Kuch Dhundhli Dhundhli..........(Ghayel)

by sajid_ghayel on October 24, 2008, 07:09:47 AM
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Kuch dhundhli dhundhli yadein, kuch tute fute alfaz
Aaj in dono ko jodne jo lage ghazel ban gayee

Kuch tere jhoothe wade, kuch mera tujpe aitbaar
Kissa jo apna sunane lage ghazal ban gayee

Kuch teri bewafai jana, kuch doston ke sitam
Yeh eenam jama jab karne lage ghazal ban gayee

Kuch dard jo ab tak baki hain, kuch zakhm jo ab tak taza hain
Dawa aaj inki jo karne lage ghazal ban gayee

Kuch teri muskurahat, kuch meri aakho se behte aasoo
Aakhe nam dekh meri jab woh hasne lage ghazal ban gayee

Tuje mehfile mubarak, humko bhali tanhaiee
Tanhayee se jab uktane lage ghazal ban gayee

Tujko mili shohrat, hame gumnamiya shehar ki
Jab humko sab ghayel pukarne lage ghazal ban gayee.

                    -Sajid Ghayel- tearyeyed
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«Reply #1 on: October 24, 2008, 07:12:41 AM »
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 Applause  Applause  Applause
BAHUT KHOOB BAHUT UMDA AUR LAJAWAAB
KALAM...
SAJID JI,
BY. K.SHAEL
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«Reply #2 on: October 24, 2008, 07:21:16 AM »
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kuch teri gum ki batein, kuch tera pagalpan
aaj humko yaad aaya to ghazel ban gayee
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«Reply #3 on: October 24, 2008, 07:39:29 AM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause
Wah wah bohat khoob Sajid ji jawab nahi aapka too good..


Kuch hasratein kuch nadaaniyan humen aapke kareeb layee
Jahan bhi dekhun wahan sirf aapki parchayee nazar aayee   
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«Reply #4 on: October 24, 2008, 07:43:04 AM »
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thanks honey and definately a very beautiful sher by you just change parchaiyan to parchayee its singular in this case.
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«Reply #5 on: October 24, 2008, 07:47:04 AM »
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Quote from: sajid_ghayel on October 24, 2008, 07:21:16 AM
kuch teri gum ki batein, kuch tera pagalpan
aaj humko yaad aaya to ghazel ban gayee

KUCH TERI BEWAFAI, KUCH MERI WAFA
AAJ MUJHE YAAD AAYI TO GHAZEL BAN GAYI
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«Reply #6 on: October 24, 2008, 07:53:28 AM »
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Quote from: sajid_ghayel on October 24, 2008, 07:43:04 AM
thanks honey and definately a very beautiful sher by you just change parchaiyan to parchayee its singular in this case.

Sure Sajid ji..and thank you
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«Reply #7 on: October 24, 2008, 08:49:03 AM »
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Quote from: sajid_ghayel on October 24, 2008, 07:09:47 AM
Kuch dhundhli dhundhli yadein, kuch tute fute alfaz
Aaj in dono ko jodne jo lage ghazel ban gayee

Kuch tere jhoothe wade, kuch mera tujpe aitbaar
Kissa jo apna sunane lage ghazal ban gayee

Kuch teri bewafai jana, kuch doston ke sitam
Yeh eenam jama jab karne lage ghazal ban gayee

Kuch dard jo ab tak baki hain, kuch zakhm jo ab tak taza hain
Dawa aaj inki jo karne lage ghazal ban gayee

Kuch teri muskurahat, kuch meri aakho se behte aasoo
Aakhe nam dekh meri jab woh hasne lage ghazal ban gayee

Tuje mehfile mubarak, humko bhali tanhaiee
Tanhayee se jab uktane lage ghazal ban gayee

Tujko mili shohrat, hame gumnamiya shehar ki
Jab humko sab ghayel pukarne lage ghazal ban gayee.

                    -Sajid Ghayel- tearyeyed



Nice

Nice lines Honey sis, Shael
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«Reply #8 on: October 24, 2008, 11:24:43 AM »
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[b[Nice One sajid,.
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«Reply #9 on: October 25, 2008, 03:39:05 AM »
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thanks to all of you
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«Reply #10 on: October 25, 2008, 03:42:01 AM »
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Quote from: k.shael on October 24, 2008, 07:47:04 AM
KUCH TERI BEWAFAI, KUCH MERI WAFA
AAJ MUJHE YAAD AAYI TO GHAZEL BAN GAYI

Kuch suhane sapne kuch kadwi sach_chai
zindagi se jab yeh tohfe mile ghazal ban gayee
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«Reply #11 on: October 25, 2008, 08:07:00 AM »
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AANKHON ME AANSOO AUR DIL ME DARD JAB
SAMBHAL NA PAAYI, KALAM PAKDI JO HAATHON
NE TO GHAZAL BAN AAYI...
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«Reply #12 on: October 25, 2008, 08:07:55 AM »
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Labon Me Basi Dabi Dabi Si Hasi Ho TuM
Ya LafzonMe Chhalakti Shayri Ho TuM
TuM Pyar Ho Ya Mohabbat Is Dilki,
Ya Ho Meri Bandagi Ya Ibadat Ho TuM,
Fizaon Me Khilti Khoobsurat Bahar Ho TuM,
Mere Dilpe Chhaya Halka Halka Sa KhuMar Ho TuM,
Bebas Khwab Mere Mera Har Khayal Ho TuM,
Zindagi Ko Sanso Se Jodta Hua Ek Aisa Bandhan Ho TuM,
Ya Ho Zindagi Kuch Jaani-Anjaani Raahein TuM,
Ya Ho Mere Nadaan Dil Ki Har Ek Nadaani TuM,
Mujhe Jo Madhosh Kar De Wo Nasha Ho TuM,
Kuch Ankahe Jazbaat, Kuch KhaMosh Ehsaas Ho TuM



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«Reply #13 on: October 25, 2008, 08:32:08 AM »
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nice sharing dd
Quote from: Daredevil on October 25, 2008, 08:07:55 AM
Labon Me Basi Dabi Dabi Si Hasi Ho TuM
Ya LafzonMe Chhalakti Shayri Ho TuM
TuM Pyar Ho Ya Mohabbat Is Dilki,
Ya Ho Meri Bandagi Ya Ibadat Ho TuM,
Fizaon Me Khilti Khoobsurat Bahar Ho TuM,
Mere Dilpe Chhaya Halka Halka Sa KhuMar Ho TuM,
Bebas Khwab Mere Mera Har Khayal Ho TuM,
Zindagi Ko Sanso Se Jodta Hua Ek Aisa Bandhan Ho TuM,
Ya Ho Zindagi Kuch Jaani-Anjaani Raahein TuM,
Ya Ho Mere Nadaan Dil Ki Har Ek Nadaani TuM,
Mujhe Jo Madhosh Kar De Wo Nasha Ho TuM,
Kuch Ankahe Jazbaat, Kuch KhaMosh Ehsaas Ho TuM



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«Reply #14 on: October 26, 2008, 11:47:08 AM »
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Good Sharing Rishi Ji,.
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