
dili mubaraqbaad..

Takreeban 10-12 saal pahle kahee
ek nazm yaad aa gayee...

diloN meN phir woH pahle see mohabbat ho agar paida
yakeenan ho naheeN sakta jahaaN meN koyee shar paida

All the best.

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«Reply #3 on: June 12, 2011, 05:02:57 AM »
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bekaraar ji bahut achha sher.
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«Reply #4 on: June 12, 2011, 05:54:37 AM »
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सीना मेरा, बंदूक उनकी, कंधा किसी और का होता है,
दिलों को तोड़ने का ये तमाशा रोज़ होता है

भरम कायम भी रहने दूं की उसका दिल रह जाए,
मगर फ़ितरत की पाबंदी पे किसका ज़ोर होता है,

seena mera, banduk unki, kandha kisi aur ka hota hai,
dilon ko todne ka ye tamasha roz hota hai

Bharam kayam bhi rahne dun ki uska dil rah jaaye,
Magar fitrat ki pabandi pe kiska jor hota hai,


Bahut Khoooooooob ...... bekarar Ji !
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Quote from: Sanjeev kash on June 11, 2011, 05:37:47 PM
Bhuat Khoob Bekarar g

shukriya sanjeev bhai  Usual Smile
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Quote from: Shihab on June 11, 2011, 08:13:09 PM
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Bahut Bahut Khub Bhai Sanjeev Ji

Shad o Aabad Rahiye...

~Shihab~

bahoot shukriya..bhai shihab   Usual Smile
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Quote from: Satish Shukla on June 12, 2011, 04:57:02 AM
Bekarar Sahab,

Bahut khoob kya baat hai...
dili mubaraqbaad..

Takreeban 10-12 saal pahle kahee
ek nazm yaad aa gayee...

diloN meN phir woH pahle see mohabbat ho agar paida
yakeenan ho naheeN sakta jahaaN meN koyee shar paida

All the best.

Satish Shukla 'Raqeeb'
 

bahoot shukriya aapki housala-afzai ka satish ji...aur aapki likhi do panktiyan bhi khoob rahi
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Quote from: SURESH SANGWAN on June 12, 2011, 05:02:57 AM
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bekaraar ji bahut achha sher.


aapki daad sar aankhon pe suresh ji
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Quote from: Anshumali on June 12, 2011, 05:54:37 AM
Bahut Khoooooooob ...... bekarar Ji !

shukriya naesh ji......... Usual Smile
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सीना मेरा, बंदूक उनकी, कंधा किसी और का होता है,
दिलों को तोड़ने का ये तमाशा रोज़ होता है

भरम कायम भी रहने दूं की उसका दिल रह जाए,
मगर फ़ितरत की पाबंदी पे किसका ज़ोर होता है,

seena mera, banduk unki, kandha kisi aur ka hota hai,
dilon ko todne ka ye tamasha roz hota hai

Bharam kayam bhi rahne dun ki uska dil rah jaaye,
Magar fitrat ki pabandi pe kiska jor hota hai,


gud one
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«Reply #11 on: June 26, 2011, 03:39:37 PM »
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bahut khoob bekarar ji.......wah
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bahut khoob likha hai aapne bekrar bhayi

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bahut khub likha hai bekarar ji
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