Kuch Idhar Ki, Kuch Udhar Ki

by Preet.Dehlvi on November 03, 2010, 05:09:41 AM
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Kuch Mujhe Pata Tha Apne Gham Ka,
Kuch Tumhe Khabar Thi Apne Dil Ki.

Kuch Aansoo Nikle The In Ankhon Se,
Kuch Aankhen Thi Udhar Bhi Bhari Si.

Kuch Hal-e-Dil Kehna Chahte The Hum,
Kuch Lakeeren Thi Udhar Bhi Lafzon Ki.

Kuch Khawab Toot-Te Ja Rahe The Idhar
Kuch Udhar Thi Nishaniyan Nabaad Gharon Ki.

Kuch Kahaniyon Ko Anjaam Na De Paye Hum,
Kuch Katran-e Thi Udhar Bhi Pannon Ki.

Kuch Hum Nijaat Chahte The Zindagi Se Apni,
Kuch Taiyariyan Thi Udhar Bhi Safar Ki.
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«Reply #1 on: November 03, 2010, 06:30:06 AM »
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bahut khoob preet ji...bahut achha lika he apne..

last ke dono antare bahut achhe lage...dheer saari daad..yunhi likhte rahiye~
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«Reply #2 on: November 03, 2010, 07:13:08 AM »
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wahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh.........preet ji bhtttttttttt mast likha hai aapne......maza aagaya padhke yar...waiting more from ur side.....
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«Reply #3 on: November 03, 2010, 02:48:44 PM »
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Kuch Hal-e-Dil Kehna Chahte The Hum,
Kuch Lakeeren Thi Udhar Bhi Lafzon Ki.


Kuch Kahaniyon Ko Anjaam Na De Paye Hum,
Kuch Katran-e Thi Udhar Bhi Pannon Ki.

Kuch Hum Nijaat Chahte The Zindagi Se Apni,
Kuch Taiyariyan Thi Udhar Bhi Safar Ki.


Preet jee Aadaab!

Bahot khoob likha hai janab aapne daad.....
Khususan hume qouted ashaar behad khoob lage..

Dil se daad kabool kijiye......
Likhate rahiye.....
khush O aabaad rahiye...
Khuda Hafez.....
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«Reply #4 on: November 03, 2010, 08:43:59 PM »
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Ek alag type of poem parrne mili..
bahaut bahaut khoob..
Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #5 on: November 04, 2010, 12:39:08 PM »
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Good one Preet ji..... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Sunaayi tumne jo khabar kuchh idharki kuchh udharki
Mach gayee khalbali kuchh idhar bhi kuchh udhar bhi




Kuch Mujhe Pata Tha Apne Gham Ka,
Kuch Tumhe Khabar Thi Apne Dil Ki.

Kuch Aansoo Nikle The In Ankhon Se,
Kuch Aankhen Thi Udhar Bhi Bhari Si.

Kuch Hal-e-Dil Kehna Chahte The Hum,
Kuch Lakeeren Thi Udhar Bhi Lafzon Ki.

Kuch Khawab Toot-Te Ja Rahe The Idhar
Kuch Udhar Thi Nishaniyan Nabaad Gharon Ki.

Kuch Kahaniyon Ko Anjaam Na De Paye Hum,
Kuch Katran-e Thi Udhar Bhi Pannon Ki.

Kuch Hum Nijaat Chahte The Zindagi Se Apni,
Kuch Taiyariyan Thi Udhar Bhi Safar Ki.

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Preet.Dehlvi
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«Reply #6 on: January 21, 2011, 12:46:57 AM »
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बहुत दिनों के बाद YOINDIA पर मेरी वापसी हुई है.
बहुत बहुत शुक्रिया अभी जी, कसक जी, परवाज़ जी, रहीम जी और कोयल जी. आपको मेरा लिखा पसंद आया मैं आपका तहे दिल से धन्यवाद् करता हूँ.
एक छोटा सा शेर पेश-ऐ-खिदमत है -

"यादों की गलियों में भटक रहे हैं बहुत से चेहरे,
पर तुम्हारा चेहरा तो हर मोड़ पर पाते हैं हम.
तकदीरों ने हमसे बेवफाई की भी तो क्या,
तुम्हारी पलकों में तो अब भी वफ़ा के कतरे पाते हैं हम".
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«Reply #7 on: January 21, 2011, 09:59:11 AM »
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kamal hai preetji bahut khub

kahan the ab tak pada kaise nahin hamne aapko...

 Applause Applause Applause
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