------ /// Kuch sukhey phool hain bas /// ------

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pyaar bhare khat na rahe, na mehek bhare phool rahe,
kuch tukde kaagaz k aur kuch sukhey phool hain bas,

kal tak jab wo thi meri, hum har pal khush hi rahe,
kuch uski yaadein hain ab aur kuch zaalim dard hai bas,

pyaar bhara dil tha ye kal, aaj isme kuch bhi na raha,
kuch khule ghaaw hain ab aur kuch harey zakhm hain bas,

ab dil me na mohabbat hai, na pyaar bhare ehsaas rahe,
kuch jhooti kasme hain aur kuch toote vaade hain bas,

khwaab tha ye, jeewan k har pal me saath uska hal pal ho,
kuch tute huye sapne hain ab aur kuch adhure khwaab hain bas,

na zindagi se pyaar hai ab , na jeene ki koi chaah rahi,
kuch bachi hui saanse hain aur kuch bache dhadkan hain bas,

ab humse na koi ghazal bana, na laal koi gulaab raha,
kuch bikhre huye alfaaz hain aur kuch sukhey phool hain bas...
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«Reply #1 on: April 25, 2010, 11:40:30 PM »
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Bahut khoob Kapil ji.dil ko chu jaati hai aapke poem hamesha.bahut dard,sachai aur khoobsurat poem pesh kiya aapne.great creation.keep up the good work.excellent Hats off to you! Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause icon_thumleft
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«Reply #2 on: April 26, 2010, 06:23:32 AM »
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pyaar bhare khat na rahe, na mehek bhare phool rahe,
kuch tukde kaagaz k aur kuch sukhey phool hain bas,

kal tak jab wo thi meri, hum har pal khush hi rahe,
kuch uski yaadein hain ab aur kuch zaalim dard hai bas,

pyaar bhara dil tha ye kal, aaj isme kuch bhi na raha,
kuch khule ghaaw hain ab aur kuch harey zakhm hain bas,

ab dil me na mohabbat hai, na pyaar bhare ehsaas rahe,
kuch jhooti kasme hain aur kuch toote vaade hain bas,

khwaab tha ye, jeewan k har pal me saath uska hal pal ho,
kuch tute huye sapne hain ab aur kuch adhure khwaab hain bas,

na zindagi se pyaar hai ab , na jeene ki koi chaah rahi,
kuch bachi hui saanse hain aur kuch bache dhadkan hain bas,

ab humse na koi ghazal bana, na laal koi gulaab raha,
kuch bikhre huye alfaaz hain aur kuch sukhey phool hain bas...

Bahut Khoob likha hai aap ne Kapil
Itni khoobsoorti se dard ki mala ko piroya hai
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«Reply #3 on: April 26, 2010, 11:15:28 AM »
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Wah wah bahot khoob Kapil ji. Bahot sunder likha hai.
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«Reply #4 on: April 27, 2010, 12:11:36 AM »
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Kapil bhut hi acha likha aapne....
Really really very beautiful!!!!!!!!!!!1
"KAMAL"
Very very "senti"
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Phool to phool hote hai kaha unki koi juban hoti hai
FIr bi haar dil ka raaz voh byan kaar jate hai
**Neel**




pyaar bhare khat na rahe, na mehek bhare phool rahe,
kuch tukde kaagaz k aur kuch sukhey phool hain bas,

kal tak jab wo thi meri, hum har pal khush hi rahe,
kuch uski yaadein hain ab aur kuch zaalim dard hai bas,

pyaar bhara dil tha ye kal, aaj isme kuch bhi na raha,
kuch khule ghaaw hain ab aur kuch harey zakhm hain bas,

ab dil me na mohabbat hai, na pyaar bhare ehsaas rahe,
kuch jhooti kasme hain aur kuch toote vaade hain bas,

khwaab tha ye, jeewan k har pal me saath uska hal pal ho,
kuch tute huye sapne hain ab aur kuch adhure khwaab hain bas,

na zindagi se pyaar hai ab , na jeene ki koi chaah rahi,
kuch bachi hui saanse hain aur kuch bache dhadkan hain bas,

ab humse na koi ghazal bana, na laal koi gulaab raha,
kuch bikhre huye alfaaz hain aur kuch sukhey phool hain bas...
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«Reply #5 on: April 27, 2010, 11:08:07 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriya Madhu ji... agar hamari kavita aapke dil ko chhu jaati hai to isse bada aur kya ho sakta hai hamare liye... bahut bahut shukriya Madhu ji . Aap hamari kavitaon ko bahut jyada izzar dete hain. Main tahe dil se shukriya adaa karta hoon aapka...!!!

Bahut khoob Kapil ji.dil ko chu jaati hai aapke poem hamesha.bahut dard,sachai aur khoobsurat poem pesh kiya aapne.great creation.keep up the good work.excellent Hats off to you! Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause icon_thumleft
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«Reply #6 on: April 27, 2010, 11:09:23 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriya Rajesh ji. Maine to bas ek chhoti si koshish ki hai. Agar aapko pasand aa gaya to hamara likhna safal ho gaya. Shukriya Rajesh ji...!!!

Bahut Khoob likha hai aap ne Kapil
Itni khoobsoorti se dard ki mala ko piroya hai

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«Reply #7 on: April 27, 2010, 12:33:05 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriya Riyaz ji...!!!

Wah wah bahot khoob Kapil ji. Bahot sunder likha hai.
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«Reply #8 on: April 27, 2010, 03:14:34 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriya Shihab ji...!!!

Bahut Khub Klaskar Ji


Yun Hi Mehfil Ki Raunaq Afzaii Karte Rahiye...


Khush Rahiye...


~Shihab~

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«Reply #9 on: April 27, 2010, 10:34:24 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriya Neel ji... thanx a lot for ur sweet compliments... aapne bhi bahut khoob likha hai...

wo gulaab jo kal tak tere pyaar ki nishaani thi,
aaj sukh k mere kisi kitaab k panno me chhipi hui hai...


Kapil bhut hi acha likha aapne....
Really really very beautiful!!!!!!!!!!!1
"KAMAL"
Very very "senti"
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Phool to phool hote hai kaha unki koi juban hoti hai
FIr bi haar dil ka raaz voh byan kaar jate hai
**Neel**


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«Reply #10 on: April 29, 2010, 12:19:24 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriya @kaash ji... humne to bas ek chhoti si koshish ki hai... agar aapko pasand aagayi to hamaara likhna safal ho gaya....!!!

waah bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne Klaskar ji,hamesha ki tarah ashaar behad ache hain  Applause Applause Applause Applause Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #11 on: May 12, 2010, 06:37:37 AM »
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bhut khoob Kapil sahab ek achi paiskash par aapki khidmat mai daad hazir hai qubool keejiye bhut acha kaha hai aapne.


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«Reply #12 on: May 12, 2010, 12:37:23 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriya Aslam ji... maine tahe dil se aapki daad qubool ki... bahut bahut shukriyaa janaab...!!!

bhut khoob Kapil sahab ek achi paiskash par aapki khidmat mai daad hazir hai qubool keejiye bhut acha kaha hai aapne.


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«Reply #13 on: May 12, 2010, 12:43:52 PM »
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bahut khoob kapil ji...
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«Reply #14 on: May 12, 2010, 12:56:57 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriya Geet ji...!!!

bahut khoob kapil ji...
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